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Review of Fear  
Review by Juliet
Rated: E | (3.0)
hi!
to start with im doing this to help both of us to become a better writer
your story was very small
next time make it longer
it was ok
make sure you keep working!
you will get better
just keep trying!
like i said im reviewing this to make us better
good luck
juliet
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Review of Goodbyes  
Review by Juliet
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi ,

Your poem was very emotional, I liked it
Not to Long and not to short just the right size
Good job!
Next time do something happy!
I did see repeated sentences a lot like ( we didn't want to let them go )
But over all I think you did a great job
Keep up the good work

Yours truly,

Juliet😊
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