|Official Dark Dreamscapes Poetry Contest Review
Disclaimer: this review does not in any way suggest the order of winners or who has won the contest. This is a review only. Each entry is reviewed to give constructive feedback.
Ooo I like this one a lot. It’s a nice customized free verse with a hint of rhyme to make it still feel as though it has a definitive form. What’s particularly useful about creating a small amount of structure in a free verse poem like this is that it gives you the freedom to have complete control over the feeling of a poem, the tone, the voice, ans even the pace at which the plot unfolds. You made a great choice with how you provided structure to the poem as well and I think you’re really paid off in this poem because it reads incredibly smoothly and keeps the reader’s attention very well. Great job on this one!
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