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Review by Jason Ronin
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this piece. It reminded me of early Alan Dean Foster.Good pace to it,I actually believed in each character and the universe they inhabited.One niggle I had is the seahorse comment it seemed out of place, would seahorses exist on other worlds, just a thought.
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