What a lovely tribute to a child who means so much to you. Beautifully said. You express an emotion that is so dear to my own heart. I have two little men who are each in different corners of my own heart and they are growing way to fast. I remember their first years and I can only say that this love just gets bigger and better every day. You pictures are also wonderful in their progression. I look forward to working with you in the future. Nice job. Write on. Sweet Honesty
This is a tribute to motherhood. You have said it to perfection. Well done good word flow precise message and made me smile. I love it. Good rhyme factor Nice job. Write on. Sweet Honesty
This was an excellent read. i read it twice I liked it so much. Good flow of words, very thought provoking perfect title and a truism for all to follow. You write well. Write on. Sweet Honesty
This is a beautiful read from someone who really has storytelling ability. The flow is excellent the rhyme is perfect. You have touched on so many of love's characteristics so clearly. Thank you for a beautiful trip. Write on Sweet Honesty
How very quaint. Nice job. Well done. One more thing I want to try to do. You are so very talented with your use of words. I feel unqualified to be reviewing your work. But I did enjoy it and thank you for sharing. Good refrain, good ability to get the message out within defined parameters . Excellent grammar and spelling. Thank you for sharing . Am anxious to try this too. write on. Sweet Honesty
My first experience with a Septolet and clearly you have it down. Good flow food form clear to understand well sated perfect structure. An interesting concept anxious to try my hand at it. Thanks Write on
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This is a lovely piece. You sang the words beautifully and I felt your joy. How nice that you could have this moment and be able to share it with your fellow writers. You did a good job. Thank you, Write on
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This was a very interesting piece for me to read. You told the story well and the form was good. The theme was easy to understand and to make the comparison to life and the things that get in our way and how we deal with them and our own human nature. I think I got your message but if I missed it it was not your fault. I enjoyed the read and hope you continue to write with such imagination. Write on Sweet Honesty
This was a good read and a beautiful tribute to someone who obviously meant so much to you. It is such a hit to the stomach when someone who has been such a part of your youg life passes on. I too lost someone who I was so attached to and know your pain. You have gone through so much and continue to write so well. It just proves that writers are born out of pain. You have become one of my favorites. Write on. Sweet Honesty
Perfect/ Homerun, Love it.. Printed and on my wall. Nicely presented, good choice of something to write about and well said. Good grammar good spelling . Write on. Sweet Honesty
You stole my heart right from the start. My favorite season. Good write. Good descriptions and images. Thank you for a work back to a beautiful time. WRite on Sweet Honesty. (Feel free to stop by I too have done some Seasonal poetry and would love to know what you think of it. )
What a beautiful love story. The word structure was excellent good grammar and spelling. I feel as though I knew Linda. Your descriptions were excellent. A beautiful tribute to a beautiful woman. Best wishes in moving forward without her. You have a gift, write on. Sweet Honesty
This was a nice read. Good alliteration good imagery . Nice use of words. Good flow of words. Was a pleasant description of what the seasons are all about. Thanks WRrte on Sweet Honesty
This is so sad but so beautiful. I know of your loss my friend. I lost half of my heart the day my brother died four years ago. I can so identify with every line. You have touch me.greatly. Beautiful poem, good format, good grammar, good spelling. I will be returning often. Write on Sweet Honesty
This was an unusual read. You have a good imagination and the spelling and grammar were good. The structure was a little uneven. I am one who trys to keep each stanza the same amount of lines. That is just my opinion. It just seems to flow better for me. Nice job. Write on Sweet Honesty
This is tender piece. IT is clear how very much your grandparents meant to you. Your word flow was clear and the story so touching. Spelling and grammar were good. The images brought back to mind so many memories of my own. Yours is the gift of writing. Write on. Sweet Honesty
I love this read. Clear to see you are a pet owner. Your structure is good and it touched this dog owner who teats her dog like the prince of the world. I fully understood every line. We are so lucky. Nice write.
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Your son certainly is blessed in having a mother with the love you have in your heart for him. This is well written good structure good grammar no misspells as far as I can see. I do not think your son need worry about what choices he makes in life as long as your are there to be his sounding board. Your honesty is its own reward.
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The words of encouragement I have received from this group have been very helpful to encourage me to keep writing. So much so that I have just released a manuscript going to print as we speak. Would love to be a part of that. If that is possible please advise.
What a beautiful story. I can so identify with it. I too had an extensive hospital stay and My daughter was one of my very wonderful support staff. She also had some very inspiring words for me. Isn't it wonderful that we both have two caring children. Gotta thank God for that too. Anyway, well written, nice flow no errors I could see. Beautiful job. Write on. Sweet Honesty.
This is truly a beautiful piece. I can see myself referring to it on a regular basis. Thank you for your inspirational words of appreciation and positive affirmation. I too have written my thoughts on a poem of gratitude. You are welcome to review it and advise if you so desire. Thank you. That poem is #1780432 titled Gratitude.
This is a short but nicely thought evoking poem. It is well written and the rhyme is good. I would only suggest possibly eliminating a few words in line four to keep the flow more even. For myself I find that keeping the syllables constant from line to line allows for a smoother tone all the way around. That is my personal choice and it has always worked for me. Good job. Write on Sweet Honesty
I wish that I could give a better review but there is nothing written yet. Perhaps I can offer a little of my life's knowledge to help you with this mission. I admire what you are doing and I applaud your decision I believe you will find it t be a great form of therapy for both you and your dad. He will appreciate your caring enough to express yourself and not give up on him. I have found so much comfort in the writing I do on my past which was so difficult before I put it to paper. Good Luck to you. I know you will succeed and perhaps begin a wonderful career in writing. Write on Sweet Honesty
This is a lovely piece and gave me a good chuckle. Going through this life one has to keep their sense of humor or they will not get very far. It is apparent that you have done just that. Your quick wit and structure work well together. People like us never get old. We get wise we get cranky but never get old that is for the other folks. You have a good gift for writing stay with it. Feel free to stop by and read my piece Time Item# 1764895 Would love your review. Write on Sweet Honesty
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