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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well this is interesting Yoshi King. It has potential to be a great fic if you take the time to check each chapter for spelling errors or continuity errors. I look forward to seeing it again once it has around 400 chapters. Thanks again for writing such an intriguing concept, keep writing and preparing works with such innovative themes. And maybe watch out for repetition (innovative, intriguing, interesting).
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Interesting idea. It makes for interesting reading. My sole suggestion is that you need a 5th option at the opening chapter. Otherwise this is a very reasonable concept. So let's review on the basis of Jim, the one I read. I like the transformation and the way it was well described. It doesn't look like you got a lot of contributions. I will talk to some of my fellow gender bending enthusiasts about that. Thanks again and keep writing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting and short piece, Sum1. I can't say that it was fantastic, it had some, thankfully little rhyming. It had repetition which lowers the overall seriousness of the poem. But that appears with the theme of love, desire, longing and devotion. It was a simple, pleasant work that focused on the concepts of time and sleep in addition to the aforementioned themes. I look forward to reading more recent pieces. Well done, keep writing,


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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Sorry Kyle. This was well written for the most part. But sadly there was a lot of issues with character identification. Who is Kyle? Why is Layle first barely capable of Fire of Colour, then in the next able to master the highly difficult silver fire? I like how you established the evil of the Dark Lord, how he was the master of shadows and the way you had Layle show his courage to avenge his beloved Ivy. I suggest that you re-edit and clarify this story. I know there is a word limit, but otherwise it is hard to follow. Well done, keep going


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Review of I'm Still Me  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Aspergers Syndrome, the aptly mentioned life sentence, condemns people to a life of confusion, inability to fully follow others or make meaningful relationships after the age of 18. This is a great piece of work, Big Bad Wolf. Thank you so much for having the courage to confess to being an "Aspie"! Many others either revel in being one or express severe shame and pretend not to have that crippling, horrible condition. Hope you get published, thanks again for your strength.


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Review of Anna's Jealousy  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is an interesting story. It has lot of options and threads. The one where Anna moves on and meets someone new makes me feel good. I like the original idea that this concept provides to us. Anna makes a very engaging character with an interest personality. I like the thread where she decides to recommit to an old friendship again. Thanks again for offering it to us SoapySuds! Well written and look forward to more!
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Review of Edge  
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Rated: E
Well now....this is another blast from the past that deserved another bump into the feature. The prose, the choice of description, the desire of all of us to fight against the powerful grip of despair, death and destruction. Three beasts who are all the same. I am very impressed about what you have written and thus if I could grant you 4.5 stars. I cannot think what I could add to this fine piece. Thank you and keep writing, Go TEAM PAT!! Keep our spot!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
An excellent poll. Interesting the top 3 are all the reasons that I contribute here. Though I don't know how long I will be able to do this. Cubby, you are a very clever person to have developed such a fine poll for all of us to enjoy. I very much look forward to reviewing other works of yours. Thanks for this contribution and I wish you all the best in all of your endeavors! Please keep writing!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
destroyer, i haven't read much but this seems like a reasonable piece of work. Just edit some of the chapters a little. Nice concept, similar to Random TG Thoughts.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
There is nothing like some wicked, cruel, bullying toerag who rules with his fists being brought down to size, by waking up as a tiny girl. Even better if he is also a womaniser just like A Mile in Her Thongs 2 by Wanderer. The classic magical karma whether by hex, object, chemical or technology appeals to those who feel slighted or desire genuine justice. Watching the bullying toerag squirm and hopefully learn is the best part. Love this poll.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This may be second only to God's Telephone amongst the works I have read. I am left unable to do much to respond. I tried to follow your exercise, but at present found the exercise far too daunting. I look forward to undertake it at a later date. So what can I say about this work that takes a mental image and puts it to life? Well my journey isn't concluded nor I suspect is mysticmuse. Nevertheless love the way you bring into physical creation, mental workings. Top Notch!


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Review of Sisterhood  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I wanted to review one of your work, purple/purpleprincess as soon as I found the correct one. To my delight, I uncovered this wonderful short story of yours. It was so well written, I was almost unaware that the person undergoing this experience was female (I am hoping that you never felt this isolated). What a touching tale, that honestly I can think of nothing to critique. Well written and keep writing these beautiful works!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Kathie, that was incredible well written and suspenseful! I kept waiting for the rug to be pulled out from Beth's feet, but it never came. Brian proved to be every inch the hero that people expect, although it has only been 2 years that they have been together. That Ray sounds like an awesome douchebag! That someone could trash both a profession and a name in such an awful way is sad. I also thought Lonnie was an awesome friend, despite his obvious longing for Beth that would always be unrequited. Top notch, well done! 4.5 stars and keep contributing your writing to this site! It's needed!


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Review of Potter Poll  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
An excellent poll to post on this site! Because the chief villain is a murderous Hitler style bigoted serial murderer (Lord Voldemort/Tom Marvolo Riddle) who considers those born to magical families superior to everyone else, I think if anything it shows the reverse. That Harry Potter is anti-witchcraft as even the neutral characters (Cornelius Fudge and Rufus Scrimgeour are wicked, coldhearted wizards). Thanks for the opportunity to vent my feelings on the matter!
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Review of Her Majesty  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A nice story indeed! It just needs more entries to make this story more interesting!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow that was....succinct! Its my first time reviewing a moderator and I am suitably impressed by the response to this challenge. It was quite brief, but it managed to convey feelings that we all feel towards this site. I also am impressed by the design of your avatar. So I think a 4 star is a suitable rating for this nice little poem. Keep writing and contributing to this site, sunnystarr. I look forward to reading more.


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Review of your my sister  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
One of the difference between a real great interactive story and a good concept is the opening chapter. This one is both too short and has poor grammar. This story is in great need of an edit. I always feel bad when I have to give a review that is less positive than negative. But an 8 year old girl who turns her brother into a girl/woman should have more than just has a ray. Where did she get it? Did one of her parents leave it behind? Is Sarah supremely gifted? Or a supernatural being? Did someone give it to her? And her motivation; while obviously weak if it was given to her or if she is supernatural; should be strong if she is supremely gifted. Sorry Shadow
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Another wonderful justice story. I love watching some self-centered central character get a bit of well earned justice! Please provide us with more! Thanks again for Stealing from a Sorcerer, Christy_D!
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Review of RealityShift.net  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This deserves a 17/20. A fine story with the potential to go further. I look forward to reading more from your portfolio. Go D-Mented-One, that was fantastic.
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Review of Wishing Stone  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice thread. Full of vigour and pep. An examination both in life and in the lives of loved ones. I think this is a great thread. Keep going and don't forget to edit!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I wanted to give you a higher rating. I truly did. But the threads just don't have much interest. Part of getting a good review from me for an interactive is attracting interest. Sadly, while the first thread is interesting, the quantum leap one is not. Nice try, please keep writing!
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In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This isn't a bad thread. It has a lot of potential. I just think that you might need to make some more additions to challenge others. Nevertheless not bad, keep writing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That was beautiful! There really isn't any else that needs to be said!


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In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a great crossdressing story. Top notch effort! I am not big on cross-dressing, so I made my contribution lesbian genderbending. But still excellent idea!
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Review of I Don't Think So  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love all your work, Wanderer! So consider this 4.5 stars something for all of them!
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