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Review by safire_diaz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I like the anatomical depiction, and I also like how the story actually goes into detail about human biology! We could use some more variety of characters, more settings in the modern world and more complex details though? Good job on the opening chapter
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Er, that poor mother... and her daughter is evil. Suspenseful and twisted, I quite like the cliffhanger
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