Anish's (sah_anish) Reviews

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Review of Forgotten colors  

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi there

Your piece sounds very promising. Beautiful and creepy, all at the same time. This is a genre that really appeals to me, and i'd love to read the rest of the content. Just one thing. I can't totally place the title "Forgotten colors" in context of the script. I'd have liked something like "Dreaded colors". Maybe its just me. But all in all, good work! Good luck!


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Review of The hands of my father  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings!
Hey that was quite amazing.What cool descriptions!The poems not only pulls in the reader but also connects to the reader almost instantly.And then it sails along very smoothly in a perfect rhythm.All in all,a gr8 job!It was a pleasure to review your work!Please keep sharing.