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Review of Forgotten colors  
Review by Anish
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi there

Your piece sounds very promising. Beautiful and creepy, all at the same time. This is a genre that really appeals to me, and i'd love to read the rest of the content. Just one thing. I can't totally place the title "Forgotten colors" in context of the script. I'd have liked something like "Dreaded colors". Maybe its just me. But all in all, good work! Good luck!


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Review of SLOW DOWN  
Review by Anish
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello

I just went through your poem, and i liked it a lot. Every now and then, simple words used in it strike a chord.
Like for instance, "These paths are going to last"
You have used the rhyming very effectively too
I liked these lines the most:

Slow down for those who can’t move;
Help them to, their pain, remove.

Slow down, look back for a while;
Maybe you just missed a smile.

All in all, a great read!
As for suggestions/improvements, i really can't think of any.
I like it just the way it is.
Thanks for sharing your work






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Review of Going Home  
Review by Anish
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings!
Your piece was simply awesome.Simple and beautiful.The parallel narration about Clarence and Jen was a high point.The descriptions were vivid.The climax was a gem.Really good work!Please keep sharing.
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Review by Anish
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings!
Hey that was quite amazing.What cool descriptions!The poems not only pulls in the reader but also connects to the reader almost instantly.And then it sails along very smoothly in a perfect rhythm.All in all,a gr8 job!It was a pleasure to review your work!Please keep sharing.
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