Intense situation! As always, your writing grabs my attention right away. I think this plot really works because of how well you've paced the story. You always leave me wanting to know what happens next.
Well written but really sad, because I believe this happens to a lot of seniors. It's not something I'm not looking forward to. The only consolation is that I'm still single, so I won't have to go through my last years missing a loved one.
Although it made me sad, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing you talent.
I loved reading this. There wasn't a dull moment and I was totally transported to a new world. It was nice to escape the normal, sometimes boring, routine of my day. This would make a great pilot for a new TV series that I believe would be very successful, as long as it was you writing the episodes.
What an amazing story!!!! Your imagination and story telling is exceptional. I found no grammar or spelling errors. My only suggestion is to make the font bigger so it's easier to read. Thank you so much for sharing your gift. I will definitely be reading more of your stories.
Very well written. I get just as frustrated as Scrooge did. LOL!
I imagined I was there in the room with him. Encouraging him to keep trying and then feeling so bad for him when it didn't work out the way he wanted it to.
Great Story!!! Your imagination is incredible! After reading two of your stories, I've come to the conclusion that I suck as a writer...LOL. but that's ok because I get more joy out of reading than I do writing. I'll still write thing in my blog, and hopefully, one day, I'll get an idea for another story.
Your writing is so smooth and it flows so well. Thank you again for sharing your gift!
You put a lot of thought into this and it shows. I totally agree that the government needs to be reformed. It would be nice to have those in charge actually work for the people and not themselves or corporations. Too bad Howie and Julie aren't real. They remind me a little bit of Neo and Trinity.
I really enjoyed reading this. You're a very talented writer and I thank you for sharing gift.
I knew she had something to do with it!!! It's always the wife killing the husband or the husband killing the wife. Makes me glad that I'm still single...LOL
This is a well written story. It grabbed my attention right away and held it to the end. Great Job!!!
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