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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
Public Reviews
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Review of Gettin' Older  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Gettin' Older - how cute and I can relate (I am 67). Love the pic as well. You have chosen your words well. It gives a look at ourselves, with humor but still a bit of dignity. I hope this poem is a "win" but it will be a win for those of us who get to enjoy.

Sincerely,

Seabreeze

p.s. I appreciate you sending back my gps, but please keep these as you so truly deserve them.
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Review of Momento  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice poem. I like the words selected, especially "..memories, bitter-sweet, of love's heat, still warm even from the past. Oh I can drug up some heated thoughts from your words quoted.

I wish you the best in your contest entry.

Seabreeze
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Review of Wisdom  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love your poem on Wisdom. I like how each line of the stanza starts and the selection of words shows your wisdom acquired. Is wisdom hope, fear and regret? I believe it does include hope, and with wisdom maybe we learn to fear less and, for me, there is some regret of the past. But, regret, I believe, is healthy. Hopefully we will not repeat the same mistakes.

Great post,
Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I get older, I have my days, and I can understand the words placed here. Lost my husband to cancer a few years ago and it was all I could do to watch him going through pain. The words ring true to the pain that accompany the aging and the sick.

Great writing,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent, Yellow Rose. All the thoughtful words are there. You have applied those words well. I am glad I stopped by to read your thank you letter.

Seabreeze
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Review of My Mother's House  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, this says a lot about a dark situation. I hope it does not still linger. It has been said well and flows well. Words chosen have well been selected to get your message across.

Best to you my fellow writing friend.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ok, paying for #17 - heart.


Name: Seabreeze

Text: Let your love flow through your words.

bid was 4,000


500 to our wonderful monitor, Princess Zelda

THANK YOU!

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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh please save it. I am just getting comfortable with it and, I do believe, it serves a purpose. Need more votes? I believe more pauses are needed in most of the speech I hear and probably most of the written dialogue. The problem is most people don't write letters anymore. It seems were are in a world of "short cuts". Language has been abbreviated all most to the point of oblivion.

Anyways, cool thread.

Seabreeze

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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this; what a cute story and I love the way you have put it to rhyme. This is a wonderful story also to help children understand about adoption. I have two granddaughers (5, 3 year old) - they will love this.

Thanks for your creations.

Seabreeze
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Review of Follow His Heart  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent written story with drama, suspense and romance. I like it. Very good short.

Thanks for the entertainment,

Seabreeze
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Review of Stormy Mind  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
How I do like your writing - end to see you are so young. Congrats on such excellent work. I am glad to see such talent here at writing.com. You are doing the right thing by being here and writing.

Best to you and all that you do.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Do you give clues?

I like the flow of the words but I am at a loss....but that is just me. If I were to guess...death plays a big part and mental illness? No offense intended.

Enjoyed my read,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I just wanted to send you gps to use in your contest.

The best to you in all you do,

Seabreeze
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Review of I Stumbled  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice writing. It is always interesting to read how others got involved in writing. Your story brings, to surface, some good thoughts and some not so good. I come with so similar baggage but, I also find that Writing,com has pull a lot out of me that I didn't even know I had.

I want to say congrats on winning first place in "Contest of Firsts". I am sure I will see more of your creations as time goes on.

The best to you in your continued success.

Seabreeze
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Review of May Angels Watch  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice and I can see why you are writing and publishing. I came over from your other posting from a contest you won.

I wanted to say congrats on the contest and now I must say congrats in how you have turn around your life and your health. Bless you.

Best to you in all that you do.

Seabreeze
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Review of Chess Pieces  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well this took my heart. I says a lot about a feeling I have right now for a certain guy. I especially like the title, which is what brought me to read it. I like the way you cleverly brought the two together...very nicely done.

Also, let me say welcome newbie. I will be back to see more of your creations.

Thanks for the entertainment,

Seabreeze
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Review of Without Time  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice short form poem and I can see why you were 1st place winner. Great job.

Seabreeze
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Review of Ladi  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great writing but so sorry for your loss. You do have a talent and I wish you the best in all that you do.

I was reminded of my childhood. My folks built a house on 8 acres and we had a cow, pigs, dogs, cat and I had a pet goat. Doesn't sound like much but he was special. I would go out to the corral and he would great me. I would run one end of the corral and he would run that direction. It was crazy. I didn't even know I had a pet until I noticed his patterns. However, one day when coming home from school, my mom told me that my pet goat got out and eat something poisonous that killed him. It really destroyed for week. I also lost a dog to a car hitting him. There is no doubt that we love our pets and it is very hard when they leave us.

I will be back to read some more of your creations.

Seabreeze

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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is very cute and I enjoyed reading it. I think John Wayne, himself, would have loved it.

Seabreeze
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Review of Is It Worth It?  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is an excellent analogy of what our lives are like and how better to say, "yes it is worth it".

You are captured all the feelings and displayed it well it your lines. I so have enjoyed reading it. I am so glad I was able to read this nice piece of work.

Seabreeze

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Review of Smile  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice acrostic for the word smile. I could see this with a happy face just above it. It could be a cute cover for a book of poems for children.

I light magic in its giving as, I believe, smiles are like that. When we think about it, if someone smiles at you it is hard not to return one back.

Thanks,

Seabreeze
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Review of A Clown  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Always loved clowns. This is very nice. It describes the clown as we kids have all known of them. The smile, the tear, the sad face and when they must go, it is sad just like when the circus leaves town.

I enjoyed reading,

Seabreeze
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Review of VETERANS GROUP  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ninety members - wonderful! I hope it is ok that I joined your group. I am not a veteran but highly supportive of all who have served.

Thank you for the invite.

Seabreeze

p.s. please contribute to the total group gps. (700)
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very cute and so much like today. I hope there were lots of GPs.

It was fun,

Seabreeze
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Review of ODE TO WDC  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oldwarrior, I like your Ode. My favorite line or lines:

Sunlight, less bright, verging on the edge of night.
Writing.com is the only place, the greatest writing site.

I with you on that. Glad to see you came back.

Seabreeze
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