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893 Public Reviews Given
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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
Public Reviews
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Review of An Apology  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, how do we mend a broken heart? I like the way your have written "An Apology". It is simple, but with words that say you are reaching in the heart. I have written apologies, two in fact, and it is very hard to do. However, harder to say, I believe, than write! Great job - it flows well.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Too cute for words! Looks great, flows well and I was interested all the way.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent! It kind of gave me the creeps. I think it is because the wind is blowing outside right now. I anticipated the ending - wish I hadn't. But it was fun. Nice writing.
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Review of Broken  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here I am again, finding that I love your creations. I love your "Broken". I hope you will take time and go over and see my "Broken". You do great work. Sometimes it takes sorrow for the words to flow.
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Review of The Sky  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome newbie....very nice for boredom!

I live in Utah and today we had a dusting of snow, sun out, behind clouds.....you made me think of all the beauty in the skys. Love it!
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your Lightening in a Bottle was very helpful in setting the character's ever being. I am very green at writing and new to characterization. It is amazing how much needs to go into its animation; to breath life into you stick figure sort of speak. But, if someone says John Wayne, the first thing I think of is his walk. Physical traits do make for an interesting character.

As a newbie, I wonder how does one keep track of all that each of their characters possess? Thank goodness for computers. I can't imagine writing a novel on a typewriter, but I know some of the best has come from them.

I like your complete piece and the challenge you have closed with. These short exercises can really stimulate the mind and it is surprising what jumps out.

Excellent, thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review of The Artist  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like The Artist. I relate to this. I dabble in drawing, watercolors and writing. You do feel good when you have completed something. I could see the colors as you mentioned them and almost feel the clay as you turned out his creation.

Thanks for sharing, great work.

Seabreeze
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Review of The Rose  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This reading gave me chills. How beautiful you have captured the essences of the writings in the book. I am there with you. You have done quite well with the descriptions....you must be a professional writer? I am a newbie....oh to write and get my thoughts down like you. I will need to read more of your prose - to take from you, if I may, like a sponge, your experience of the use of the language. Thank you for your sharing,

Seabreeze
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Review of A Mother  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Very nice tribute. Sounds like an assume mom. Nice flow and selection of words.
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Review of Longing  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Such a wonderful, tender, intense love story and scene. It hit hard and brought back memories...wonderful memories.

I noticed at least one spelling error, 10 minuets is misspelled; probably a typo. Should be minutes. However, do check your punctuation. Punctuation goes inside the quotes as the whole sentence is being quoted. With question marks, depends on the content of the sentence. I had to be corrected on this myself.

You have such a talent for words and story telling and this is very good.

Best to you,

Seabreeze
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Review of LIFE GOES AROUND  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely put. Life goes in circles some times. I like how you arranged your words to make your point. Excellent.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Yes, I went out for a special coffee today. Love my coffee and your poem. As some might say, it is my vice! My favorite words are your lines of,

"It's warm on a cold morning
Soothing as the sun does rise
Calming as the moon crests
Comforting when the cloud cries"

Funny thing, when I hold a fresh cup, I like to hold it up to my face and let it steam up to my nose. It serves another purpose...opens up the nasal passages! I am a little crazy.

Seabreeze
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Review of Summer Rain  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply beautiful! Would love to see those mountains. Briefly, you have taken me there.

Seabreeze
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Review of If you'll have me  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am here again. Loving your words and their arrangements. You have a talent with words, especially romantic words. Have fun with the program here...best to you.

Seabreeze
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Review of Silent Tears  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so wonderful, I was fighting back tears. It is beautiful and it touches my heart. I guess it is where I am, in my life, right now that it touches. I lost my husband 2010 to cancer. I have reunited with a friend, I think a lot of but not sure he notices. Thank you,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, I was reminiscing along with you. You have stated your thoughts well. I only noticed a couple of small errors:
fourth paragraph - speaking in past tense - but in the second sentence you say, "We have horses..."

Paragraph six, mother in law Emily - I believe this would have hyphens, as mother-in-law, Emily and "," after law to separate from Emily. I am a newbie so that is all I see.

I recently tried my luck at a short story, but was not prepared and didn't watch my punctuation, especially in dialogue. But I love this type of story.....it is from the heart. Great job, best of luck,

Seabreeze
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Review of MY POETRY BOOK  
for entry " MASK" 
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Mask. I admit I have worn one more than once. Excellent description of how we appear to others and to ourselves. As a child, young adult, wife, mom, employee, etc., we all wear various hats - but many times we allow them to become distorted and the mask takes over. Thanks for writing this piece. I am a newbie and learning. I will have to look up the 7-7-7-7 format?

Seabreeze
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Review of In-Between Time  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In-Between Time takes me back to the first time my husband said it was lung cancer. And then again, when he had the surgery, and again, when he was given six months to live. It seems like we are always between something. You said it so well. Your arrangement with your lines is refreshing to the eyes as well. I am glad I came by to read your work.
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Review of The Cave  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! It is well written and has an ending so different. It is short and to the point. Great job. I will be looking for more.
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Review of The Society  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very interesting and says it all. Do you have music that goes with it? Just curious? I love material that tells how our hearts are feeling...I feel it in your song.
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Review of Father of Sin  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh, to be able to write like this some day! Your words are so well selected for the matter at hand. I cannot say anything else, other than it is beautiful to read. I am a newbie and just getting into writing. Sometimes I struggle to find the appropriate words. You made me feel I was there watching Judas, just like a well performed play.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a wonderful poem. I believe I love it because I can relate to it. Being a victim of abuse, sometimes we act out at times that we don't intend to do. It is kind of like, if I my quote from Romans 7:15, "For what I am doing, I do not understand. For what I will to do, that I do not practice; but what I hate, that I do."

In any regard, your poem speaks to me and that is a compliment.

Seabreeze
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Review of Books are Great  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could not agree more. Love books and love your poem. It sounds like it could be a song. Your doing very well and probably no longer considered a newbie. I will be back to read more.
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Review of "Crossing Over"  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This one gave me chills.....it is so beautiful. My heart goes out to you. God is good though. We can heal our hearts by using the gift of writing. And, we can remember the joy they brought us.

You write very well and you have good flow and selection of words. I am glad I could meet you - even though it is by poem.

Seabreeze
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Review of The Climb  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
So touching to me, Kings. Very nice writing. I lost my husband 2010 to lung cancer.......it is such an invader of our loved ones and of us. Thanks again for sharing.
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