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893 Public Reviews Given
894 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
Public Reviews
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Review of THE BROOK  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Beautiful. I poem that allows the reader to take a mini vacation. I could visualize each place as I read the lines. Thanks so much.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This has a lot going for it. I like it rhyme. It is a little to negative, especially for such a young person writing it. Iam glad you said a doll, I won't be as concerned. Because you have talent, and you are just fine as you have been created. More writing please. Best wishes to you.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow, I believe we all at some point can relate to this poem. Love your style, select of word so appropriate.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello fellow writer. Love your poem and appreciate how you set it up showing the format and style. I have not tried this particular style but have tried other. The rhythm is very intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Omg, I really like this story even though I was afraid he would not wake up. Your detail to describing the lighthouse, Hugo and Hugh's thought were such that it took me there....great writing.
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Review of E-asy  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
How wonderful is this! I will have to try it. Contests can be so much fun and amazing what one can come up with. I love it!

Seabreeze
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Review of Starcrossed  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
How true your poem speaks! We are seeing a lot of the decline of innocence; hard for me to comprehend it all. I was born in 1945...the 50s, as a child, well, we will never see that wonderful time period again. It was a carefree time for children. I guess I should be thankful that I was born in that era (believe me, I am) and not earlier during the war.

Excellent writing; it moves me.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
So adorable! This would be great in a collection book of similar stories for the young, especially young girls.

I love that it tells of grandma; I miss mine (only new one on my mother's side). She was special and took an interest in my schooling and even came to my eight grade graduation. She bought my dress and shoes. I am 75 now, but that is so vivid in my mind.

Thanks for taking me now memory lane.

Lovely,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is amazing; well done! I love your choices of words and how affective you have made them become. I found myself answering the questions because it is such a "thought provoking" poem.
You have a great gift for writing and expressing your feelings.

Thanks for writing this one,

Seabreeze
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Review of The Flower I Was.  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love flowers and you have given the flower a new life. It would be fun to know what a flower was thinking if it could. I am so happy the good Lord created such beauty...colors, fragrances, shapes and textures. Beautiful poem.
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Review of Why  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Why indeed! I also ask similar questions but the more I study our Father's word the more I am content to wait for some answers that will not come till He does.

I like especially: Why do we put " In God we trust"on our money then when God tries to speak to us we get funny... I believe because man thinks he understand all, but really understand very little. He uses what works....especially for gain.

Let me welcome you to this site as I see you are a newbie. Hope your stay is fruitful and enjoyable.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very pretty and nice tribute to the Psalms 150 I love the Psalms..love birds and nature so this was lovely to read.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I do like your story, The Sidworuld In fact, I am hoping you have more that is posted (have not looked at your site). I am reviewing via Read and Review.

I like how the story eases into itself. There is an immediate mystique about it which draws you in.

It is well written, I saw no apparent flows in grammatical concerns or typos...very professional.

I see you are a newbie...so I welcome you and hope you enjoy your journey here!

Great piece....hoping for more.

Seabreeze

p.s. I you get this twice, sorry, having trouble sending my review.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really liked your What's In The Trunk story. It was fun getting into. It kept me in suspense and I was excited to see where it was going. I thought it was different, fresh...nothing I had read before and would like to have it expanded someway.

Nice work,

Seabreeze
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Review of Bubbles Bursting  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, I love your Bubbles Bursting!

You had my focus and all along I was remembering how such a bath could be so relaxing.

I was even having flash backs of music, bubbles and my choice, a glass of wine.

AND THEN, along came the surprise. I laughed....reminiscing how it can be to have a

lively pet...one who would steal the show.

Cute poem, cute story.

Seabreeze
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Review of Feeling of Love  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yes, I agree it has its ups and downs and goes around and around.

A short but very pertinent. This thing called love...truly a feeling - running cold and hot, running good and bad.

Yes, rather insane and many times not returned.

You have pointed out many aspects of this thing we call Love.

Very nice,

Seabreeze
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Review of Dreams  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very interesting writing style. I love Dreams. Keep writing. I will be back to read more. Thanks for reading my poem Child.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written. And, yes, God is real for me as well. I don't think I could be as up beat, looking forward day to day if it were not for my Lord. Times are very stressed, complicated, worry some and from day to day we cannot possibly know what will occur next.

I admit, I pray more and more now than ever. I pray for my family, friends, and leaders across our country.

The virus does not scare me as much as mankind! The turmoil we are seeing in our country, the riots, people hurting/killing each other, is an ugly plague. I am 74 and never was taught to hate anyone because of their color and to this day I still cannot understand it all. We are all God's children, we are one family...but, I believe that those who hate others cannot possibly love God. I hope, if anything can come out of all this, people will come to know the Lord.

Your writing provokes thought and this is good. I say, we must pray now and continuously for the Father to come; it is our only hope.

Seabreeze
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Review of My Wishful Hope  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is excellent. I like that it is like a story but still has the flare of a poem! It has good rhythm and the words tell a story of love, caring and wanting to share with the world.

Very nice,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice piece! Lots of thought went into your writing and it gets one thinking about friendship. It is good for all of us to review and know what we are willing to put on the line when its comes to friendship. We need to know what we are willing to do for a friend and be ready to take the steps.

Great writing,

Seabreeze
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Review of Wire Walker  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, cool story. Makes me want to ask....any truth to the story...someone in the family even been in the circus?

In any case, I was with him all the way. Brought back memories of going to the circus.

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, I agree one hundred percent. Excellent poem and subject matter. I am so glad he is out of the House! Thanks for the entertainment!

Seabreeze
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Review of Home  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. Thomas Wolfe said "You Can't Go Home Again". I say, thanks to our memories, we can if we want. I detect some sadness but I believe we grow from it and that is a good thing.

Love your poem...keep writing,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi newbie. I love this poem and could visualize the beauty you must have seen on your trip.

I like how you structured your lines, the balance I feel as I read.

Once again, welcome. Keep up the excellent writing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nicely written poem for Halloween. I reminisce to the delights of the night; love the carving of pumpkins and of the laughter of children coming and going. Thanks you for the treat!

Seabreeze
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