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Review of Come back to me  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Review 5 of 5!(Already?? *Cry*)

Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly.

Flow & Format:
The free verse form worked well with your words to keep the flow smooth from beginning to end. The lack of punctuation, again, did not hinder the flow! *Delight*

Emotion & Imagery:
Not only did you relay your feelings clearly, but I found this touching poem easy to relate to my own life, which made a million and one memories and feels flood my brain and heart. The imagery is definitely dependent on the reader, but that makes it all the more easy to feel. (Is it bad to say I didn't picture my husband? lol. My "ex" had one green eye and one blue one. It's hard not to think about him!)

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestions pop into my head.

Overall:
This is a touching, soul-bearing poem that really made me sit and reflect at the end. I love it!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Lavender Blue  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Review 3 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description definitely fit this perfectly.

Flow & Format:
The free verse form worked well to keep the flow smooth from beginning to end.

Emotion & Imagery:
This had a laid-back, yet wanting feel to it which came through clearly. The imagery was simple: I envisioned a pair of eyes all the way through.

Typos & Suggestions:
Stanza six: bout[']
         *Bullet*Since the 'a' is missing from the beginning of the word, the apostrophe should be in its place instead of at the end.

Stanza Seven: blues[;] I
         *Bullet*I think that a semi-colon here would help to separate the two thoughts here while still having them linked together.

Throughout: In the title and in the first line, you say 'blue' whereas it's 'blues' everywhere else. It could be because of my feeling that this is about eyes, but it was just something I noticed. *Wink*

Overall:
I really enjoyed this poem. It is well-written, easy to follow and understand, and easy to relate to --though someone may be seeing a different color. lol. *Bigsmile*

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Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this item perfectly!

Idea & Storyline:
(Sorry... I really need to make an article format...) The idea behind this is wonderful! So many just think of Thanksgiving as a celebration of unity of the pilgrims and Indians, that it is nice to see that someone realizes how much more this holiday symbolizes.

Dialog & Narrative:
This was written in such a way that the reader can easy follow, understand, and accept each factual sentence and learn from your words!

Emotion & Imagery:
I love that this article may stir the reader's emotions, but is not clouded by emotion. You did a wonderful job of sticking to the facts and not letting your own opinions or feelings cloud your point. The imagery is, well... up to the reader; He/she will either be seeing that classical 'first Thanksgiving' or memories of their own Thanksgivings will be flashing before their mind's eye. Wonderful!

Typos & Suggestions:
Paragraph Two: planet [Earth]
         *Bullet*Since this names a specific planet, I think that it should be capitalized...?

Overall:
This is well-written and informative! It is clear that you are a knowledgeable woman and also that you feel credit should be given where credit is due --or, rather, not given where it is not due. *Wink* While the ending felt a bit abrupt, I still think that this is perfect! How can anything that teaches such a lesson not be??

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this story perfectly.

Idea & Storyline:
I love the build-up! You did a wonderful job of making the reader wonder about what was going on! I didn't see the end coming... *Pthb*

Dialog & Narrative:
The narrative is well-written and is easy to follow and understand. The dialogue is believable and well-suited to the characters situations; It works very well with the narrative to enhance the story.

Emotion & Imagery:
Did I mention the 'What the...?' feeling from the build-up... lol. *Blush* The emotion major emotion was confusion and curiosity, but the ending was heartwarming and sweet! The simple [and creative] imagery was easy to envision throughout.

Typos & Suggestions:
Paragraph Eight: boy [Skip].
         *Bullet*To me, this felt a little redundant. I think that removing the name from this sentence would improve the flow here.

Overall:
This is a fun, lighthearted read with a sweet ending! It is well-written and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Night Terrors  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Review 5 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly!

Flow & Format:
The flow was smooth from beginning to end, though I did feel a bump here and there on my first read --on the second and third, though, I couldn't find them again. *Blush*

Emotion & Imagery:
The imagery is amazing which adds to the scary feeling of your words. I have suffered from night terrors for years and I think that you really hit the nail on the head here!

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos and the only suggestion that same to mind is to do a quick read-through out loud to see if you find any bumps in the flow. *Blush*

Overall:
This is creepy, well-written, and very realistic. I think you did a great job of relaying what it is like to go through a night terror.

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of A Bit About Me  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a wonderful introduction to a beautiful woman and outstanding role model! Not only does this offer a bit of information about the woman behind the name, but it also gives the reader some beautiful advice for life! Your mottoes are all ones that I hope to carry with me throughout each day of my life.

You are inspiration, Sherri, and there's no wonder as to why!

(By the way, there's a stray comma after "CHASING DREAMS"[,]) *Wink*

Well-written and easy to understand, I love that you took the time to give your readers a glimpse into who you are!
*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
P.S. My thousandth review! lol! Woo! Finally!
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Review of The Gift  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is beautiful! Of course, I want to say that punctuation would make it better.. *Wink* ...C'mon, at least a period at the end?? *Pthb*

This is very well-written! I am amazed by home much you manage to say in so few words! This is a powerful declaration of love that made my heart smile!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review 4 of 5

Title & Description:
Perfect and perfect!

Idea & Storyline:
If this is a memory, it's... a lovely tribute to Sheila. If it's a creation, it's definitely very creative!

Dialogue & Narrative:
This is well-written and everything flows smoothly, as well as being easy to follow and understand!

Emotion & Imagery:
Frustration, laughs, and a touch of sadness all came through your words clearly. The simple imagery made everything VERY easy to envision!

Typos & Suggestions:
Paragraph Five: her lap[,] while
         *Bullet*This comma felt a little out of place to me...

Overall:
This had me smiling from beginning to end --and then you put a few tears in my eyes, but they were quickly replaced with a laugh that woke my poor dog! *Laugh* He was annoying me anyway --running in his sleep! How dare he? lol.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Review 3 of 5!

Title & Description:
Title and description both fit this poem perfectly!

Flow & Format:
The ABCB rhyme scheme worked very well with your words to keep the flow smooth from beginning to end.

Emotion & Imagery:
Again, both were clear and vivid! Anticipation filled my heart and my lips were smiling from beginning to end! A million memories flooded into my head! This is incredibly realistic and the innocence and happiness jumped right out of your words!

Typos & Suggestions:
In Stanza Five, I felt a little 'hiccup' in the flow at the end. The last line just felt a little short, I think...

Overall:
This is a fun, lighthearted poem that is well-written and a joy to read! Thank you for the smiles!!!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Life Began  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review 2 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly!

Flow & Format:
The free verse form worked wonderfully with your words to keep everything flowing smoothly from beginning to end! The flow of this poem was actually so well done that it moved along as rhythmically as though it had rhymes!

Emotion & Imagery:
The emotion and imagery are both clear and vivid! The love, admiration, happiness, and joy throughout this poem tugged at my heartstrings, bringing tears to my eyes! Beautiful!

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestions come to mind.

Overall:
This is a beautifully written tribute to your child. It warmed my heart from the beginning to the end.

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of The Window  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this piece perfectly.

Idea & Storyline:
Let me say now that I hope this is not true! ((HUGS)) The storyline of this monologue is based upon an all too common reality for many women/people, really, in our world. I also think, however, that this is easy to relate to for anyone --maybe not the specifics, but I think that we have all felt like this.

Dialog & Narrative:
This is well-written and easy to follow and understand. The first-person POV made this easy to fall into and the small bits of dialogue worked wonderfully to enhance the story!

Emotion & Imagery:
While reading this, it is simple to feel for the narrator. Sadness and compassion filled my heart --along with a touch of frustration at the situation! *Blush* I think that, because the specifics could be removed to make this easy to relate to, any reader will be able to feel and see everything, even if not exactly as it is written.

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestions pop into my head.

Overall:
This is touching and well-written. It really tugged at my heartstrings, as well as making me reflect upon my own marriage, life, and feelings. Beautifully done!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Just a Farmer  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly.

Flow & Format:
You stuck wonderfully to the eight-syllable line count and the ABAB rhyme scheme kept everything flowing smoothly and rhythmically from beginning to end in an upbeat way. *Smile*

Emotion & Imagery:
Frustration came through clearly, though the upbeat flow kept it more lighthearted, so that the sad, frustrating feeling did not overwhelm the feel of the words. As for the imagery, it may change from one reader to the next, but everything is easy to see.

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos.

In line two of the last stanza, my mind wanted a comma after 'farmer'. I don't know, but I thought I should mention it.

Overall:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and hope that it is not true! *Shock* This is very well-written and incredibly fun! I enjoyed this immensely!!! *Kiss*

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title & Description:
Title and description both fit this perfectly! The title is quite original and with a good lead in using the 'Veri'. *Wink* The description works well, however, it may benefit from a word or two of more insight into the article.

Article Contents:
This article is informative and thought-provoking. The technology explored within it is amazing!!! It is well-written and everything is easy to understand from beginning to end. The flow is smooth with only a few minor bumps. *Smile*

Typos & Suggestions:
Paragraph One: and plastic[,] Miami's
         *Bullet*I got a bit hung up here; it seems like you have mushed two thoughts together (Or added detail and thought). I think that a comma here would smooth it all out.

Bullet 1: implantation site[,] medical
         *Bullet*I did a natural pause here while reading, so thought I should mention that it might be a good place for a comma?

Paragraph 1 after bullets: shall we[.]
         *Bullet*Since 'shall we' is asking a question, perhaps this period should be a question mark? *Wink*

Post-bullets Paragraph 2: To date[,]; Currently[,]
         *Bullet*I think that there should be commas here since both are added information to the sentence...

Overall:
We all know it's coming, lol... Like my Bluetooth headset doesn't make me feel cyborg enough! Ha! This article shed light on products that we have all dreamed of, but I had NO idea of how common they actually are! *Shock* Sure, I knew with dogs (which is amazingly MUCH cheaper! lol. Usually about $15 (This sentence has taken me about half an hour to continue --I just had a kitten dropped off! It's so cute!!!! Poor little stray, it's Mama was dead and it was almost hit!!!))

All in all, this is well-written and very informative! The talent and professionalism with which you have put this together are amazing! You have certainly done your research!

Okay... back to the kitten! lol...

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Season Tickets  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Yeah, yeah... I came to see if they'd been given yet! lol. I couldn't believe that I hadn't given a review, though! *Shock*

This is a wonderful and creative way to raise WDC morale as well as GPs for a most splendid group! Everything is clearly stated and easy to understand! The prices for the tickets are far below reasonable and the prizes, every year, seem to get better and better!

A wonderful idea that I can't wait to see back next year! *Wink* (But first we MUST know the winner from this year! lol. Just kidding... sort of!) *Wink*

Thank you for running this each year!!!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Review 5 of 5! Last one already? *Cry* I'll be back! (By the way, I know it was supposed to be poetry reviews, but I saw that you wanted input on this... hope you don't mind!

Title & Description:
The title, obviously, fits perfectly, but the description is lacking as it focuses more on the background than telling the reader what to expect. *Wink*

Idea & Storyline:
The storyline is simple and sweet, which opens up a million possibilities for how the story can progress! For a first chapter, that's a very good thing as it not only opens those possibilities to you, but also to the reader, making him/her want to know where this will go!

Dialogue & Narrative:
The narrative is well-written with only a few small hiccups in the flow (see below).

Emotion & Imagery:
While the reader can easily understand the characters' feelings, there is nothing that really stirs the reader's own emotions. Curiosity is present and well-stirred, but I was unsure of what I should be feeling; I was, of course, happy for the woman, but felt a bit detached from her. Naming her might improve that aspect. *Wink* The imagery is simple and nonspecific, so that everything was easy to see. (Having loved WV for years, I had plenty of scenes flashing before my eyes!)

Typos & Suggestions:
Paragraph 2: a[ ]plenty
         *Bullet*No space needed; aplenty is one word. *Wink*
         *Bullet*In the same paragraph, when describing the Knights, the description seemed to drag a bit and I stumbled... I think that a comma after 'jointed' and then, maybe, hyphenating the lost-his-lance-somewhere might help to attach all the words as separate descriptions attributed to the same knight?

Paragraph 5: what [it]
         *Bullet*Here, I think that italicizing the word 'it' would improve the flow and help the words in the parenthesis fit in better...

Paragraph 9: he was [s] a silver[-]tongued
         *Bullet*I think that the 's' is a little stray? *Wink*
         *Bullet*Hyphenating here would help link 'silver' to 'tongued' rather than it seeming like he was silver and tongued. *Wink*

Paragraph 10: lift[ ]time
         *Bullet*No need for space: lifetime

Paragraph 12: were, once[,] again,
         *Bullet*I don't know that this comma is necessary as it seems to break up the flow a bit.

Paragraph 13: Daily calls [(sometimes hourly)]
         *Bullet*I think that the phrase in the parentheses might be better suited before 'calls'?

Paragraph 14: one [She'd] been
         *Bullet*I don't know if you capitalized the wrong word or accidentally pressed shift, but no need for capitalization here. *Wink*

Paragraph 15: they [begin] the
         *Bullet*The word 'begin' doesn't match the tense of the sentence. began.

which [will] follow[,] by several months[,] his
         *Bullet*Tense change again with 'will' --would?
         *Bullet*since 'by several months' is added detail and the sentence can stand alone without it, I think that separating it with commas would improve the flow, as well as the clarity, of this sentence.

Overall:
This is well-written and definitely captured my attention! I think that with a few small improvements, you could easily turn this into something spectacular! With it's amount of background information, though, i cannot help but think that, maybe, this might make a better prologue, allowing Chapter One to introduce the reader more to the Stone Cottage for which the book is named?? I really enjoyed it as is, though! I do hope that you'll continue it! I'm anxious to see where you can take this!!!!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Paybacks....  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review 4 of 5!

Title & Description:
I don't know that either truly fit this... *Confused*

Idea & Storyline:
To me, I think that this could be a wonderful beginning to something longer! While it felt like a complete scene, I was left wanting more.

Dialogue & Narrative:
The narrative is well-written, however, everything seems feel a bit cramped together. The first sentence seems to drag on and on *Blush* making it feel very much like a run-on. I think that separating it into smaller sentences, as well as perhaps separating the whole thing into smaller paragraphs, would make this more pleasing to the eye as well as smoothing out any little bumps in the flow.

Emotion & Imagery:
While my primary emotion seemed to be confusion *Blush*, I also felt a bit of fear, terror, and then peace. The imagery is wonderful!!! That is definitely the strong point of this short! This is written in such a way that it is simple to envision everything, which stirs the emotions in the readers. I think that this scene could be very symbolic for other, simpler things in life, which makes it easy to relate to.

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos. Other than the suggestions above, the only other one that I have is to add more! I think that this could make a wonderful opening scene to a longer story! It definitely got my attention right away and I would be delighted to read more, to know what happens next...

Overall:
I really enjoyed this little step out of life and it is a wonderful display of your talent for writing and bringing the reader into your pieces! I think that this could serve as a great inspiration for something more. As is, it is wonderfully written but just feels a little incomplete. *Worry* The symbolism and imagery are a rare gem which is what really makes me want MORE! *Pthb*

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Love's Sphere  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Review 3 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title fits this perfectly. The description, I'm sure does, however, it seems more like a footnote than a description. *Wink*

Flow & Format:
The free verse from worked very well with your words to keep the flow smooth from begging to end!

Emotion & Imagery:
The emotion was peacefully sensual and loving throughout this poem. The soul-baring scene you have laid out for the reader is simple to envision as well as feel. The reader can easily be either trapped by a reverie or memory OR feel a pang of jealousy! *Wink* (Married, I have admit to a little of each! lol)

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestions come to mind.

Overall:
This is a well-written poem filled with romance and just the right amount of sensuality as to not be overbearing! Wonderful! Others may not agree, but I think that this is perfect! So *Pthb* to them!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Couch Potato  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Review 2 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly! I was wondering what it would all be about! lol.

Flow & Format:
Funky format and prompts, but you handled it all superbly! The flow is smooth and the rhymes do not feel forced!

Emotion & Imagery:
The imagery was great! The faces of quite a few potatoes danced before my eyes! The lighthearted feel of this poem added to the ending to make me laugh out loud!

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor do I have any suggestions.

Overall:
This is a fun, lighthearted poem that is sure to put a smile on every reader's face!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of A Definition  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I clicked into this out of curiosity and honestly can not understand how it has such a low rating! *Shock* Here are my reasons why:

*Thumbsup*The shape of this poem is very reminiscent of an arrowhead a bullet which adds to the ambiance of the poem.

*Thumbsup*The "play on words" is original and well-thought!

*Thumbsup*The message of this poem speaks volumes and is strong and thought-provoking!

*Thumbsup*Even in such a short space, you managed to not only stir my emotions, but also make my mind's eye fill with images inspired by your words.

For all of those reasons, I cannot see how this is less than perfect! You fit more into six lines than some can fit into six pages!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review 1 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly. A part of me does, however, think that the title could be better... *Blush*

Flow & Format:
The free verse form worked beautifully with your words to keep the flow smooth from beginning to end!

Emotion & Imagery:
The imagery is breathtaking! The emotion, I think, mainly comes from the reader's emotion to to the vivid imagery found in this poem! I got a peaceful feeling and, yet, with a hint of chaos as though watching a gathering storm or a tornado forming.

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestion come into my head.

Overall:
This poem is short and sweet and covered MUCH more than I would expect from so little space! This stirred my imagination, feelings, and mind's eye. Beautiful!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Review 5 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly, however, I think that the description might benefit from a word or two of insight into the poem. *Wink*

Flow & Format:
Okay... Wow! There's a lot going on here! Flawless AABB rhyme scheme, acrostic, a repeated stanza, and a prompt??? Geesh! I'm baffled by the genius behind this format! You managed to tie all of these things together seamlessly for a poem that flows smoothly from beginning to end without anything feeling forced --which always amazes in a poem that includes acrostic and rhyme! *Shock*

Emotion & Imagery:
The dark emotion and imagery made this poem quite creepy to read. My sick, sadistic, twisted mind did, however, get an evil grin from the end of the acrostic portion! *Smirk*

Typos & Suggestions:
I noticed no typos nor did any suggestions creep into my head.

Overall:
This is wonderfully written poem! It is creative and creepy! I can see why it won first place! To me, it's perfect!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review of Jake, Forsake!  
Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Review 4 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description both suit this poem perfectly. I really want to say that the description might benefit from a word or two of insight into the poem, but I think the title takes of that wonderfully!

Flow & Format:
Oh my! I can't even imagine how much of a challenge this format must have been to write!!! You stuck to it beautifully, though and the flow was smooth and rhythmical from beginning to end!

Emotion & Imagery:
The emotion is DEFINITELY present! The pleas of the narrator are easily understood and felt!

Typos & Suggestions:
In Stanza 4, Line 5, the comma seemed to break up the flow a little bit.

Overall:
This is a great display of talent! You manage to fit much more than I could imagine in so few words!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review 3 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description, once again, fit perfectly with the poem!

Flow & Format:
The ABCB rhyme scheme and short lines kept everything flowing smoothly and rhythmically from beginning to end without any rhymes feelings forced!

Emotion & Imagery:
As a person who both reads and writes poetry, this poem really spoke volumes to me! The emotion, I think, is really drawn from the reader. Your words stir the reader's emotions, but their own feelings toward that stirring are what really make this poem easy to feel!

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestions pop into my head.

Overall:
I LOVE this poem! Not only does it relay very well the feelings one hopes to achieve when sharing a poem, but it also explains it all perfectly! This poem is creative and wonderfully written! I love it!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review 2 of 5!

Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly!

Flow & Format:
The ABAB rhyme scheme worked well with your words to keep everything flowing smoothly from beginning to end!

Emotion & Imagery:
The imagery may vary from reader to reader, but the thought-provoking message makes the emotion clear! This poem contains a thought for us all to ponder! --As well as a warning that all should heed!

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestions come to mind.

Overall:
I love the powerful message contained within this poem! You sent your warning out clearly and it is simple for the reader to understand everything throughout this poem! Wonderfully done!

*Heart*,
Stephanie Grace
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Review by Stephanie Grace
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Title & Description:
The title and description both fit this poem perfectly. (In the description, however, I think that either the words 'to be' are missing or vindicate should be vindication...?)

Flow & Format:
Wow! Mono-rhyme and a steady eight-syllable count! I can't even imagine how much a challenge that would be! Both worked wonderfully with your words to keep the flow smooth and rhythmical from beginning to end.

Emotion & Imagery:
The specific imagery may change from reader to reader, but the emotion comes through clearly. While we cannot all claim to have been in this exact situation, we have all been in similar situations. You have relayed the feelings involved very well and made the reader not only feel them, but understand them!

Typos & Suggestions:
I saw no typos nor did any suggestions come to mind.

Overall:
This is a very well-written poem and I am completely in awe at how you handled the format of it!

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Stephanie Grace
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