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Review by Sarah Potters
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, this is a very interesting and fun poem. I really enjoyed it, really great!
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Review of In His Hands  
Review by Sarah Potters
Rated: E | (5.0)
One of the most beautiful and real poems I've ever read. You writing touched my heart and definitely spoke to me. It's short and sweet, but says a lot. The comparison of God to a Potter is all too accurate, and how He understand and never gives up, no matter how harsh the world is. Five stars and I would love to hear plenty more from you, -Sarah.


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Review by Sarah Potters
Rated: E | (5.0)
So dark and well written. I got lost in it a little. I love it, though it does hurt a little, to see the character accepting that it is not Death's fault that this is happening, and Death is 'just doing what's right'. I love the character accepting that now there is now no time to change and fate has always been theirs. Such a deep, beautiful poem.

I'd love to hear more from you, -Sarah


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Review of When  
Review by Sarah Potters
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well written and short and sweet. I didn't spot any grammatical errors, which is what I usually look for. I love the emotions put into it. Peace won't come with death or giving up on the promise of a better tomorrow, but only when your dreams are finally achieved. Beautiful, loved every word. Love to hear more from you, keep up the great work, -Sarah
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