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Review by Loves2write
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Very interesting. An offer almost to good to refuse. Well written with no punctuation errors that I found. For anyone who reads vampire stories, it is an offer not to be missed. I also enjoyed the humor in hits effort to prove his offer is real and he is honest. I just might have to take him up on it, even though I don't usually read vampire books. Good luck to you!. Keep on writing!


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Review of The Train Trip  
Review by Loves2write
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a sweet story. I didn't pick up on any grammar or punctuation mistakes. The amount of description was perfect. The story held my attention all the way through. Even now I am wondering what happened to her father and what her life with her grandparents will be like.. Feels too me like a great start for a longer story or even a book.


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Review by Loves2write
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow, I feel like I just started a new cozy series of books. I didn't want it to end. I really enjoyed the short story and I truly feel it would make a wonderful cozy series. As the short story started and continued,i could see the characters developing. The scene perfectly matched the plot, the picture was just perfect.Punctuation and grammar, I didn't see any errors. I look forward to reading more from ShaNoWriMo.
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Review of Comment-In-A-Box  
Review by Loves2write
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not a new writer, but when it comes to reading, reviewing, and rating, I was uncomfortable. I had my doubts about being able to effectively review someone else's work!,especially as I have just started writing again after a10 year or so break. This piece of work was so well written I took notes to use when I am reviewing others. Towards the end out did get a bit repetitive. I chose to take the repetitive nature to mean that those things were the most important..
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Review of Please Review  
Review by Loves2write
Rated: E | (5.0)
You had me hooked from the first line. I loved your description of the scorpions visit. The way you described the way she was being held with her arms tied, her predicament, left me feeling her pain.There wasn't much in the way of character descriptions, but I feel like you were getting to that at the end of the segment.Your descriptions of place and situation were very good. Throughout the segment, I was drawn in by one thing after another, right through the end. I was hoping for more when the piece ended. This segment was excellent. and I look forward to reading future work from you. Keep writing!
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