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23 Total Reviews Given
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Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
While I am not Jewish, I do find their calendar fascinating. Your entries are well informed and I enjoyed reading them.
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Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cute story. It was easy to read with a great punchline. Sad that the husband didn't want to believe.
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Review of Bohemian Ballad  
Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well I haven't seen a poem written in the first person before. I don't know if this is supposed to be a limerick or not. I kind of missed the joke. (Sorry I thought this form of poem was meant to be funny. If it's not, I apologize.) If I were to give my honest opinion this is more like a ballad.

However, my nitpicking aside , this is a well written poem. You can definitely feel a rhythm when you read the words.
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Review of Odd O'blography  
for entry "Breakfast Rhapsody
Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I got so hungry reading this. Very delicious piece...I think I should eat something now. I like the poem at the beginning I can hear the music in my head.
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Review of Bella  
Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel that this is a heartfelt remembrance of a dear companion. I'd side with the professor from University of Iowa. This isn't plagiarism. Your words were yours and the subject, while still a dog, was YOUR dog not Jimmy Stewarts.
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Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is the best slice of life story I’ve read. I like how George and Jeff bonded over video games. Some authors might say to avoid adverbs but you made them work for you instead of having you work for them. Well done!
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Review of The Kraken  
Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Thats the only word I have for this. An excellent poem. Your descriptive verses made me feel as though I was there.
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Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dude! I love these questions. They really satisfy my inner nerd.(If that’s not offensive.)
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Review of A Cats Prayer  
Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful! This prayer makes my heart melt!
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Review of Sputnik 1  
Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is beautiful and informative. I sincerely enjoyed reading about Sputnik.
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Review by Vampiric Potato
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was really an enjoyable read! I like that this is a dialogue between a person and their shadow.
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