Vampiric Potato's (scarypotato14) Reviews

Well I haven't seen a poem written in the first person before. I don't know if this is supposed to be a limerick or not. I kind of missed the joke. (Sorry I thought this form of poem was meant to be funny. If it's not, I apologize.) If I were to give my honest opinion this is more like a ballad.

However, my nitpicking aside , this is a well written poem. You can definitely feel a rhythm when you read the words.

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Review of Odd O'blography

for entry "Breakfast Rhapsody"

Review by Vampiric Potato

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I got so hungry reading this. Very delicious piece...I think I should eat something now. I like the poem at the beginning I can hear the music in my head.

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Review of Bella

Review by Vampiric Potato

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I feel that this is a heartfelt remembrance of a dear companion. I'd side with the professor from University of Iowa. This isn't plagiarism. Your words were yours and the subject, while still a dog, was YOUR dog not Jimmy Stewarts.

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#4710637

Review of Video Games in a Broken Elevator

Review by Vampiric Potato

Rated: E

| (5.0)

This is the best slice of life story I’ve read. I like how George and Jeff bonded over video games. Some authors might say to avoid adverbs but you made them work for you instead of having you work for them. Well done!

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