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Review of One Phone Call  
Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
An excellent and mysterious story with potential for further development. Very suspenseful. Well done!
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Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A powerful poem that makes you think, especially as we're coming out of a pandemic and all of us are pondering our mortality. I can't help but wonder if the planet and even the human race had a collective close call with survival in 2020. Yes, I understand these ponderings, and see plenty of inspiration for them. Well written and well done!
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Review of Lawn Envy  
Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love it! People do take their lawns seriously, perhaps too much so. It's so hot and humid where I live that I decided it was best to give up while I was ahead. Our yard looks awful - but we live in the woods, so nobody knows it but us. Ha! There's a solution! But I like yours too. I must admit it crossed our minds as well.

Seriously, this is a great, humorous poem. It rolls right along and is something we can all relate to. Well done!
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Review of Dad  
Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm so sorry for your loss. I lost my own Dad to complications with lung cancer 10 months ago, and my father-in-law passed with Lewy Body Dementia in 2014. Both were tough losses. I can tell you from experience that there is no good way to grieve. You're never ready to lose them, and it always turns you upside down and leaves you with an endless list of "what if's." Try not to beat yourself up too much. Grief will always cause us to think of things we could have done better or should have said. He knows you loved him - perhaps now more than you know. My condolences and thanks for your honesty in sharing this.
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Review of What We Became  
Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A solid and powerful story with the potential for development into a novel.
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Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good advice. I'm 45 and see the "identity crisis" that so many people in their 30's and 40's feel over not having achieved what they think they should have. That's so much nonsense. Life is full of the unexpected, and narrowing your vision to a single path can drain you of so much joy and new opportunity.
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Review of Anger & Fear  
Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
A great, honest, emotional poem. Powerful and evocative, it makes you think and opens your eyes to how you relate with the issues in your own life. Well done!
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Review of Hello Sweet Bird  
Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem, full of emotion and meaning. It flows well, and is a beautiful sentiment to those times and experiences so deep that we can't share them with others. It's deep and beautiful, and captures the swirl of suppressed emotion so well. Keep up the great work!
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Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very interesting tale, told from a perspective that's different than most of us are used to. I like the shift in perspective and how well it's presented. I'm not familiar with the gaming world, but you do explain it well enough for me to keep up. I can see that this novel has a lot of potential and it's interesting. Well written and well done. Thanks for the opportunity to review it!
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Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
A wonderful story that demonstrates that relationships are the most important thing in life. I like the perspective of this story, because it seems that success made the character delay questioning the typical "mid life" questions (when we can still do something to correct our course) until the end of his days, when it was too late to change anything. Powerful and thought provoking. I like this story.
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Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: E | (4.0)
An excellent poem that captures a lot in a short space, which is a rare and precious gift. It flows well, and packs a powerful punch. Very well written. Great job!
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Review of A Simple Sign  
Review by SherritheWriter
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wow, that ending is powerful. I like how you surprise the reader at the end by using the setting. It's clever and unexpected! This truly engages all of the senses, as a vivid picture is painted that gives the reader all they need to know in relatively few words. Well written!
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