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Review of Nosedive No More  
Review by Kathleen
Rated: E | (4.5)
Owls 🦉 Captured day to day life of owls well.
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Review of Incursion  
for entry "Chapter 2: Shadows
Review by Kathleen
Rated: GC | (5.0)
I could really picture the place without trying and without stepping aside and retreading. It feels like a Prepper bunker come to life in words which I think was something that needed done. The background of where they are really made the story feel like it has a place. Sort of tied in with the story giving it depth and just a feeling of an interesting place.
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Review of Incursion  
for entry "Chapter 1: Activation
Review by Kathleen
Rated: GC | (5.0)
I am actually interested in seeing where theses characters' lives take them. Easy to follow and get a feel for what is up with characters without breaking immersion 5 stars
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Review of Incursion  
Review by Kathleen
Rated: GC | (4.0)
Reads really well, easy to follow action without getting bogged down in it. Action writing good
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Review of Incursion  
Review by Kathleen
Rated: GC | (5.0)
Interesting easy to get in flow and be part of the world that is going on. I could keep reading this. It details what is going on in an immersive immediate feel of the situation way. Like a song almost the way it flows together. Really smartly written
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Review by Kathleen
Rated: E | (4.5)
Kind of depressing. The wicked don’t see what is around them, but why not go off and forget it all? It will happen again. Maybe they will just give up.

Personally, my character Lily is busy in charge of her country. She is mildly amused by anyone interested in her. She is entertained by your people’s solution to their problems. She is sure they will find a way to make things work the way they go about things. She seems earnest about it. As much as she claims every country as her own though, she is not claiming your characters’ nations.
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