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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Your story is very good, but, I'm confused as to the way you've presented it. It almost looks like a poetry stanza. Was that your intent?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed your style and descriptive prose. Keep up the good work
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The story truly shows how the military shapes their soldiers and seamen. I commend you and thank you for serving your country. Your description of events brings the reader up close and personal to how missions are created. Thank you for a great story.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nicely done
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
You caught my attention when you described the graveyard at night. The wind blasting his face was a nice touch.
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