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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello HuntersMoon, I just finished reading Of Darkness Born... Wonder flow for this poem. Your rhythm and structure are on key. I completely enjoyed every paragraph. It gives the reader an insight of a vial, horrid person who cares not of his fellow man. But, loves to condem everyone else not like him. Violence shows within the words. Too true of such statements, only man can change. Yet this person of Darkness thrives on bitter sweet sadnes s from all around the globe.
The last paragraph is in the best interest of all man and woman; "We can't allow him to exist. His evilness we must resist. Condemning those who fail to stand, against this blight upon our land..."
Well done HuntersMoon. Good Read! 👍


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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Asuna, I stopped by for a read and review, about this adorable short story. It's filled with surprising adventures for Lilly after her grandpa tells her a bedtime story. Off to bed she goes, when a faint sound catches her attention. So she looks out the window and sees a Rainbow colored unicorn, who in turns takes Lilly on several adventures. I especially liked all the names you used to tell this story. It kept my attention to where she may be going next. This story has the makings of a perfect short story for children. Only exception is, the numerous(small) mistakes in spelling, along with too any commas. Most of which are unnecessary to make this story flow better. But,the storyline is good. To help make this better, my suggestion is to go over it again and again and you will see the mistakes made. Or read it out loud. Sometimes that helps a lot. Keep writing Asuna, help is only a click away... WDC Rocks! There are many here who are more adapted to edit and help you properly. This is my own personal thoughts regarding this story. It can only get better from here! :)


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Shaara, I stumbled upon your short story, "Homeless in the City". I found this to be a real truthful story about a homeless man and his dog. Sitting there everyday praying for some relief of being homeless in the city.. Many people passing him by daily as though he were invisible... to some. It's such a real thing in this world that people are more afraid of him, than are of the bad people you see on the TV or in the newspapers. It hurts a few that have a place in their hearts for someone like Freddy. But in any big city, there are many people just like him. Kind, needing help, foods whatever has caused his life to turn so badly.
It makes us who are strong enough to deserve his pain and suffering that we wish we could help him more, with housings and other needs. But by the time we feel we are ready to put ourselves out there, they are gone. That's when we feel his true pain, but now it's too late to change his situation. Sad, Yes,! Wiser for having feelings for another in need... Will hopefully make us more aware of the truth within ourselves as humans are the struggle we all face at times. Your story has a good meaningful understanding of the their needs, before our own.. Good read Shaana.,.! And thanks for bringing his sadness into a small part of our world..! Well written!


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello LJ, welcome to the WDC. I just read this short story Cindy and Mr. Buttons. My first thought after reading was, the name Cindy is used a bit too many times in this short worded story. Try to remove a few "Cindy's." I do believe it will flow better. The storyline is a cute short story about a little girl and her mom growing a small garden when one day the carrots are missing, then Cindy meets the rabbit family who has stolen the carrots without asking first. This gives the child reader a lesson in stealing without asking. But, the need to feed a rabbit family was more important and she grew more just for them to share. This would look and help the reader to better understand if you break it up into more paragraphs. The whole middle part should be spaced more. Believe me, I was told the same thing in the begining that appearance in your writing makes a Huge Difference..!
Only one more thing I noticed was; ( they grew big and strong why did you steal them( end it ?") you just need to switch the quotations around. All in all this is a cute short for begining readers.
Good Read!


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Review of Sundae the cat  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm Hello sinbad, you are being honored today for our praise a power member. I am very happy to have stopped in for a short read.
I choose this story of, "Sundae the cat." This is adorable and heartwarming. Your expressions in your words were incredible and honestly true. You almost write of a passion for Sundae and her rambunctiousness ways. Well done, and you used the prompt words wonderefly...
My favorite part is; Heart-warming when she burrows into my sheet, motoring her way loudly to a snuggle-worthy spot,. Your discription are right on key and flow very well in this story... I just loved it.!
Good Read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Veronica, And welcome to the WDC, where all your questions will be answered by several. There is help from any colored case in the portifilo... Plus tech support at the top of the page...
I just finished reading this poem of yours and my first impression is;
You must have the title "Pone Call". Is spelled by accident...
To make changes to your writings open your portfolio and on the top right is a settings/edit symbol ⚙. Looks like this. Then edit your item, but don't forget to save it first before you hit the complete button..but, still you can always edit your work.
Now, back to this poem you wrote for your brother before he sets out to defend our nation... Tel him I said," Thank You for his Service"
This was written with strong ties and meaningful love of family.
I know how you feel Verionca, I'll never get used to saying goodby to my only son, only child every time he leaves to go out again. He has about 2 & 1/2 more years and its up to him to stay or venture into something new. I pray your brother's safety while serving... In just the few short years now that my son joined the Navy, he has been across the world and back. My love and faith in him is beyond words...! Just as you share the love and having to face the facts that your brother is out of country is scary, by no means... Trust in our Lord and pray a little everyday that he will return safe.. 😎 🙏 ✨💫
Your poem has a nice flow to it, heartfelt meanings and you used a fine choice of words to create it... God Bless your Brother and more.
Good read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo,,Rhychus.. With this short story. Clearly the children are not interested in painting, until they see it finished, then they are amazed my the beauty a few colors of paint can make. I also enjoyed the nice flow to this poetry story. The artist gets a little frustrated with the children's lack of interest. When the painting came to life, they were amazed.
The Joy of helping others then comes into play when the class becomes silent, in awe of the painted beauty. helping others- now complete.. Good Read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sharon, I'm just jumping around the site and ran into this cute short story of yours.. Love your title,(it works)
I enjoyed the mixture of pirate stories used and recreated into one new story. Your correct imagery while reading, is done well too. This is a story of two young boys on an imagery adventure to look for buried treasure,(in the back yard) lol
When Mom hollers of to them to come in for lunch. Great ending for such a short story. Good Read!


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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Wish List" 
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, WDC.. Question: why is a question mark next to My Account..
And what happened to my yellow case? Just wondering.?
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Review of Tides  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Zacharie, I am here to review this poem you wrote.. It has so much feeling in each word and I love how you shaped it, to show the reader the reality of the Tides we go through in life. Some of them drowned and the rest of us, (just keep swimming, just keep swimming,) And do our best in this life to better ourselves first.. It speaks of a controlling relationship. Yet, they choose to ride the Tides of life in hopes it ends happily, ever, after.. Well done! Good Read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Spacecat, I'm here to review you for the Game Of Thrones.
I choose this poem because it's title allured me in.. It being summer time right now. I'm ready for it to cool off just a bit. In my area, this poem is just as if you wrote about how this summer came in this area. It was beautiful and cool. Taking her time, before the extreme heated time of year comes around again. Lately, it's been real nice summers here. Except last years Memorial Day when a tornado wiped out our only shade tree..! But, no one was hurt, thank goodness! I really loved the wording you chose to write this poem piece. It entails so much in just a few words. Beautifully done.! It gives the,, reader an image of sheer summers beauty, and then how Autumn comes in and steals it away by sheading many tears to the earth. And putting summer to sleep. How lovely this poem sounds too. Nice flow and imagery because of your word choices. Again, the area I currently live in, is just as you wrote it with like you were here in Oklahoma, USA..
Good Read!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Presley, I am here to review you for 'Game Of Thrones'. So I chose the first chapter of your~ novel to be, The Promontory. Well, you have my attention! I really like this first chapter, it gives the reader good insight to the story line. A young newly married couple who is expecting a child soon, build their Dream Home away from the suburbs, a short distance into a country side area. When Julie finds an old key and tells Peter. He picks it up and instant curiosity fills their minds with wonder. Does this key fit the old abandoned creepy house across the way from their new home. Curiosity got the best of them, and they go to the old house and in amazement and hopefulness it opens the front door. Peter enters, crashing into something glass.
(Here is where I had a problem understanding) you say: "He reached up and felt for the silver of luminescence he had observed." What is it exactly a 'silver of luminescence.'?? I'm guessing a light or a lamp of some kind? When the brightness fills the room, they are surprised by how clean and lived in it still appeared. But, other than that, I really enjoyed reading this novels beginning. I will probably pop in now and then just to continue reading it. Nice work. Very Clean and polished.! :) It's hard to put a favorite part of the story on a chapter story, but to me it is the creepy old house and what secrets it holds within it's walls. I'm sure Peter and Julie will find out..! Well done..
Good Read!
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Review of Dead Man's Alley  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Review of Dead Man's Alley
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello elizjohn, I am here to review you for the Games of Thrones. and I found this awesome piece of writing. It gave me the creeps. For being such a short piece, it showed a lot of the title: Dead Man's Alley. You catch the reader off guard until the final ending. Well done.! The beginning showed me a nice couple walking the street as many had walked before them to their death. The man appears loving and comforting at first as he holds her close, like a protective cloak, but with his embraceable arms. She feels safe, and curious as she listens to him pointing out the gallows while telling her the stories of the victims that were hung here long ago. And then looking up he points out the darkened windows. By now she feels it may really be a haunted street, but still doubtful. I really enjoyed where you added that she grazed, touched the stone walls. It gives this a feeling like your right there on the street with them. When suddenly, I felt I wanted to save her, but this is only a story! Nicely done. Good Read!
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Review of Dead Man's Alley  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello elizjohn, I am here to review you for the Games of Thrones. and I found this awesome piece of writing. It gave me the creeps. For being such a short piece, it showed a lot of the title: Dead Man's Alley. You catch the reader off guard until the final ending. Well done.! The beginning showed me a nice couple walking the street as many had walked before them to their death. The man appears loving and comforting at first as he holds her close, like a protective cloak, but with his embraceable arms. She feels safe, and curious as she listens to him pointing out the gallows while telling her the stories of the victims that were hung here long ago. And then looking up he points out the darkened windows. By now she feels it may really be a haunted street, but still doubtful. I really enjoyed where you added that she grazed, touched the stone walls. It gives this a feeling like your right there on the street with them. When suddenly, I felt I wanted to save her, but this is only a story! Nicely done. Good Read!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Maryann, I am here to review for The Game Of Thrones. And I saw this wonderfully little story of yours, Courage and Sunflower seeds. While reading this, it cought my curiosity at first during the playful practice sword fighting between Miles and his father. Something I personally have always wanted to do, but never did. Your details, in my opinion were done very well. I felt it was written during a time passed long ago. The respect shown between father and son puts this story in a nice perspective and joyous way. Then as Miles goes out to find his sister outside leaned up against a tree stump creating a mess of eaten sunflower and his reaction to her messy ways was quite humorous. Now the adventure begins with Miles and Margaret walking through the forest. Again, here you added the perfect details of the things they seen and how amazing they both found them to be. Then when the coursioty of the strang lights in a clearing of the forest, they decided to investigate closer. Not knowing what's was in store of their faite. After meeting this strange woman who invited them in with a complete lie to steal their life forces to her advantages, now turns their adventure into something scary. And as this encounter takes place Margaret remembering an old child's tale of Hansel and Gretel she knows what's he must do after seeing what just happene to Miles when the stranger tries to get her into a room, just like the old witch tried to cook the children in her oven. Margaret's quick thinking saves them both. Scared as they run away, they find their way back home from the trail of sunflowers seeds. Your ending was brilliant, when Miles tells his little sister, he's going to buy her a big bad of sunflower seeds. I really enjoyed this.! Well done.
Good Read my friend.! ☺️


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello InfoWarrior, I am here to review for Game Of Thrones. I've chosen you for your impressive poetry writing. This poem Oak Tree Speaks, spoke to me as well. Each paragraph gives a simple and true meaning to the Oak Tree' s life. The look of it and the creatures that live within it. Well done.! Your second paragraph gives the reader a closer look at the tree from Mother Earths perspectives, with the changes the tree goes through. I feel this is an important part of what happens throughout the years. Nicely done. Your third, forth, fifth, sixth, and seventh paragraphs gives the reader a hole new insight that most of us never see. The food the tree provides to some animals, the homes the tree gives to some creatures, the fun playfulness to other animals, and what the tree allows birds with beautiful sounds that come from them. As well as the nightly noises from the smallest of insects and other small critters that live within the trees branches and the changes they go through. All this life you give the reader about just one of many Oak trees. Well done.
Good Read!


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Review of Scott's Pot  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was so amusing to read, I loved it. Scott's Pot.. Perfect title for this lovely little poem/story. It's a tongue tier for sure.. Like a Peter Piper poem/story. I like how you created the shape of this and in adding that the pot is not Hot. My favorite part is the ending.. Scott's pot has not a dot. But it is Scott's pot.! Great ending..
Good read!


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Review of The Treasure Hunt  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello HuntersMoon; I just read this funny, funny story The Treasure Hunt. I'm still laughing about it...You put this together very well and with so few words. I love what the story tells us of what happened to the gift after being swallowed by the pet dog. And when Lydia comes home surprised that he got her something special, only to be handed a pair of gloves and told that her gift is now a Treasure Hunt in the backyard. Love it!
Good Read!


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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello, Santa...I love your title for this piece..! While reading it, my thoughts began to think of the many, many troubled and frail people that live with the same feelings and sadness you speak of in this story. It is truly sad, because no one should ever have to feel the way your character feels. You get into a deep sense of this persons mind and what they are dealing with daily. Asking for only one day, a little time for themselves. Your last words speak of how bad this person feels... :(


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Congratulations Don Two for another great poem! 🌠


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Review of Alzheimer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Paramedic, I'm on the raid and I've come across your story/poem. You did this in a way through the eyes of the man you speak of. Well done, you gave him back some of his memory by just writing about it. I feel he would be very proud of you and knows that you've written this in his memory and for his memory's. I feel the story's I've written in memory of my Father are received to him with love as well. Good Read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Itchy Water. I'm on the raid and I came across this poem you wrote titled ' A Special Fathers Day Visit '. I do love story/ poems, and this one has a specialness to it in the shape of a loved candy. I have to believe this happened as you state, and if it did. All the better the story. This man has an 'excessive busy life' and never knew what to get his Father for Father's Day. When he just buys what he thinks is senseless candy to give his Father. Then in return, he finds that his Father did love the gift of the candies his son gave him after all. Then after his passing the son feels his Father's presence and, the question returns. " What do I get Him for Father's Day." And he gets the candy to let his Father know he is missed dearly. When suddenly the candy is gone. Well done! And good storyline from a son's point of view about his loving lost Father.
Good Read!


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Review of Best to Impress  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Don Two, I'm on the raid and I seen your title topic and had to stop and check it out. This is nicely written, and it has a good flow in rhyming, considering the subject. Well done, I really enjoyed your use of the seasons as rivals with mother earth as judge in sorts. I think this would appeal to a young crowd easy to understand in a fun way. Thank you for creating this poem. Good read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Christopher Unterkofler, I'm on the raid and your explanation of The Summer Solstice is very informative and well done. I myself just learned more about what and why this solstice is and with this, 'your help 'gave me a better understanding of our solar system. I guess being out of school for over thirtysomething years, I've forgotten my science. And I loved science class too. I'd like to thank you for posting this here in your port at WDC for all to see and I plan on sharing this information with my three elementary age grandsons. Just to give them a head start and an understanding as you did here for me.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Whitemorn, I'm on the raid and I seen this in the HUB and so I had to check it out. I think you did a good job and you had me laughing all the way.! It never occurred to me what Charlie Brown would be like at thirty years old and the rest of the Peanuts Gang. I really enjoyed this fictional theory of one of America's favorite cartoons. And where and how you gave the gang all new lives as to their whereabouts was done well.. As long as you kept Snoopy and Woodstock, you rocked 💪 this story. Good Read!


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