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Review of How Ironic  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mare, I'm on a raid review and I've stopped into your port to review this story. The title grabbed my attention and your brief description made me want to read this. My first impression is that a selfish tragedy that took place because of greedy family members. It is hard for me to truly understand the feelings going through the mother as she lay dying due to such an awful act of love from your own child. My sincere condolences to the loving part of the family.
Good Read!


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Review of Our Fathers  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shelly, I'm on a raid and I stopped by your port to read your poem, "Our Father". I'm glad that I stopped to read this wonderful little poem. It speaks to me as my father did in my life. You touched many hearts with your words of a 'good Father'. Some so rare these days, it is sad. I loved the first line, 'Father's are wonderful people too little understood.' Then you point out the struggles a Father goes through daily to continue to provide for his family. When you said in the third part, how Fathers give us notions that they are not subject to emotion. Here I feel as though you knew my Father as well. The forth part is very touching too. Actually every paragraph holes a wonderful memory only few of us ever have. And how thankful we were to have a Father like this. Well done Shelly.
Good Read!


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Review of Creativity  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Vicki Lynne, I'm on the raid and I've stopped by to read your story about the strange creativity your father instilled in you. I enjoyed reading of all the many things that one can create from another's trash. It follows the old saying, "One man's trash, Is another man's treasure." My parents were also born during the Great Depression and I've been told by both of them years ago about how to utilize nearly everything. It obviously had a first purpose, and he showed you how to create a new purpose for those most unusable items others throw away. Who knew? This is a nice story of learning how to live and get a second use from having that creative mind.
Good Read!


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Review of Daddy's Baby Girl  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Kings, I'm on the raid and I've stopped by to read your poem 'Daddy's little Girl'. I really enjoyed this short poem. It truly is a pleading for love that he missed out on during her young childhood. Also, The rhyming has a nice flow to it considering his sincerity in asking for her forgiveness for missing the joys he knows he lost being away. This is slowly becoming too familiar throughout the world these days. But reading this lovely poem to his daughter must have been a hard thing to write knowing of all the lost memories and now asking to start anew. I pray she had the forgiveness in her heart to give you a second chance.
Good Read!


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Review of Father's Day  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Sophy, I here at you port raiding you very touching story/poem Father's Day.
it put's a real impact the daughter that time just slipped away. I like the respective verse you used between each story adding your somewhat regrets of lack of visiting a dying man.
Her Father. And wondering all the while, "What will she do without a Father?"
Good Read!


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Review of Summer Solstice  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow, I am here raiding on your poem of Summer Solstice. Nicely put together as the reality of changes that take place every year. You connected the human race, with rivers across, with sweet desires' and spring, with winter comes the rise of Civilization's that will come to conquer each other forever, then survives and advances. and the Sun still stands.!
Well Done! Good Read!


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Review of It is a Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Wes Lee, I'm here raiding at your port over this lovely, well put together Summer Solstice. I really enjoyed your repeated first verses over and over with each time changing throughout a year. Describing each change in all it's beauty and sadness. I loved your ending
"every one of us a part of all that is, all the was, and all that will ever be.! Brilliant story/poem. Written as though the solstice's themselves wrote it. Loved it.
Good Read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Rhychus, I had to stop and read/review this lovely wonderful poem of the earth beneath our feet. Your title caught my attention, and it fit's perfectly with this poem. I did not see anything that you could have left out. You included every aspect of the Title. And in your words you bring the fortunes of what the compost brings to life. Very nicely written and wonderful rhyming for such an unusual subject. Good Read!
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Review of Beautiful Space  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Caleb Rose, I just popped in to give you a review on this poem of, the Beauty of Space and our place among the stars. Which captured my interest to read it. I'm glad I did!
I especially liked the flow in your poem of an infinite galaxy. What could possibly be out there and how far does the universe really go? A question that has never been answered and probably never will. But just,'what if, we were able to know and see all our questions answered. I think, life would be harder and yet illness free. I pray. You used a very nice flow and rhyme with this poem and I'm left with an open imagination for such a future. Your second paragraph I liked the best because I'm am always saying 'what a small, small world we live in. This gives the reader a more wider perspective of how small we really are.


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for entry "Feelings of Guilt" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent choice of scripture for today. I felt as though I was reading a human life which is the same life as so , so many others out in this world.. One in particularly; a dear friend, I've known her parents before she was even born. Well she has been and to this current day is doing exactly what this scripture is all about. And I incourage her everyday to have the faith to get her five young boys back from the state. I pray for her every day, in hopes she is really listening. I would love to send your daily scripture and story to share with her, during such a time she's having in her life right now.!
Thanks again Eric, good advice for many people who know what your talking about.. But ya gotta have the T-Shirt.. Been there , Done that!
👀 Into the💔 💘💕💖's of everyone. 🤗


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for entry "Becoming Christ-like" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello again my friend. This is another good truth that we, humans have to understand, and reading your way of a simpler understanding ourselves through a woman pregnant or Not, really shows the difference in the meanings of :
Justification ~ Glorification ~ Sanctification.
Well explained.! And Happy May, Friday The 13th.. 🤗👍✨
May Peace be with you and yours! ☀️


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for entry "God's Forgiveness" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello again Eric. I think after reading this that in today's society people have forgotten how to show their children the difference between natural sin and planned sin. God may forgive sin if it was a natural type of sin. But if someone is planning to do harm to another, and now has created another sin. I feel there has got to be different types of judgments when it comes to the sin's one has done before standing at the gates to heaven..! It that strange to wonder?
Just saying! 🤔 😪 Good Read! 💫


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for entry "The Love of a Mother" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Amen to that brother.! All the more reason to cherish your children while they are still children. And show them the righteous way life goes threw from experience and extreme love for your child, they in time will become adults and take on the same roll as was lived throughout their life and beyond. The hardest part about being a mother is, when your child dies before you or when their time has reached flying out into the world to pursue their own lives. Which in truth and human instinct we are meant to do, and to forever announce the presence of the Spirt of Christ, in the name of Jesus.. Amen to all mothers.! 💞✨😘


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for entry "The Power of Prayer" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I wish more people would open their eyes and their minds to the Power that is already in their hands and see it for all it is and use the power for the better, whatever their life venues are. It's not hard to do, it doesn't come in a box or a can or from anywhere. So where does one find this existing Power? It lies Within ourselves, some are dormant, some are active,and some are learning. Only your own personal self can choose which door to go through. But to find it, you must pick the right door.
My opinion only; if you choose the wrong door because your life is in a whirlwind of conflict.
Then quickly, Find the 'EXIT" sign and and choose another door, and pray it's the right door. Just a thought. Thanks again Eric for sharing this message. Happy Mother's Day to your Family of Mother's.*Heart* *Heart*


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for entry "Experiencing God" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good job on the subject of this passage about understanding God's Real Love for all Mankind. I do believe now after reading this, it is where the phrase " Do Unto Others, As You'd Have Done To You"
Which happens to be one of my personal favorite phrase's. Bottom line; It is really the same message, just another way of saying it. And many people take this new phrase and turn it into 'Karma'..
But, however it is taken, the hopeful outcome of this phrase is spread as a 'pay it forward'. We need to remind those that this phrase came from, started by, meant for, all of mankind to understand and follow God's word if we ever expect World Peace.. Good Read!+++


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for entry "To Patiently Endure" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
P.S.
I hate to say this, but I sent my older sister 😍 a comment about an email I received talking about Job from the bible. We were raised by the same parents our whole life, and when I asked her what she thought about the text I had sent her. She replyed, " Yeah, I read it but I don't understand what your talking about.? If I could have slapped her through the phone waves, I would have. ( gently). 😤
So I asked her if she thought I was talking about a Job, (work) not the man.😠. Really sis.? I then told her to open her bible and read about Job, then maybe she'll understand what I said in the text..!
Some peoples kids.? Ugh! Lol. 🙃


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You Wow' d me again here Don Two; If your words could only spill out money as easy as it is when you write another masterpiece. I just learned about having an appropriate amount of sylables in poetry, and you do such a lovely job doing it. An Artist By Words, are you.
Don Two


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Gabreilla,
This came in my emails and the title grabbed me like I was caught by someone from almost being thrown from a car.. My intrest in getting published is like looking for that dang needle in the hay stack. Lol. I've dealt with the rejection letters and then after what seems to be years later, it finally came in the mail...another rejection letter.. I wonder if they even opened it?
I had included all nessessary paperwork, like a synopsis, my completed letter about who, when, and where; plus me, myself, and I letter. I thought I had the best presentation I could send. The years of research on perfecting a synopsis letter and the intro letter came back to me with a slap in my face. (not literally). But that's how it feels.
Been there, done that! And yet here I am, finally. I found a place in my life that's as comfortable as the biggest kusshyest chair in the room.
"Ahhhh,!" A place that's really exists, where others are wearing the same shoes as me! We are all walking to the same ending, yet every ending is different. So, now I must explore the plethora of endings.
Including some of my own! A place so small, but the whole world is in it and we are sharing a common desire. Who could ask for more?
WDC ROCKS. ! And better than any college class I'd have to get ready for everyday and pay out all my money and I have to drive down there too, no thanks.! "Not this girl". I've gotten all the learning and more being a part of another relm of writers and readers. Feels good! 😃🤗😎🤓😳😱😰😍🤑👍✨💫😲🙃😇😡☹️😏☺️🤕😲😷💤🐲🐉🐾🕷🐬🐓🐝🦄🐜🐴🐶🐱🐰🐯🐨🐼🐻🙊🙉🙈🐙🐣🌾🍂🕸🎃🎄🌍☄🌪❄️☔️🎼⛵️✈️🗽🏟🏯⌛️🕯💸💎⚔🛡🔫⚒☠🔪⚰🏺🔮💊💉🎉🎈📝💞💖🎶📓📖📚, just to name a few stories with different endings!
Enjoy them all! Yababy!

P.S.
I'd like your opinion on 'self~publishing.?' 🤔 Have a great day!🌤


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this one.! I am very thankful for my life and most of those in it. And I try whenever the subject comes up, to be as positive and spread the word of God to whomever I may be talking to..
Then after having a conversation about God, I always walk away feeling better inside my heart because the person I was talking to, listened and it makes us closer when you know someone who has the same feelings!!

A few months ago I was at Walmart with my husband. And a lady in front of us, seen in no time, his harshness, his attitude and his pain.
She turned to me before she walked away and said, "God Loves You"
Just like that, for no reason other than what she had just witnessed by the way my husband was acting.. I replied to her, " Thank you". And God Bless you too. 🙏✌️☺️ I had never seen her before or since.
To me she was kind of a messenger of God, letting me know he will help me in my time of need..!
Is that wonderful or what? 😇🌟


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for entry "Welcoming Persecution" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This April 25th, is great writing. You make a huge point when it comes to persecution. It's really a scary fact, and most people turn there heads away as though they don't see it.. Why is that? And for Gods Sake... Why are those men and women over seas killing so many people, even there own kind. I pray everyday for it to stop, but now reading this, I understand that it will Never Stop..! So sad!
People have said to me that living here on Earth, not by the earth itself, but by man that we already live in Hell..! When we die, that's when our souls will be happy in Heaven..
What are your thoughts Eric?


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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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for entry "Go and Do Likewise" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm thinking now to myself, what does God think of those who are so bad to other humans and or animals, that killing is joyous to them..! Sick to all others, but this person, man or woman, child or stranger, parent or guardian.. There lyes the most; Disobedient of them all.. God may be forgiving them for such heinous crimes and the extreme measures of disobedience, but I wonder if forgiveness allows their souls to be among those innocent souls in The House Of God.?? Just a thought? Hummmm.!! What are your thoughts?
Have a great day, I'm going to play it the dirt some more.. Still have lots of planting to get done..! ✨🤗


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for entry "Eyes on the Prize" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nice writing Eric.. I really liked this Seeing the Truth in Gods Righteousness.. Good meaning and encouraging feelings toward the whole world.. Those close and those far away.
My prayer everyday is for Peace and all the stupid fighting to stop.. Only some day!
Thanks for sharing.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello again Eric,, I was raised in the Catholic way, most of our prayers end with " The Holy Spirit.. I believe the Holy Spirit is God, Jesus, our Savior and so on, he is all in one. How we say or use the different words, I believe we still all mean the same in believing there is One, that we worship, we just call him by different names.
I make the Cross with my hand every time I enter a church, no matter what church it is... When my mother passed, we smothered her in Rosery's, and bible verses, prayer cards, gifts, flowers and I pined an Elephant on her outfit ( I made) proudly because my belief is an Elephant has long memories and create good luck.. So, my wish I sent with my mother to her resting place, was mine to wish and only mine.. I still Believe!


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for entry "Golden Calves" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Eric,, I really enjoyed reading this, "What is the currency of Heaven? ~ To me the currency of Heaven is only 'the charity one gave to others needs before he or she gets to Heaven.' One of my Mothers best phrases was, " You can't take it with you when you die." It made an impact in my way in life. How I made choices, the good and the bad. ( not real bad). I'm pleased with the choices I made so far in my life. I didn't do anything stupid, or hurtful to anyone. And I never lost my faith in God. It only grew as the older I got, because, now I understand his message to us in more detail and my Love for God has become a larger figure in my life and my afterlife.
I fear not, O' Lord.!
Question: Eric, have I dissraced our Lord by inking my body with Art, for it is said our body's are part of Gods temple..? But, then my thought was, ' my body, yes, internally not outwardly ' I have already accepted that God will hold my soul, not my body..! So, have I sined?


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