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Review of Saltwater Room  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, Keep your Head Down. I'm on the raid today and I thought I would stop by for a read. This short story "Saltwater Room" describes to me a young girl who's parents arguing upsets her to a point where she feels alone and left without a friend to talk to when her parents argue. She feels sadden, not able to take in the harshness of their ways. So, hurtful, she cries in her loneliness. The images of this story are very insightful and you explain her woes. When she returns back home the fighting has not ended, so she turnes her sadness into a flight of adventure by finding ocean life trinkets to place into her bucket of treasures. When suddenly she comes face to face with a mermaid and her sorrows fade away by the beauty she sees and feels from the mermaids kindness. Nicely written. This type of story can even be the beginning of a more in depth story about the young girls adventure with the mermaid.


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Review of Shark attack  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Marvin Schrebe, I stopped by for a Power review. I am amazed at your extensive writings. Wow, so many to choose from. So I picked this one. "Shark Attack". After reading it,my first thought was? Why would Andrew want to go into the water knowing there are sharks out there? But, I have to remember this is oly a story...lol You give this story, a short intense feeling until the dolphin shows up. Then, intense turns to excitement then gratuide. This is a very good short story about how an unexpected dolphin saves a stranger, a human. God did gives the animals a heart, not just to beat, but to be able to Love in return.


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Review of Doggie Spa Day  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Hooves, I want to congratulate you for a poem well done. First place winner! What a great feeling to win. I truly enjoyed this Doggie Day Spa poem. It's so real, we do this for my husbands Bully at least every six to eight week as well, or she'll tear up the furniture... I feel so bad for Nala when the vet hits her quick in her toe nails causing them to bleed. I want to hold her and shower her with kisses, but I'm not into getting slobbered on. Lol This was a good story poem.
Well Done, Hooves. 👍 🐾🐾


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Review of "The Daffodil..."  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very nice poem... Good luck!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello ~Pat~, I'm on the raid and I came across your story Honest To Goodness... Those were the days! By golly! Kids respected their parents and parents were strict with the kids. Good story, very detailed putting the reader in the mind of the character. You felt the need to be perfect or else. Worrying about something so minor, feeling the need to lie. And soon another lie, and so on. Thank Goodness this fifth child had faith to make things right. Too bad children today aren't like that anymore. Well, most children. Today, the world is afraid of other children. It has turned into a sad waste of life, to take others away from theirs. Good Read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mordee2, I'm on the raid today and I was pulled in by your title. Bravo!!! This was done beautifully. I totally enjoyed reading this cute poem and the story it tells of a Unicorn, a cat, and a fawn. And how they danced together and music came out of nowhere as they're dancing. A playful poem with a perfect prompt ending. Well Done!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello T.L.Finch, I'm on the raid today and I stopped by for a read. And I'm glad I did... This is very nicely worded and your use of such beautiful words makes it all that much better. It tells of the wolf and its life in the mountains struggling to live and the peace of the nights wild. This is beautiful. I had a tune in my head that started just after reading it... You're right, it could be a song! Good Read!


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Review of The Change  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ironworker, I'm on the raid today and stopped by for a read. First; This is well-written from a deer's perspective, I would think! Your detailed thoughts of the deer, what he was witnessing, and not understanding, 'why' or 'who'. Watching humans come into his homeland and take a large portion of it away with huge growling monsters who blew smoke into the air, just took away the forest, his home and home to many others who flew back into the forest before him. I really enjoyed this short story. It's not really fiction, which makes it sad. "But, it is still a Good Read!


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Max Griffin, I'm on the raid today and I saw the picture you placed with this piece and I just had to stop by. I'm a hobbyist and crafter, so the picture intrigued me.
This is a picture-perfect Andy Griffin/Mayberry town kind of story. And you did it with such nice taste, then adding the majestic miracle Pastor Dan witnessed from the Alabaster Stone Mary moving the twisted mess of a blanket onto the nativity baby Jesus, while Forrest Cheever's voice sang aloud in the background inside the church. To me, it tells of a 'Pastor', a Christian man who is not truly a good Christain deep down in his heart. As it should be. He is judgemental of people instead of being empathetic and a truly caring man. Shame on him! Good Read!


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Review of Writing.Com 101  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you all for this Honor. To be a part of the Preferred Authors Group is truly an Honor for me. I promise to continue my love for the WDC and all who write here. God Bless everyone here.
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Review of A Glass of Water  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ptc, I'm sew-no-more and I'm on the raid for newbies. This story title caught my curiosity,"A Glass Of Water" so simple, I had to stop and read. This was a very nice piece of work. Your words about a simple glass of water were incredibly detailed, distinct and fine. The story flowed nicely. I saw no mistakes that I could find. Everything looks great. Well written. Good Read!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello free writer, I'm sew-no-more and I'm on the raid. So, I stopped by when I saw this story. After finishing it, my first thought was, "this guy's "suicidal" big time! Thank goodness the mother and daughter he was giving a ride with, got out and into another passerby to get to her husband who was just in an accident. Good storyline, very believable too. In my opinion 'only', I did see several spelling mistakes in the first few paragraphs. And a few times(as we all do) your tenses are not correct for the timing of the story. No, worries, I did it all the time myself. Easy fixes. And I have a very good fix, for you. Its called "Grammarly.com" it is a"FREE" app you download on your computer and it's like having an editor right beside you when you write anything. It is Awesome. I never knew how many mistakes I've made writing until I got Grammarly. It will show you every mistake there is or not is. And I truly feel it will help you tremendously with this story and any more you decide to write in the future. Other than that, this is a good suspenseful story...it just needs some tweaking! :)... PS- my opinion again: change the title. word it more to draw the reader in.Just a thought. Keep writing!


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Review of The Silhouette  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello JayDee, I'm Sew-no-more and I'm on the raid. I stopped by to read your story 'The Silhouette'. At first read, I didn't quite understand where the story was going until near the ending. So, I read it again, and then I understood more of how this story is played out. Timothy, a small boy's father has died, but he didn't understand death, and what its final destination means. So, he starts hearing his father sing and play his guitar. But, there is no one around that hears it too. The first few paragraphs are very detailed, and it kinda throws the reader off, but the ending id not as detailed and the story plot is much clearer. I really liked the mystery of the guitar being in the room after the mother said she had given it away. That sends chills to the reader. And it did! In my opinion 'only', if you shorten the first half of the story by writing more pointful, rather than explaining about all Timothy's unbelievable dreams that his mother does not believe are true, it will read much better, with a good flow and a 'hook me' beginning. This is a good story. If you haven't tried "Grammerly.com" download it, it's FREE and wow, it's like having an editor correcting everything as you write it. I love it. I never knew how many unseen mistakes I had until I got Grammarly on my computer. It's a Green circle with the letter 'G' in the center... That way you'll get the right one. Congratulations on this story... Good Read!


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Review of My Imagination  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Jamie.. I came across this and had to stop by for a read. I loved it. You really are living a conundrum. This continued questioning of a character you can't get out of your head. He is a handsome man and you have complete control of his life and death. You can place him in any situation to create a good story. He can be the hero, or the killer. There is no set direction of his life unless you write it. You claim addiction over the plethora of things you could write with this man who consumes you mind. I suggest, you give him all the lives you can. Adventure, romance, horror, make him a hero, a father, or just the boy next door.. And don't fun out of tea! Make a bigger pot next time! Lol 🤗 😉


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Review of The Old Top Hat  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Genipher, I stopped in for a read of your short story. The Old Top Hat, This fits perfectly with the storyline. Its set up as a tradition, but the kids don't know it until the Top Hat is placed upon the snowman's head. Very traditional of Frosty the Snowman. But, to this grandmother, Frosty(aka) the 'real one' is actually the Real FRosty The Snowman. And the grandmother shares the magic with her grandkids before they stop believing. Well done Good Read!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello GirlwithaHeartbeat, I stopped by for a read of your short story; Sandy, The California Snowman. It totally caught my attention.(Because I'm from California~East LA area) So I know all the beaches down there. LOl. I loved this story about a Sandy Snowman, Wish I had thought about it. LOl- Everything looked great. Commas, spelling, Quotes all that stuff. Good imagination and put together nicely. And keeping with the traditional Frosty's Hat that brings him to life was a plus. But, the waters swept him away, just as the snow would melt Frosty in the sunshine. Good Read!


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Review of In Which I Obey  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello slowmotionsunset, I seen this posted on the Hub, and thought I'd stop for a read. Your poetry is vividly true, in a lot of places. Not nice! But, to those who 'see you' first, before judging you as a disabled person first are among the naive and pathetic. Unyielding any empathy for others. It's a sad thing. A sad way of life for them, because one never knows if they themselves will ever be bound to a wheelchair. Now it's a 'REAL' sad thing. This is nicely worded, because of the truth within your words. Good Read!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Helllo Jamie. I just seen this in the Hub and decided to stop in for a read. This is very Lovely written. Two strangers, just passers by, not knowing who each other was in this set of time. Then a glance brings them together in a dance only they can hear the music coming from the river waters and soundless chimes. Like a love affair that lasted only for a moment. Beautifully written!! Your descriptions of everything around this lady, the colors, the sounds, her feelings of all she sees within her path. Nice job!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Martins, I came across your short story in the news letter and decided to read and give you a review. This was a shocker at the end, it read well and you showed the fun Tommy and his parents had all the times visiting the museum and getting ice cream. As it was becoming a kind of ritchual for them. Then, as too many children do in real life, run out into the street, and suddenly there's a casualty. This shocked me when it was the mother who was hit by the car. Very touching and sad. But, a very Good Read! PS: Just a thought.. this course use a few more commas ( not many) and separate the sentences and paragraphs into a more appealing structure. It makes for a much better read for the reader... And credit for you.! Nice work Martins. 👍 Merry Christmas 🎄 ✨


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Bravo..! Angus, How wonderfully this was written, ( in the thoughts of the Tree) I totally imagined the tree saying all of this during it's duration into final death. Knowing the outcome, but not understanding why? I felt these feelings from the last 'real tree' i ever had. So, I went out and bought an artificial tree. And I felt so much better about that tree, because it was a decoration all by itself. Then we decorate it. So, last year I planted three 'Blue Spruce" trees in my front yard... To live and be a part of mother earth for more than twelve years, maybe to 100 years now. :)
Good Read!


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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello HuntersMoon, I'm still on the raid and I've come across your poem, The House On The Hill. I really enjoyed this, especially for its age appropriate and appealing for a child. Not to scary, just right for a Halloween sleep over or just, (like you said) a bedtime story. I really liked the flow of it. Easy to understand (again, age appropriate). Well done. The story line is awesome and thrilling. A great tale for a good dramatic reading. The title is also good for the picture chosen. It creates an interesting and curious appeal. Good read!
 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Fangus, I'm on the raid today and I came across your story titled "The Black Cape and Top Hat". At first I thought as I began to read this was, okay, sounds like a cute story. Then, I finished reading it. I must say, you really shocked me with this ending. Ewwww, I felt truly scared. My feelings are so saddened for poor Ben. You really put the word "imagination" to the test. Well done in the horror genre. I'm still a little scared writing this. 😱 If there are any mistakes in this, then I've missed them, because how intense I began feeling (what you want the reader to feel) as I read on. You captivated my interest with this short story. 👍 🍂🎃 Good read!
 
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Review of The Hunter  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello again W. D. Wilcox. I'm still on the raid, when I seen this story of yours "The Hunter" This story tells of many people, sadly to say. The kind of people who are annoying as hell and will never stop the exacturating about everything they do. Drunks, mostly! But this man Cletus, put the challenge out there to another man who was tired of his continued BS.. So, to stop it all, he derived a solution after visually thinking of how to kill Cletus to stop his lies and make it appear as an accident. When Cletus is offered a bellyful of more alcohol if he takes the other man out to shoot a deer to prove to him his so called professional sportsmanship on hunting is accepted. But, it turned out to be the wrong challenge and the last he'll ever make. I found this to be an interesting story, it reminded me of the movie"Bosses" where co-workers from different jobs hate their business she's and plan on how to kill them. Good job on this short story... In memory of Cletus Brooks- liar extrodinar... 👍 🤗 God read!


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Review of Mirror Image  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello April DeathRay. I'm on the raid and had to read your "Mirror Image" poem. The first paragraph begins the poem with a hateful, painful, and demonized person. And when I got to the ending, wow! I was surprised by it. But it really makes sense of the first paragraph. Well done! Your use of grafic details is amazingly done. Very morbid as the killer turned out to be the mother. What could posses a mother of all people to do such harm in such a brutal way to her own children? But, in truth.. Sadly it has happened somewhere at sometime... (I'm sure.) I enjoyed how you kept the thrilling suspense of the killer and showed the reader the items used for this horrific story/ poem. I also liked how the ending portrays the mother in an out of body experience as to why she did this deadly deed, then only to see it was herself in a reflection of another. Good read! 🤗


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Review of Stairway To Hell  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello W.D. Wilcox, I'm on the raid today and your title captured me. I had to see what this story in tails. Creepy and very good as you show the reader the grousum ways of death and how Hatch explained what he did to the women he killed, only to find the end of the Stairway To Hell in his own way. A rat, flesh eating rodent, that becomes his end. You had me trapped within this story, to complete reading it to the end.
Very good visuals in your words. Hatch is a morbid soul, and prediture. I found myself reading this and it held my interest quite well, and I don't do horror movies at all. Well done, W. D. Wilcox with this horrific story. Good read!


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