|The topic is a good one and had me questioning my own "evaluation system". I had some crazy ideas of what the "perfect" woman or someone who was "Sent from Heaven" should be. I found that I was holding my perfect partner to even higher standards then I held myself. (that was an awakening but no need to get into it here).
I like your writing and your style. It flows and is easy to follow.
As to cleaning it up
never did drugs or never drank (you can remove the 2nd never)
The guy who didn't grow up with a silver spoon in his mouth, the guy who had to get a job to get a car, the guy who got in trouble with the cops when he was younger
(this is a bit of a run on, you can make it flow a little better by perhaps saying.)
The guy who didn't grow up with a silver spoon in his mouth, instead he had to get a job to buy a car. He got in trouble with the cops when he was younger. (it might flow a little better like this)
When I think of that person this guy comes right to my head because he is the guy who will hold you tight at night, he is the one who will help you with anything you need help with without even asking him. (if we put a period between right after night and capitalize He it will again flow a bit better)
So when he asks me to be next to him in the future and that he promises to never hurt me , I truly believe he my man sent from heaven. ( So when he asks me to be next to him in the future, and promises to never hurt me, I truly believe he is my man sent from Heaven.)
It flows pretty well but I think this might be a bit better. I am new here and apologize if the review came across harsh. It was not meant to be and the story made me reflect about my own perfect woman. It's a great topic and very easy to follow and flowing. Good Job!