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#4872301

Review of Russian Politicians Today  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jun 14, 2026 at 5:43am

Length:   1,296 Characters | 1,180 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search centered around Russian politics. WHAT I LIKED I have always been fascinated by all things Russian, so finding this was a gem of a find for me. The puzzle was created in Feb 2004 and it's really stood the test of time. Heck, 22 years later Putin is still relevant in Russian politics. ENGAGING I found the word search very engaging. I was curious about some of the Russian names and in that regard, the puzzle is educational as well as intriguing. VARIETY There were a lot of good word choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction sounds like this is a compliment activity to perhaps something written in the member's portfolio, so if anything, my suggestion would be to clarify the intro a bit. I did not the member was last on Jan 2021. Overall though, if you find Russians interesting, you'll enjoying this word search! An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4872272

Review of Indigenous Roots (names of US states)  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 13, 2026 at 8:09pm

Length:   961 Characters | 845 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search that focused on the indigenous roots of the names of several US states. WHAT I LIKED I thought the word search was very educational and informative in a very fun way. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and fun. I couldn't wait to find the next state. VARIETY There were a lot of choices of states and I appreciated how the states were selected. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did a great job explaining the roots of the states that were in the puzzle. Overall, a fun search that educates in a fun way. A Bee Hive Review FORUM Steph Bee's Honey Pit   (E) JUNE2026 - hang out with the Bees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for JUN 2026 is OUT! #1474097 by SoccerBee

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#4872269

Review of The Garage Scam  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Given:   Jun 13, 2026 at 7:47pm

Length:   1,315 Characters | 1,204 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. FIRST IMPRESSIONS This was a conversational, train of thought and blow-by-blow look at cleaning the garage and one I can sympathize with. We USED to be able to get a car in our garage but my husband has let it go and now we can barely walk in it. WHAT I LIKED I was so there to balancing unwieldily items on stuff I didn't think was possible to the garage not going down due to alignment. OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, the story starts rather train of thought and found the hook with all the room the garage offers. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The title was a great for this Flash. My suggestion would be to pull back a little on the train of thought style and add just a pinch more of comedic flare and this story would shine as the conversational tone is already there. Overall, I suspect many would sympathize with an overgrown garage. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4872265

Review of Happy-faced Through My Microwave Door  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jun 13, 2026 at 7:39pm

Length:   1,550 Characters | 1,432 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I found this item using the Read & Review feature. THE POEM Written in 2005, a though provoking poem about where politics can take us. WHAT I LIKED The found the poem as relevant today as it was back when it was written. It took a topical look at the events that shape responses and land in a nation's laps as it's "politics." STRUCTURE This is a free form poem with a train of thought of dynamic that was eclectic yet always found a way to come back to the heart of the matter. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "bringing our public psyche into the open, bruised though it might be facing world politics. This is more of a statement, but it touches on the emotional state of the public psyche in the face of world politics and was a reminder that we are all not the same in how we react to world events. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening intrigued me as it stared at the microwave door, a bit "zombie-ish", trying to process what exactly is happening. The title is a reflective fit for the poem. What I appreciated about the poem was how it dared the reader to go deeper without sounding divisive or raw. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4872005

Review of I'm sure you are.  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 12, 2026 at 4:49am

Length:   1,175 Characters | 1,054 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH A man walks into a bar with his shirt unbuttoned and tries to pick up two girls. WHAT I LIKED This was hilarious! We've all met a Larry, haven't we? OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, the story tell us that Larry is a lounge lizard who likes to sashay and leave his shirt unbuttoned. The visual alone is enough to keep reading just to find out what happens to him. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The title is a good fit for this Flash. The author uses a good economy in strategic places to paint vivid visuals such as: "Carla rolled her eyes so hard it physically hurt." Overall, the comedic elements really shine in this flash. The punch line lands the prompt! Very entertaining. A Bee Hive Review

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#4872003

Review of For us Mandalorian Geeks  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 12, 2026 at 4:39am

Length:   951 Characters | 826 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search with a Mandalorian theme. WHAT I LIKED While I've never seen the Mandalorian, this puzzle brings back good Star Wars memories. ENGAGING The word search is very engaging. It was a lot of fun trying to find the words. VARIETY There were a lot of good word choices that stayed on theme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction is succinct and to the point and I agree - he's cute and fun. As a suggestion, you could make the introduction more jazzy. Overall though, a fun Star Wars related word search. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4871944

Review of Prayer as Meditation  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 11, 2026 at 7:21pm

Length:   1,144 Characters | 1,047 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. First Impressions The essay takes a look at meditation and prayer, their similarities and differences. The author argues there aren't much differences, and I have to agree. Both are intended to be calming and to release negative thoughts. WHAT I LIKED I thought the essay was very concise and to the point. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph gives an overview of mediation and prayer using a conversational tone of voice which draws right in as something they can relate to. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The topic was handled with just the right amount of sensitivity and honesty. The author's voice comes across as gentle and sincere. What was a delight for me is that my thoughts are pretty much the same on the topic. Overall, an intriguing item that lingers. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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Review of Easter Wordsearch  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jun 10, 2026 at 9:38pm

Length:   1,139 Characters | 1,022 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search centered around the more spiritual meaning of Easter. WHAT I LIKED I thought the word selection did a great job capturing the different aspects and growth of the Easter season. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and fun. It brought back good memories of the Easter season. VARIETY There was a nice selection of words that stayed on topic. If anything, you might be able to add some more words since you have room. Words like Easter Candle, Lilies, and Baptism come to mind. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS I might suggest jazzing up the introduction a bit using a giphy or maybe an explanation as to why you wanted to make an Easter word search. Overall, a sharp word search for the Easter season. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4871683

Review of 90's Internet Nostalgia  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jun 9, 2026 at 7:45pm

Length:   1,082 Characters | 963 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search full of 90's nostaglia. WHAT I LIKED I really enjoyed this. I smiled fondly as I searched for these. This puzzle brought back good memories! ENGAGING The word search was very engaging. Some words are still with us and some aren't. Surprising what stands the test of time. VARIETY There were a lot of great word choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS I might suggest using a giphy or graphic in the introduction to make it more appealing or maybe explain why you choose this topic for the word search. The member has been on since 2020, but this puzzle is real gem which will have you going down memory lane in a good way! An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4871560

Review of A Literary Confection  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 8, 2026 at 9:22pm

Length:   1,284 Characters | 1,151 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM A tasty poem that stirs up a successful recipe for your writing. WHAT I LIKED I loved the creativity of this poem. This is definitely a recipe for success! STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with 5 quatrains. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "A sprinkling of characters, seasonal flavorings. Hot pepper for a monster or brass balls for a king." There were so many good descriptions, but this one stuck out to me because good storytelling starts with good characters. Monsters tend to be spicy and kings need some brass balls to get things done. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening starts with a cup, a twist and a tablespoon of basic ingredients. Then you get to the spices! The title is a perfect fit for the poem. Vibrant and tasty, a well stirred potion for story success! An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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Review of Easter Egg Abundance!  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 8, 2026 at 7:39am

Length:   911 Characters | 782 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search filled with Easter Chocolates. WHAT I LIKED What a yummy delight. You should give this item a shout out on the newsfeed every Easter because everyone loves chocolate. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and had my mouth watering for creme eggs. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was succinct and to the point. Overall a yummy search that will bring out the sweet tooth in you. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4871349

Review of Bard's Hall May 2026 – A Big Blue  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 7, 2026 at 8:16am

Length:   1,025 Characters | 908 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH A favorite fishing spot lands a BIG fish. WHAT I LIKED I liked how I could sense the pride and joy as the author shared their big catch. OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, the author lures you in by introducing their favorite fishing spot. Now you have to hang on to find out about the fish. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS This quick little packs quite a punch. There's an exciting fishing story with a big surprise. The story followed the prompt for the contest. Overall, a feel good story that will the reader with a smile. A Bard's Hall Contest Review

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Review of The Cave  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Given:   Jun 7, 2026 at 8:12am

Length:   1,208 Characters | 1,096 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH A bunch of teenagers are on a camping trip and investigate an old cave. WHAT I LIKED That story was definitely a heart stopper! OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, the story starts off on an average note and as a reader I'm not expecting much, until... MECHANICS I might suggest a edit for punctuation, spelling, and narration. The story switches from past to present tense. I might just use the past tense as it takes place in the past. As written, - Inside we pause, should be paused. I shined my light. PARTING THOUGHTS The ending really creeped me out and really sold the story, but it was sad that stepdad had to act like that. Sometimes Adulting is hard. The story followed the prompt for the contest. Overall, this will definitely spike your heartrate! A Bard's Hall Contest Review

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Review of Office Supplies  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jun 7, 2026 at 8:02am

Length:   969 Characters | 848 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This is a word search about office supplies. WHAT I LIKED This word search made office supplies fun. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging. I had fun hunting down paper, staples, and more! VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic. Seems there are more office supplies than meets the eye! MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS I might suggest spicing up the introduction a little, if do-able, but the member hasn't been on since April 2008. Still, this word search is a gem and a great way to take a break when you need one. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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Review of A Mother's Love  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 6, 2026 at 6:33pm

Length:   993 Characters | 897 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH Life takes turns you don't expect but come to appreciate. WHAT I LIKED I liked how the story ended on an upbeat note. OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. You come to understand how a young man and woman, still teens, realize the consequences of their actions. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation. PARTING THOUGHTS A powerful flash about adoption. The story followed the prompt for the contest. The flash captured emotion well and leaves the reader to wonder about what it takes to make a good decision. A Bard's Hall Contest Review

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Review of Invisible Things  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 6, 2026 at 6:25pm

Length:   1,038 Characters | 942 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH A quiet, poignant story about love that takes place during the darkness. WHAT I LIKED I liked the quiet look into Elena's life. I think we've all been there at some point. Sometimes a kiss on the forehead is all you need. OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, story starts quietly as Elena reflects on life as she folds clothes. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS Married life is filled with highs and lows and in-betweens and this flash is a good solid depiction of it all. The story followed the prompt for the contest. An emotional flash that touches the heartstrings. A Bard's Hall Contest Review

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Review of Sassy Lady  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 6, 2026 at 5:17pm

Length:   995 Characters | 875 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A thoughtful word search that makes you think about self care. WHAT I LIKED I liked the inspirational tone of the word search. ENGAGING The word search is very engaging, though at first glance a tad intimidating with the size. Every word builds on the other when it comes to self care, which I like. VARIETY There were a lot of good phrases that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction set a nice, inviting tone, welcoming puzzle takers in and offering a moment to recharge the batteries. Overall, a nice break in the buzzyiness of your day. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama

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#4871181

Review of A Mother’s Love  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 6, 2026 at 2:05am

Length:   1,028 Characters | 932 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH An intense story about pride and how hard it is to admit fault. WHAT I LIKED This short really tugged on my heartstrings. Sometimes pride really gets in the way of relationships. OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, the story opens with a birthday, a happy occasion, but to get to it, someone has to push their pride aside and take the first step. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The story did a good job capturing intense emotion in only 100 words, and followed the prompt for the contest. Overall, a poignant read that leaves the reader on a hopeful note. A Bard's Hall Contest Review

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Review of A Mother's Love  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jun 6, 2026 at 1:55am

Length:   1,093 Characters | 984 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH A gritty, raw, heartbreaking flash of the horrors of parental abuse. WHAT I LIKED I was impressed with how the author captured the intensity of such negative emotion in a 100 words. OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, the story hits you quick and fast with mother's cruelty as evidenced by cold bruises and stinging insults. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation. PARTING THOUGHTS The title is a deceptive one for this Flash, implying love yet, showing another situation. The story followed the prompt for the contest. Overall, a poignant, gripping read that will tear at the heart. A Bard's Hall Contest Review

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#4871171

Review of Slumber Land  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 5, 2026 at 11:39pm

Length:   1,209 Characters | 1,101 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM A poem that watches a child as they sleep. WHAT I LIKED I enjoyed just sitting back and feeling the mood/tone of the poem, a watchful guardian over a sleeping baby. STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with a ABAB rythme scheme. There's a nice, easy, relaxing beat. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "Lips quiver as a violin caressed, as you flow on nocturnal streams." This is a very peaceful, tranquil visual to me. Our sleeping baby is drifting off to dreamland in an easy, light way. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The title is a nice fit for the poem and is complimented by the soft baby blue font. It's amazing the peace that overcomes our souls as we care for our kids. There's a lot of warm feeling in this poem that just seeps into you as you read. A Bee Hive Review FORUM Steph Bee's Honey Pit   (E) JUNE2026 - hang out with the Bees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for JUN 2026 is OUT! #1474097 by SoccerBee

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Review of Squirrel Fishing  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 3, 2026 at 10:21pm

Length:   1,086 Characters | 977 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH The story recalls a memory of fishing and ... squirrel fishing. WHAT I LIKED I loved the easy, light hearted approach to the story and the ending made me chuckle. OPENING PARAGRAPH The story is intended to be flash fiction, so the opening really needs to grab the reader. Here, the opening paints a picture of being in nature, trying to find a spot in the water next to more seasoned fishermen. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation. PARTING THOUGHTS The title is a good fit for this Flash. The story followed the prompt for the contest. A warmhearted story that will leave the reader feeling upbeat and recalling their own memories of trying to fish. A Bard's Hall Contest Review

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Review of Waiting Behind The Walls  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 2, 2026 at 12:40pm

Length:   867 Characters | 761 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A heartfelt word search that takes a look at the strength and devotion of a prison wife. WHAT I LIKED I thought this was a very inspirational word search. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and I liked how it brought such emotions as compassion and kindness. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices used to highlight strength and devotion. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction is succinct and to the point. This word search is full of heart. A Bee Hive Review

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Review of Area 51  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   May 30, 2026 at 1:47pm

Length:   1,036 Characters | 930 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search about Aliens and Area 51. WHAT I LIKED Since Aliens are in the news a lot lately, I thought I'd have some fun with this puzzle. ENGAGING The word search is very engaging with a lot of words that bring out the conspiracy theorist in you. VARIETY There were a lot of good word choices that stayed on theme and let your imagination fly! MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS I might suggest doing a bit more to make the introduction entertaining so as to lure the puzzle taker in. Have fun with it. Use a giphy, graphic or youtube video. Explain why you wanted to do make this type of word search. Entertaining and imaginative. A Bee Hive Review

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#4870194

Review of How Well Do You Know The Bible?  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Given:   May 29, 2026 at 9:29pm

Length:   1,231 Characters | 1,105 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. This was another gem I found using the completely random feature. THE QUIZ This is a quiz with a Bible theme. WHAT I LIKED I liked the theme, and though I'm not wicked versed in the Bible, I thought I'd take it. I scored 11 out of 20, which was better than I thought I would do. ENGAGING The quiz was interesting, but some of the questions were kind of obscure which took away from the engagement. VARIETY There were a nice variety of questions, and answers offered a good variety which you could narrow down to 2 strong possibilities. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS My only suggestion would be to jazz up the introduction a little, however I did not the member has not been on since 2007. Also, I might use more common questions to inspire engagement, but overall, it's a solid test of your Bible knowledge. A Bee Hive Review FORUM Steph Bee's Honey Pit   (E) JUNE2026 - hang out with the Bees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for JUN 2026 is OUT! #1474097 by SoccerBee

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#4870187

Review of Pets  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Given:   May 29, 2026 at 8:19pm

Length:   1,190 Characters | 1,072 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I found the member using the Completely Random feature. It's kind of nice because you can find some real gems that way. THE POLL This is a poll with a pet theme. WHAT I LIKED It's National Pet Month, so I couldn't turn down this poll. ENGAGING The poll was very engaging with its options. It has all the usual options plus some fun ones and allows for others. I'm thinking Andy here with his spiders. Of course Dogs was the bigger winner. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS My only suggestion would be to jazz up the introduction a little and maybe explain why you wanted to do a poll like this - personalize it a little. I did see it was modified in 2020 but when you check the online status the member hasn't been on since JAN 2009. Overall, it's a nice compliment for national pet month. A Bee Hive Review FORUM Steph Bee's Honey Pit   (E) JUNE2026 - hang out with the Bees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for JUN 2026 is OUT! #1474097 by SoccerBee