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THE POEM
The poem was a nice tribute to birds.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the word painting of the birds, just hanging out and enjoying life on the branches.
STRUCTURE
This is a cinquain, a short unrhymed poem. The type of poem is explained in the item.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Chirping, munching," These are two great action verbs which describe what birds do. Thy chirp, they munch. It's easy to see a bird just doing this and being happy.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in with an easy word - birdies. The title is a great fit for the poem. I enjoyed this poem for it's entertainment and it's teaching aspects.
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THE POEM
The poem was about challenges and finding ways to manage those challenges.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the heartfelt finding that the Lord offers patience in challenging times. It made the poem very inspirational.
STRUCTURE
This is a free poem with no apparent rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Love can lead to head-scratching, but faithfully, I trod –
A love so true and blessed as this, quite trustingly I nod," This is a vivid emotional release. For me it was "Let go and Let God." It's a very positive message.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening appeals to the reader by talking about the ins and outs of every day life. The title is an intriguing fit for the poem. I enjoyed the positive, uplifting message.
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THE STORY
Rebecca wakes up not in the warm comfort of her bed, but in an old house years ago.
WHAT I LIKED
I enjoyed the deep character voice. I felt like I was in the thick of the dilemma right along with Rebecca.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person limited in Rebecca's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph starts with Rebecca waking up and finding out the world is not right. Her emotions spike as she makes this realization. As a reader, I wanted to find out more.
CHARACTERS
Rebecca is absolutely confused as to how this happened and so is the reader!
FLOW & PACING
The opening set up the problem, the middle set on a exploring that problem and end left Rebecca and the reader wondering what was going to happen.
MECHANICS
I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation of the story.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The title fits the story. The story moves well to increase the mystery and Rebecca's dilemma. It's a good start for a longer story. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest.
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THE STORY
Maria woke up and found herself in the past - Pine Hallow, Massachusetts in 1843. As she goes through the story trying to find a way back, she has discovers she has choices to make.
WHAT I LIKED
For being a "Flash Fiction," 1K words or less, I thought this story was really fleshed out well and the ending didn't feel rushed, but right in time with the pace of the story.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person limited from Maria's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue accents the narration.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph sets up the dilemma - Maria is challenged to find that she isn't where she thought she would be.
CHARACTERS
Maria comes across with a range of emotions from genuine confusion, to "okay, I gotta' be here," to really questioning her motives. The characterization is spot on for a short story this size.
FLOW & PACING
The opening set up the problem, the middle dealt with how Maria dealt with the problem and end was spot on!
MECHANICS
I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The title fits the story. The story captured the goodwill and hope of the Christmas season well. Word count was listed IAW the rules. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest.
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THE POEM
A poem about the challenges of motherhood.
WHAT I LIKED
I can see the progression of life and how a child challenges their parents, here, i.e. their mother. The theme of the poem is posed with a rhetorical question.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem with 4 quatrains and no apparent rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "When you have grown old, And little ones call you Grandmother," This is an easy visual, as most picture their own grandmother. Still, the question stirs the heartstrings as one ponders why the poet has asked it.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in with their questioning and keeps them reading. The title fits for the poem. The poem is presented in a way to make the reader think about what it's like to be a mother.
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THE WORD SEARCH
This is a word search based of the Japanese Manga series, Kimetsu no Yaibu.
WHAT I LIKED
I know hardly anything about Manga, but I found the presentation of the word search interesting and it piqued my curiosity.
ENGAGING
I was very engaged, especially with the words that had odd spellings to me. I was determined to find them.
VARIETY
There were a lot of good word choices that stayed on theme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
Great introduction! For someone with little knowledge, the introduction really did a lot to ease me into what to expect with this word search. It made the sale, so to speak and send me in 'cold turkey.' If you enjoy the manga genre, I think you'll enjoy this word search!
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THE POEM/PROSE
The poem/prose told a story about a turkey hunter who had a perfect shot, but finds something else instead.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the warmhearted story that the prose told. There was a lot of character depth, not only in our hunter, but in the turkey and the hunter's wife as well.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme. For me, it was more prose-y, but the prompt it was written was for a poem.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation of the item.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "A tom unfurled his splendor, opening to perfect shot. Head up, his beard chest long, alert." What I liked about this description was how totally encompassing it was. It's easy to visualize - a turkey his plummage spread, unknowing the hunter is nearby, full of pride - "come get it me," it dares.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading with the turkey call. The reader's right there with our turkey hunter, like a quiet visitor, just watching and experiencing all the emotion right along with him. The title is a good fit for the poem. I enjoyed the journey and was in the moment right along with our hunter. The ending was honest, and raw, and heartwarming.
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THE WORD SEARCH
This word search has a Raggedy Ann and Andy theme.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the introduction and the offer of a merit badge (with a fee, just FYI). The introduction did a great job setting the theme and expectations of the puzzle.
ENGAGING
I was very engaged in finding the words. If you didn't know a lot about about these dolls, it just might pique your interest.
VARIETY
There were a lot of good choices that stayed on theme and over
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML in the introduction to enhance the presentation.
PARTING THOUGHTS
Overall, a fun puzzle! If you enjoy puzzles, you'll enjoy this one!
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THE POEM
A poem about Writing.com - it's pros and cons.
WHAT I LIKED
The poem shares a lot of heart about what it's like to be "present" at Writing.com. Written over 22 years ago, Writing.com really allows authors to explore different facets of writing, from flash fictions to novels, to poems. We've all been up late just getting one more poem up, one more review up, and even just organizing our ports. All pros. Our con is staying up to 2 a.m. when we should be in bed.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem with 9 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to enhance the presentation.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "I often picture other writers, Gifted, clever and all-nighters;" This is easy enough to picture - a tired writer, eyes droopy and glassy, coffee or Red Bull at the ready (and maybe even a cigarette) yet totally focused on the screen or the pen and paper. The number one emotion that comes through for me is admiration for those who power through.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading with it's catchy beat and with a subject we all can relate to. The title is a nice fit for the poem. A moving tribute to the staying power of Writing.com
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THE LYRICS
A poem of love put to song.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked how the prose depicted growth as the love grew deeper.
STRUCTURE
There are 9 verses in the lyrics with some rythms. The emphasis is more on the beat and the "feel" of the musical instruments when read outloud.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to emphasis the presentation.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "You're the heartbeat in the silence, the song I've always known," These words speak to very strong feelings that are felt inside a person with romantic intensity that's hard to fully articulate well, but the author does a wonderful finding just the right words.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in with a hint of romance and keep them reading. The title is a nice fit for the lyrics and comes full circle with the ending. Full of heart, respect, and love. Well done.
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THE ESSAY
A look at human rights, freedom, and equality.
WHAT I LIKED
I thought this was a well reasoned, persuasive argument regarding the beginning of human rights and the concept of "all men are created equal."
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the third person omnisicent. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
THEME
The theme involved an examination of where human rights began. While the western words looks to writers like Voltaire and Locke, the author offers a concept which is a deeper one, coming from Christian roots and faith.
EMOTIONAL BEATS How well does the emotional beat resonate with the reader? Great; Good; Okay.
I think the writer gives the reader food for thought.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to stress points.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening paragraph invites the reader to consider the rhetorical question where does our human rights come from - it's not where you think it does. The ending is poignant and thought provoking and I hope gives the reader pause to think.
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THE STORY
Ravi gets a big order of bread that he has to fill. Will there be enough time?
WHAT I LIKED
I liked how layered the suspenseful elements were, putting pressure on Ravi and then watching how he dealt with the pressure.
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person omnisicent. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue accents the narration.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph is simple. It tells us Ravi is sweating. The reader soon figures out it's literally and figuratively.
CHARACTERS
Ravi is an easy going guy who is just trying to make money - and bread.
FLOW & PACING
The opening set up the problem, the middle up'd the tension and end was a surprise for Ravi. Well done.
MECHANICS
I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDCL ML to enhance the presentation.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The title fits the story. I liked the ending. It was upbeat and hopeful and worked out for Ravi. Glad to see the good guy was given and extra day. A heartwarming character driven story.
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THE STORY
Ralph has the answer to 3iAtlas.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the ending. It landed on the perfect comedic note!
POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the 3rd person omnisicent. Past tense is used in the story.
DIALOGUE
The dialogue drives the narration.
OPENING PARAGRAPH
The opening paragraph puts the reader in the heat of the action with Ralph's unkempt appearance. Something is going on and it's happening RIGHT NOW. Well done.
CHARACTERS
Ralph and Jeff. Ralph is all in on the 3iAtlas hype. Jeff, well maybe not so much. Reminded me of the two muppet judges/critics Statler and Waldof.
FLOW & PACING
The opening set up the problem, the middle hyped up the anticipation and the ending landed with a chuckle.
MECHANICS
I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The title is representative of the story and reflective of the theme. Short sentences help to drive up the suspense. We're dying to know what Ralph is going to say. The ending is perfect. There's a lot of speculation out there about 3iAtlas - and honestly, it is what it is. Nothing wrong with having some fun with it.
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THE WORD SEARCH
A word search inclusive of the holiday season.
WHAT I LIKED
The word search had a little something for everyone and I learned about Bodhi Day. I like learning about new things in a fun way.
ENGAGING
The word search was very engaging and it was fun to hunt down all the holiday words.
VARIETY
There were a lot of words used that did a good job capturing the theme of the puzzle.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The introduction did a good job framing the expectations for the puzzle as well as explaining some lesser known events that occur during the holiday season. A delightful word search!
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THE WORD SEARCH
This is a word search about the words we find in beloved Christmas/Holiday songs.
WHAT I LIKED
There was a nice selection of words that evoked some of my favorite Christmas songs.
ENGAGING
The puzzle is very engaging and it was fun to look for the words.
VARIETY
There were a 25 words in the puzzle and all the words used stayed authentic to the theme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Nice use of WDC ML to spruce up the introduction.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The introduction did a nice job establishing the theme of the puzzle. You can't help but hear holiday songs in your head as you do the puzzle. Nicely done.
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THE POEM
The poem captured the ambience of the season and wove in elements of budding romance effortlessly.
WHAT I LIKED
I felt like I was a leaf on a branch getting ready to fall, watching two people enjoy the nature walk.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font making the presentation visually appealing.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "With trembling hands, I caught love notes, dancing on the evening breeze," I really enjoyed this word play here. I have a sense of two young people walking hand and hand, smiling as they enjoy the breeze and the swirling notes of autumn around them. I felt a tad guilty peeking in on them.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader for a barefoot walk and keeps them reading. The title is reflective of the poem. Excellent word play. I enjoyed the totality of the moment of the poem.
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THE POEM
A charming poem about a couple that works well together.
WHAT I LIKED
I enjoyed the beat of the poem. It captured that lightheartedness of the couple.
STRUCTURE
This is a free form with a mixed rhyming pattern. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and add color. Makes the poem easier to read on WDC.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "We stand in the middle, beneath the same skies." It's an easy picture, two people standing together, but the use of the middle implies they see each other as equals, taking on the same adventure of life together. There's a lot of warmhearted overtones here.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader down to the coast and keeps them reading as the reader wants to find out what will happen next. The title is reflective of the poem. I enjoyed the lighthearted characterization of the poem.
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THE POEM
Note: I found this poem on the Read and Review feature.
A moment in time captured on a bleak day can still host a heart full of love.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the message - even with storms, love can surge between gloomy clouds.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem with 3 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: Certainly crisp like the earth's major storms - the wind persists challenged by dark eerie forms," For me, this was like taking the 40,000 foot view of life - envisioning a storm, that once over still lingers. Life is a lot of like that. Everyday life can be storm and it can linger which can be a bit sad if you think about it. Then the next line brings hope - "The life of love surges between gloomy clouds"
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening intrigues the reader and keeps them reading. The title is a good fit for the poem. A poignant read.
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THE WORD SEARCH
A word search about Krampus who likes to chase naughty children at Christmas time.
WHAT I LIKED
It was a fun puzzle which reminded me not to be naughty at Christmas time.
ENGAGING
I was very engaged and didn't have any difficulty finding the words.
VARIETY
There were a lot of good word choices that reflected the theme of the word search.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
PARTING THOUGHTS
The introduction had a trailer link to Krampus the movie and set the tone/mood of the word search well. Overall, a fun search for this time of year for the spook in your house!
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THE POEM
A poem about what happens when the Tetris doesn't make it.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the vivid action which was portrayed using a good economy of words.
STRUCTURE
This is a tetractys poem with a link that explains the type. I hadn't seen it before so I learned something new.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Quicker, more frenetic they start to fall." I read this line and felt rushed, danger, oh no! Yikes...! Sigh... Those blocks are falling and I failed to complete my mission. Well done, capturing the moment of excitement and disaster.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening paints a vivid of picture which invites the reader in. The title is a nice play on words reflecting the theme of the poem. I enjoyed learning about the form and how one can capture emotions using just the right words.
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THE POEM
An intriguing poem with a haunting invitation.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the imagery the poem evoked. I could picture, a curious little girl, debating in my mind if I should take up the invitation.
STRUCTURE
This is a kyrielle sonnet with structure explained as a footnote in the poem. This is very helpful, especially to newer community members or newer poets.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: Welcome to wondrous wonderland, Come deeper down the rabbit hole," I enjoyed the alliteration here using the "W" sound. When I read this I thought of place that's full of imagination. I guess the question is whose imagine. The invitation to go deeper rabbit hole plays the reader's curiosity well. Lots of good emotion here - #1 curiosity #2 daring #3 apprehension.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in with a warm welcome. The title is an appropriate fit for the poem. Nice beats, strong alliteration, spot on kyrielle - all solid techniques that make this poem shine.
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THE POEM
Reflections of a solider in a war zone.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the beat of the poem. The reflections were honest and sincere.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem with 6 couplets and each couplet rythmed.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Tell my Sister not to be upset, Her Brother will not rise after this sunset" Initially, this rings rather folksy, as if the brother is trying to soften the blow. In that regard, the phrase hits emotionally. There will be sadness and angst regardless and the reader can be sad for the sister who won't see her brother again.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening beat and sentiment draws the reader in, though the poem is a bit of sad read. The title reflects the mood of the poem. The poem touches the heartstrings with it's somber topic.
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THE POEM
A poem that expresses caution about the unknown.
WHAT I LIKED
There's nice spiritual undertones in the poem that resonates with me as a reader.
STRUCTURE
This is a free poem with no apparent rythme scheme.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "The Unknown is my helmsman, My deliverance!" There's a lot packed in this line. First, the unusual capitalization of Unknown. Taken in context with the rest of the poem, I personally interpreted the Divine, and if I do, then the rest of the line, rings poignant and true. There's a lot of reverence in the line, if read quickly, might be overlooked.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening evokes curiosity as the reader sails on a raft in the river of life. This curiosity keeps the reader invested. The title is reflective of the theme contained in the poem. A poignant poem that resonates with the soul.
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