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Review of Wiccan Queen

Review by StephBee

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

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THE POEM

The poem about the Wiccan Queen.

WHAT I LIKED

Wicked spooky. I was totally freaked out.

STRUCTURE

This is a poem with 5 stanzas and an ABAB rythme scheme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Great use of WDC ML to increase the font and jazz it up. It really added to the ambience of the poem.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "while a chain of yellowed dragon’s teeth, rattles across her jet-black crest." The poet uses a good economy of words to succinctly describe how our wiccan queen looks all the while giving us the spooks. It's an eerie description that one can easily visualize and it makes the skin crawl on the arms. Well done.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening starts off subtle and draws the reader into the Wiccan queen's spell. The title lets the reader know what to expect. This poem will totally creep you out!

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#4830141

Review of Dementia - A Prose Poem

Review by StephBee

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Rated: 13+

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THE STORY

A heartbreaking look at the toll of dementia.

WHAT I LIKED

This is a real hard look at dementia. I often find that those caring for loved ones find things in common. My friend at work is caring with her mom with dementia and is going through all the same things mentioned here.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 1st person. Past tense is used in the story.

THE OPENING

The opening interested me as I've mentioned, I have a friend going through the same things with her mom. And, in a way, it's like a full circle in the circle of life.

FLOW & PACING

I thought the flow and pacing for discussing the toll caring for someone with dementia takes on a person, mentally specifically, was highlighted well for a flash fiction.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title fits the story, and this is a relatable story as many find themselves to caregivers for their parents. A well written emotional piece that tugs on the heartstrings.

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#4829875

Review of The Navigation Menu

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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THE WORD SEARCH

A word search about all the navigation tools and links you can find to help you on WDC.

WHAT I LIKED

I thought this was a great idea to introduce newer members to the tools available and to refresh older members of what they can use.

ENGAGING

The word puzzle was easy to med-easy and fun to do.

VARIETY

There were a lot of choices. There's a lot of helpful links on the site.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS
I might suggest filling out the introduction a bit more, especially for newer members. The word puzzle was educational and fun. A nice tool to expand the horizons and knowledge about Writing.com. Well done!

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#4829743

Review of The Big Dig

Review by StephBee

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Rated: 13+

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THE STORY

An Archeologist on a dig is quite certain of what he's found...

WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the archeologist slowly revealed the map. What one thinks may not be what "it" is.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 3rd person limited from the archeologist's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

The dialogue accents the narration.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph intrigues the reader with it's quote about war and patience and adrenaline.

CHARACTERS

The archeologist. At first the reader is excited for his find, until they discover how he behaves.

FLOW & PACING

The opening set up the discovery, the middle set on the explanation of the discovery and the ending is about consequences for one's actions. Well done using a 300 word count.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title fits the story. The story must use the prompt words in the story, which the author does without the words feeling forced. Well done. The story builds suspense well. This Flash has a lot of potential as a longer story. A quick story that will intrigue and keep you hanging like the Professor.

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#4829579

Review of College Football Mascot Names

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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THE WORD SEARCH

A word search about College mascots.

WHAT I LIKED

I loved the theme of the word search. I enjoy college football so this was a lot of fun!

ENGAGING

I was completely engaged, wanting to find all the mascots.

VARIETY

There is a big variety of mascots from Terrapins to Wolverines to Huskers. Tons of fun!

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic or a giphy in the introduction to set the tone for the word search, if doable. The word search was easy and mixed up well. I'm ready for some college football now!

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#4829499

Review of Roses in the Rain

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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THE POEM

The poem that takes a heartbreaking look at death.

WHAT I LIKED

The poem does a great job stirring the reader's emotions; touching on heartbreak and loss when someone dies.

STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no rythme scheme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and center the poem.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Now my hand held a single red rose, Standing bareheaded in the mist." I This is a nice, subtle description of a person holding a rose, alone, contemplating what was and what is to come.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening is subtle, gentle, and draws the reader in nicely. The title is a nice, teasing fit in regards to expectations for the poem. I enjoyed how the poem stirred up emotions. Well done!

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#4829344

Review of Tick

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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THE STORY

Our narrator borrows some old clothes from her sister for a hike.

WHAT I LIKED

What really works with this flash fiction is the moral of the story. I saw a lot of common sense being used, which is rare, but also, being prepared will keep someone safe. Good use of the prompt to tell a story that had a point without being preachy.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the first person from our narrator's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

The dialogue accents the narration and captures the prompt of the story well.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph engaged me right away. I wanted to find out what would happen next as if I didn't know...

CHARACTERS

The narrator is a very practical person with a lot of common sense that I think connects with readers. Also, I like the sister because she's "everybody's sister," in a way and connects with readers on that level.

FLOW & PACING

It's perfect. There's a solid beginning, middle, and end.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion here, and it's minor and a matter of style - maybe increase the font a little to make it easier on the eyes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title sets the expectations of the story well. Good storytelling elements in a short fiction. Leaves you with a simple message - Common Sense will never fail you.

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#4829191

Review of Ozzy Word Search

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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THE WORD SEARCH

This is a word search in honor of Ozzy Osbourne.

WHAT I LIKED

This was a nice tribute to Ozzy. Just like Val Kilmer, I find myself missing Ozzy more than I thought I would and this puzzle helped ease the wound.

ENGAGING

The puzzle is dedicated to Ozzy and that's what made it engaging it to me.

VARIETY

There were a lot of words selected that summed up Ozzy, his career, and his character.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic or a video in the introduction to set the mood of the word search. It took me forever to find "Jack" and "Antics" so I'd put the difficulty around med to med-hard. Overall, a good puzzle about Ozzy.

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Review of Higher Ground

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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THE PHOTO

A photo of a mind with a lot going on.

WHAT I LIKED

The first thing that came to mind was the word - cerebral.

ENGAGING

The photo makes you stop and think - it makes you study it until you develop your own takeaway.

MECHANICS

I loved the introduction. It really explained the history of the photo and the creative process which I appreciated.

PARTING THOUGHTS

I thought this was a creative photo with nice expression that has deeper meaning, especially when you understand the backstory.

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#4828870

Review of The cup

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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THE PHOTO

A photo of a puppy with his head in a red cup.

WHAT I LIKED

Those puppies really know how to get themselves in a pickle!

ENGAGING

The photo made me chuckle.

MECHANICS
There's just a simple introduction which hints at the humor of the photo.

PARTING THOUGHTS

A cute photo that's easy to share with others. It's a good conversation starter because many would want to know what happened next.

I would definitely show off this photo to my friends!

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#4828558

Review of Clash of the Tartans

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive

Rated: 13+

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THE STORY

Arthur decided to wear a tartan but it doesn't really impress anyone.

WHAT I LIKED

The author did a great job with the comedic notes.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 1st person by Arthur. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

The dialogue accents the narration.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph sets up the drama - how Arthur's mother reacts to him wearing a tartan and it keeps the reader's attention. Readers want to know what happens next.

CHARACTERS

Arthur - who goes tan. He's a likable guy who will make the reader smile.

FLOW & PACING

The opening sets up the clothing drama and the rest of the story just plays out. It's spot on and the ending delivers the punch line.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title fits the story well. This is a light read and that will make you chuckle at the end.

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#4828460

Review of A Night of Celebration

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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THE STORY

Sadie and her family celebrate the founding of her kingdom's independence.

WHAT I LIKED

I thought the story was very imaginative and did a good job world building.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 3rd person limited from Tom's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

The dialogue accents the narration.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph sets the scene as Tom watches the townfolk celebrate.

CHARACTERS

Tom is the narrator but little Sadie captures our hearts with her patriotic outfit.

FLOW & PACING

The story does a good job capturing a moment in time. The reader finds themselves in the middle of a celebration and going along with it.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title fits the story. The story did a good incorporating the photo prompt and building around it. I liked how the story ended on a touch of emotion that pulls at the heartstrings. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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#4828131

Review of A Legacy of Heritage and Adventure

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

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THE STORY

Hayden finds an old map that leads her on an historical adventure.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the story really summed up the elements of the photo prompt. Well done.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 3rd person omniscent. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

There is no dialogue in the story.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph builds an interest in 9 year old Hayden. She's intrigued by the old map she found.

CHARACTERS

Hayden is the main character. She's very likable and curious.

FLOW & PACING

The opening sets up a little about Hayden so you understand why she does what she does.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase and colorize the font to make it easy on the eyes to read on WDC.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title fits the story. This story was laser focused on the photo prompt and I enjoyed that. There was a lot of imagination and creativity used and I was satisfied with the ending. Well done. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest!

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#4827988

Review of The Last Straw

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

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THE STORY

A story about a man who waits for his woman late into the night.

WHAT I LIKED

The emotional tension builds really well and the reader can feel the release just as Robert does.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 3rd person from Robert's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

The dialogue drives the narration. As a reader, I could feel the emotion dripping from the dialogue. Well done.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph sets up the drama using a good economy of words and keeps the reader interested.

CHARACTERS

Robert and Clara. He's an upstanding guy and you want the best for him. Clara is not so upstanding.

FLOW & PACING

The opening set up the problem, the middle built suspense well and end was realistic.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good job of using WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes to read here at WDC.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title implies what the story is about. The story is poignant and gut wrenching. Well done.

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#4827798

Review of I Couldn't Tell You

Review by StephBee

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

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THE STORY

Larry can't remember what happened last night but Beulah has a clue.

WHAT I LIKED

The author did a great job building tension and and suspense.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 3rd person omniscent. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

The dialogue tells the story. Dialogue tags are used appropriately.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph sets up the tension - Larry can't remember where he was, but it's not what the reader usually thinks (he's out with another woman).

CHARACTERS

Larry and Beulah. Larry is a bit flummoxed while Beulah knows more than she's letting on.

FLOW & PACING

The opening set up the problem, the middle set on a solution and end wasn't for everyone. Well done.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling mistakes. I might suggest a minor edit for punctuation. Good use using WDC ML to increase the font and make the story easier on the eyes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title sets up the story and gives a hint that it might not be quite what the reader thinks. A quick story that will you curious when you finish.

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#4827607

Review of Aliens - here?

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive

Rated: E

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THE STORY

Jeff's imagination runs amok when his phone is downstairs charging in the kitchen.

WHAT I LIKED

I loved Jeff's imagination. It's wild and intense and almost convincing!

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 3rd person limited from Jeff's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

There is no dialogue used.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph had me intrigued - why was he startled awake? The answer my surprise you!

CHARACTERS

What I liked about Jeff is there's a little of us in Jeff. A little anxious, I little curious, a little nervous - especially in the middle of the night.

FLOW & PACING

Spot on! There's a definitive beginning, middle, and end to the vinyette.

MECHANICS

I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion here, and it's minor and a matter of style - maybe increase the font a little to make it easier on the eyes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The title fits the story well. The author uses a good economy of words to build and heighten tension and suspense. A quick read that will have you guessing what alien race until the end!

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#4827107

Review of Undying Oath

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

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THE POEM

A poem inspired by that star-crossed couple, Romeo and Juliet.

WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the word play and the rhythmic flow of the poem.

STRUCTURE

This is a poem with 4 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme. Well done.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I might suggest making the font bigger so it's easier to read on the WDC website.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Their love was fire, fierce and bright, A stolen spark in endless night. I think this description describes the power of love, how it can be intense, and how young lovers will seek it out even under the cover of darkness to just to experience the highs of the emotion.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader in with a nice rhythmic flow and keeps them reading. The title is from what the poem implies. The poem tells the story of Alessandro and Francesca well.

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#4827013

Review of One Sunny Day

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (3.0)

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THE STORY

Two men have a job to drain a pool and (I think?) refill it. I would clarify if they needed to refill it.

WHAT I LIKED

The story had a good opening.

POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the 3rd person limited from Rick's perspective. Past tense is used in the story.

DIALOGUE

The dialogue accents the narration. If anything, I might suggest a minor edit for dialogue tags. The following sentence is missing a quotation mark before *when* :
"Phil," Rick called, when the pool is empty, turn the water on," Phil waved in response.

OPENING PARAGRAPH

The opening paragraph engaged the reader and caught their interest.

CHARACTERS

Rick and Phil have to drain a pool. I wasn't quite if they were responsible for filling it, but I got that impressions. I wasn't sure if they were 2 teenagers just horsing around or 2 guys who were responsible for the pool's maintenance. I'd like to see that defined, if possible.

FLOW & PACING

The flow and pacing was a bit choppy. I think there's a moment that's met to be a bit comical but it doesn't quite fit the rest of the story.

MECHANICS

I might suggest a minor edit for punctuation. My only suggestion here, and it's minor and a matter of style - maybe increase the font a little to make it easier on the eyes to read on WDC.

PARTING THOUGHTS

Suggestions as mentioned above. The title fits the story.

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#4826877

Review of Famous Indie/Rock Bands/Artists

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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THE WORD SEARCH

A word search with alt rock/indie rock theme.

WHAT I LIKED

I saw this search and just had to do it. The puzzle brought back good memories of some of my favorite alt/indie rock bands.

ENGAGING

I was very engaged as I remembered most of the bands. I could even hear some of the songs in my head as I looked for the bands.

VARIETY

There were a lot of good rock bands to find.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic/giphy in the introduction to set the tone for the mablib, if doable as well as an introduction with a couple of sentences. The difficulty level was med to med-hard. A fun, challenging puzzle that will have you going until you find the last band.

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#4826871

Review of Sleepy Hollow

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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THE POEM

A poem about the curse of Sleepy Hallow and a hint on how to break the curse.

WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the visuals the poem conjured up in my mind. Very good job capturing a bit of a darkert one.

STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem. There's no rythme scheme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Beware the spirits whose intentions mean ill, Travel always with lantern in hand, Or on saddle attached" This is a great visual. I pictured a man on horseback, late at night, with a chill (of spirits) following them. It evoked a shiver and speaks to apprehension and building tension well.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening intrigues the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a goood fit for the poem and sets expectations. Nice word play. A spooky poem that's perfect for October!

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#4826297

Review of Pondering Autumn

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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THE QUIZ

A quiz about things you might like during the fall/autumn.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked that there was no right or wrong answer and the quiz identified some of the things you like to do during fall or associated with the fall.

ENGAGING

The because there was no right or wrong, I was much more relaxed during the quiz which made it fun.

VARIETY

There were a good variety of personal preferences to choose from.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

If anything, this is a quiz that could be expanded on. It a good quiz to learn a little about yourself. I highly recommend checking it out if you have the time.

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#4825976

Review of The number 18

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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THE WORD SEARCH

A word search all about 18 dedicated to Webwitch.

WHAT I LIKED

I learned a couple of new things with this word search!

ENGAGING

The word search sucks the puzzle taker right in despite being huge because you'll find a couple of words right away. The last 3 words were a challenge to find. They were well hidden!

VARIETY

There was a good variety of words and phrases related to the topic.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

The introduction does a good job establishing theme and there's a couple of links if you're interested in checking them out. The difficulty is medium. Don't let the size discourage you - it's a very fun puzzle and I highly recommend taking on the challenge!

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#4825809

Review of Happy Anniversary, WebWitch!!

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE WORD SEARCH

A word search in honor of our very own ⱲєbⱲitϚћ WDC's 25

WHAT I LIKED

The words for the search fit in the witchy theme.

ENGAGING

The word search was fun and kept me hunting down the words.

VARIETY

There's a great variety of witchy little words.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS
The words for the search set a good tone for the puzzle. If anything, I might suggest using a giphy or a graphic to help set the mood for the search. For me, the difficulty level was easy to easy-med and was a good challenge. A very sweet puzzle for a very sweet witch!

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Review of Artists Works Magic

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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THE WORD SEARCH

A word search with an artist's spin.

WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the theme of the word search, which was about artists and their accouterments.

ENGAGING

The word search had a fun and engaging theme.

VARIETY

There were a lot of choices when it came to the puzzle.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

If anything, I might suggest using a graphic in the introduction to set the tone, mood, and expectations for the word search if doable. The difficulty was easy med to medium. A fun and entertaining word search!

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#4825328

Review of Webbie's Words

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

| (4.5)

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE WORD SEARCH

This word search is a tribute to our favorite witch here on WDC, WebWitch.

WHAT I LIKED

I loved the words used. They were a perfect fit for Webwitch.

ENGAGING

There were a decent amount of choices that remind the puzzle taker of Webwitch and kept me engaged.

VARIETY

There were a good variety of words and phrases that stayed in line with the theme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a giphy or a graphic to help set the tone/mood of the word search. I would put the difficulty level at easy to easy-medium for this puzzle. This word search was a great way to get the juices flowing. Total fun!

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