SoccerBee's (sgcardin) Reviews

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#4864690

Review of Send a Greeting Card  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 16, 2026 at 10:10pm

Length:   1,000 Characters | 908 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE CNOTE COLLECTION A collection of cnotes for all kinds of occasions. WHAT I LIKED Some of the cnotes are just a picture which I think conveys a sense of emotions well. The giver can add their message as a nice compliment. ENGAGING The collection is very engaging. I liked "Dream it" and "Happy Valentines Day." They say a lot with just a simple graphic. VARIETY There were a good options which fit different everyday occasions. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was simply stated. The notes were reasonably prices and affordable. If you're looking for everyday notes, this is a nice collection to check out. An Angel Army Review

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#4864581

Review of “ In Him”  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 15, 2026 at 10:36pm

Length:   1,125 Characters | 988 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM A poem about finding rest in Jesus. WHAT I LIKED I felt like I was wrapped in a warm blanket as I read. STRUCTURE This is a a free form poem. There is no rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "In him there's peace for your soul and mind." This reminded me of something my priest talked to me about, just quieting myself and resting in the presence of the Lord. This can be a challenge since our lives are so busy, but it's amazing the peace that's brought when your focus is on God. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS I thought the topic and the content was very uplifting. It was a nice reminder to slow down and rest with Him. Overall, a poem full of heart and love. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama Muses on Things

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#4864579

Review of On Hold  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 15, 2026 at 10:24pm

Length:   1,807 Characters | 1,679 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I found this story using the Read and Review feature. THE STORY Daniel tries to find out what the adjustment fee on his bill is all about. WHAT I LIKED This was totally creepy but in today's world with AI - who knows - maybe it might come true sooner than you think. Food for thought. POV NARRATION/TENSE This is told in the 3rd person limited from Daniel's perspective. Past tense is used in the story. DIALOGUE The dialogue drives the narration and keeps the reader in the moment. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph sets up the problem. Daniel is wondering about the adjustment fee. Heck, don't we all? CHARACTERS Daniel comes across as an everyday ordinary person like us. He's curious about the charges and frustrated when a person doesn't come on the line. FLOW & PACING The opening set up the problem, the middle built the suspense and the ending was unnerving. MECHANICS I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easier to read. PARTING THOUGHTS The title fits the story. This story is kinda near future creepy. I think sci-fi, technology are good for the story but might use thriller/suspense instead of nonsense. The shorter sentences did a good job building tension and I was on the edge of my seat wanting to know if the AI would cancel Daniel. Overall, a story that reads well and leaves the reader wondering about the future. An Angel Army Review

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#4864578

Review of Jon Bon Jovi  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 15, 2026 at 10:11pm

Length:   904 Characters | 796 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search about the band Bon Jovi. WHAT I LIKED It brought back good memories of Bon Jovi in high school. I enjoyed early Bon Jovi music a lot. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging, fun, and will stir up those Bon Jovi memories. VARIETY There were a lot of good word choices that stayed on theme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did a good job introducing the puzzle. I might suggest adding a giphy or a graphic just for eye candy. Bon Jovi fans will enjoy this puzzle. An Angel Army Review

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#4864465

Review of What The Hourglass Remembers  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 14, 2026 at 7:04pm

Length:   1,456 Characters | 1,321 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM An hourglass recalls the time of a life as the sands flow through. WHAT I LIKED I enjoyed the story the hourglass told - how there was no stopping the decent, and how the writer fell into themselves, grain by grain. The word play in the poem is succinct and engaging. STRUCTURE This is a free form. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "but memory has no pockets," I suppose it doesn't. It rattles around the brain looking for a home and should it not find one, sifts in with the sand. I also liked: "There is no stopping this decent." Life travels on as the sand in the hourglass does. Haunting metaphor. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening intrigues the reader by proclaiming they are the sands/grains of an hourglass and then they take the reader on a journey. Wonderful introspection as the grains slip through the thin part of the hourglass. The title hints at what to expect in the poem. Overall, a thoughtful and intentional metaphor about the power of time against the backdrop of life. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama Muses on Things

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#4864340

Review of Railway Series Word Search  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 13, 2026 at 8:11pm

Length:   1,062 Characters | 953 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search about the Thomas the Tank Engine series. WHAT I LIKED Both my boys loved the Thomas the Tank Engine series and we had a ton of wooden trains in the house as they were growing up so finding this made me smile and brought back good memories of the boys playing. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging. I loved finding my favorite trains. VARIETY There were a lot of choices that stayed on theme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS I might suggest using a graphic or a giphy in the introduction to make the puzzle more appealing to the eye, but the member hasn't been on since 2018. Overall, a fun word search for Thomas the Tank Engine fans. An Angel Army Review

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#4864334

Review of Talents  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Given:   Apr 13, 2026 at 7:47pm

Length:   917 Characters | 833 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. First Impressions This a comprehensive list of computer "creds." If you work in Microsoft Windows 11, there are some good tips/tricks. Mechanics I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. I would suggest increasing the font to make it easier to read on the eyes here on WDC. What I Liked I was very impressed that the writer was 69 years old and appeared very Microsoft savvy. Parting Thoughts My only suggestion would be to weave in some personal anecdotes to make the presentation less dry. Where did you find Totalav? What lead you to SpyHunter5? Overall, a very informative read for Microsoft Windows 11 users. An Angel Army Review

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#4864183

Review of Alice in wonderland  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 12, 2026 at 8:36pm

Length:   1,118 Characters | 1,010 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This is a word search featuring Alice in Wonderland. WHAT I LIKED I enjoyed the theme of Alice in Wonderland very much. I liked all the nonsensical words including Madhatter and MockTurtle. ENGAGING The word search is very engaging. I kept recalling the 1951 Alice in Wonderland cartoon movie while I was hunting down the words. VARIETY There were a good variety of words that stayed on theme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS I might suggest using a graphic or a giphy in the introduction just to make it more appealing, but the author of the puzzle hasn't been on since 2010. The puzzle was created in 2002. In that regard, it's a classic. Overall, a fun puzzle, especially if you're an Alice in Wonderland fan. An Angel Army Review

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#4864026

Review of The Rain's Melody (part-3)  

Review by SoccerBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Given:   Apr 11, 2026 at 1:53pm

Length:   1,311 Characters | 1,174 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM The poem touched on the power of rain in nature and on the human psyche. WHAT I LIKED I liked the exploration of the qualities of rain. STRUCTURE This is a free form poem with with no apparent rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. THere's a nice flow when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "When drops fall from the sky, there's a deep conversation in those drops." This is the opening sentence and I found it intriguing. What does the conversation involve? Healing? Destruction? It could be open for anything which encourages the reader to discover more. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The poem offers that rain brings happiness to nature and those who tend to it happiness, but generally speaking a rainy day is a bit of bummer for us humans. Nice compare and contrast with a focus on nature. I enjoyed the expression and the challenge to go a think a bit deeper. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama Muses on Things

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#4864022

Review of Sleep  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 11, 2026 at 1:34pm

Length:   1,557 Characters | 1,419 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM The poem touched on something that keeps the writer awake when they should be asleep. WHAT I LIKED I thought this was an intriguing introspection about why the writer couldn't fall alseep. STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with several rythmes. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. THere's a nice rhythm and beat when read outloud. If anything, I might suggest increasing the font to "4" or maybe "14" (however your editing tool appears) so it's easier to read on the computer screen. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "I remember your eyes and how the remind me of the summertime. The thoughts take over like a grey fog." Summertime is typically a happy time where people relax and have a good time. Eyes are often the windows of the soul so here, I get the impression the memory of this person leaves good thoughts. A grey fog often lingers and it's hard to see through, so I can see where the good thoughts of this person linger. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening invites the reader with a simple question that we have struggled with - why can't I sleep? The title is a nice fit for the poem. I enjoyed the imagery and expression. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama Muses on Things

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#4864010

Review of A Package from Grandma  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Anniversary Reviews Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 11, 2026 at 12:31pm

Length:   1,627 Characters | 1,428 w/o WritingML

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM In this poem, the writer receives a quilt knitted by her grandma. It's a wonderful gesture of the heart which makes the writer reflect. WHAT I LIKED I liked how the writer took time to pause and reflect on the gesture. There's a little bit of everything in here - gratitude, admiration, and even a little regret for letting the days get too busy. STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with an AABB rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "Through the years I’ve been caught up in life and simply living, That I forgot to take a breath and do a little giving." This, for me, is the heart of the poem which is so simply and honestly expressed that I think it's something we all can identify with. For me, the message is slow down and appreciate the people around you. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening engages the reader and has them eager to find out what grandma sent. The title and the genres listed are a nice fit for the item. Overall, warmhearted poem that tells the story of the uplifting power of giving. Image #1174945 over display limit. -?- FORUM Anniversary Reviews  (E) Help members celebrate another year of membership by sending them Anniversary Reviews. #1565040 by Allez les Bleus

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#4864003

Review of Mother's Day cNotes  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Anniversary Reviews Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 11, 2026 at 12:16pm

Length:   1,308 Characters | 1,112 w/o WritingML

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE CNOTE COLLECTION This a Cnote collection dedicated to Mother's Day. WHAT I LIKED I typically don't see a lot of Cnote Collections with a focus on Mother's Day, so this warmed my heart. Mother's Day is coming up and I thought I'd highlight this collection with a review. ENGAGING The cnotes are very engaging and all of them have a whimsical, almost "folksie" feel to them which makes them appealing. VARIETY There were a lot of nice choices for notes featuring a turtle, bear, a bee and more. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction listed the author's other shops which I thought was a nice touch. Overall, this is a warmhearted collection which would bring out a smile to the mother who received the Cnote. I highly recommend you check out this collection for Mother's Day. Image #1174945 over display limit. -?- FORUM Anniversary Reviews  (E) Help members celebrate another year of membership by sending them Anniversary Reviews. #1565040 by Allez les Bleus

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#4863942

Review of Unicorn Poop  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Given:   Apr 10, 2026 at 10:50pm

Length:   1,819 Characters | 1,692 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE STORY Cindy and Megan are exploring and come across unicorn poop. Well, they keep exploring and find the owner of the poop, then they find.... WHAT I LIKED I really enjoyed how the story progressed and how the pot of gold came into play. And Grandma! Grandmas are the BEST. POV NARRATION/TENSE This is told in the 3rd person limited from Cindy's perspective. Past tense is used in the story. DIALOGUE The dialogue accents the narration. Dialogue/Action tags are used appropriately. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph had me when Cindy stepped in the mush. CHARACTERS Cindy Cindy is the main character, but if anything I would take teen human and thief hunter out of the first paragraph because it doesn't really come into play later on in the story. Cindy is likable and endearing. Grandma knew her stuff. Tabitha was spot on skeptical as mom and all the characters' dynamics work well in the story. FLOW & PACING The opening set up the problem - how was Cindy going to hide the poop, the middle hints a solution and the ending was a dirty one. MECHANICS I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion here, and it's minor and a matter of style - maybe increase the font a little to make it easier on the eyes. PARTING THOUGHTS The title was a perfect fit for the story. The genres selected were a good fit for the story. Overall, this not only entertains but will leave you with a smile. An Angel Army Review

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#4863812

Review of Dear Me  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Anniversary Reviews Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 9, 2026 at 7:12pm

Length:   1,433 Characters | 1,232 w/o WritingML

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE ESSAY This is a motivational essay that sets the tone for author's goals in 2022. WHAT I LIKED I liked the "I'm determined to get it done," tone of voice. 22 goals is pretty ambitious and you'll need your determination. POV NARRATION/TENSE This is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. GOAL SETTING There's an assessment of the writer's motivation, which I suspect involves some procrastination, and then goal setting. Mostly there's goal setting for things that need to be done around the house, but there are personal and writing goals including. Good job with establishing goals. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening engages the reader using a conversational voice and the reader gets a nice 'feel' for the writer and some of the challenges they face. Overall, an ambitious list, but determination and resilience shine through. Image #1174945 over display limit. -?- FORUM Anniversary Reviews  (E) Help members celebrate another year of membership by sending them Anniversary Reviews. #1565040 by Allez les Bleus

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#4863809

Review of Ultimate Assertion (1/1/26)  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Anniversary Reviews Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)

Given:   Apr 9, 2026 at 7:01pm

Length:   1,331 Characters | 1,132 w/o WritingML

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM A poem dedicated to Jackie and Shadow who are eagles. WHAT I LIKED I love watching Jackie and Shadow! What a delight to find this poem. STRUCTURE This is free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "Jackie and Shadow's ultimate assertion is always love." Knowing that bald eagles typically mate for life (there is exception or two) really brings home the bond that Jackie and Shadow share. Love is a very positive emotion and seeing Jackie and Shadow demonstrate in the wild is very uplifting. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening tells you a little bit about Jackie and Shadow. It piques the reader's curiosity. The title fits the poem well. The poem captures the essence of the nature that Jackie and Shadow live in well. Image #1174945 over display limit. -?- FORUM Anniversary Reviews  (E) Help members celebrate another year of membership by sending them Anniversary Reviews. #1565040 by Allez les Bleus

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#4863667

Review of Into The Woodland  

Review by SoccerBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 8, 2026 at 10:00pm

Length:   1,433 Characters | 1,239 w/o WritingML

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM This was a poem centered in nature. The deeper I went into the poem, like walking deeper into the woods, I discovered magical fantasy moments I didn't want to end. WHAT I LIKED I liked the story the poem told, how the fireflies took the poet on a journey of discovery. STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with 3 stanzas with four lines each. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "glowing spring flowers comforted me with their scent," This is a wonderful, light visual and I pictured myself walking along a trail with spring flowers making me feel welcome. The poem continues to flesh out a fantasy story that lifts the heart with wonder and awe. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening put me in the moment, and kept me reading. The title fits the poem well. This poem stirs the imagination and leaves one wanting to know what came next. Image #1174945 over display limit. -?- FORUM Anniversary Reviews  (E) Help members celebrate another year of membership by sending them Anniversary Reviews. #1565040 by Allez les Bleus

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#4863530

Review of Game of Thrones Characters  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Anniversary Reviews Group  

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 7, 2026 at 7:43pm

Length:   1,246 Characters | 1,050 w/o WritingML

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE MADLIB A word search based on Game of Thrones characters. WHAT I LIKED I loved the Game of Thrones series, so I was feeling the good vibes as I was looking for all my "friends." ENGAGING The word search was very engaging. When I was looking for a character name, say Sansa for example, I might think of my favorite scene or how I liked that character during the series. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices and familiar characters. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS I liked the flying dragon in the introduction. The title and the giphy are enough for the puzzle taker to get the flavor of the word search. Overall, this puzzle provides a nice break in one's day and leaves them wondering what their friends are doing now. Image #1174945 over display limit. -?- FORUM Anniversary Reviews  (E) Help members celebrate another year of membership by sending them Anniversary Reviews. #1565040 by Allez les Bleus

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Review of Hb's c notes  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 5, 2026 at 1:05pm

Length:   1,066 Characters | 962 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE CNOTE COLLECTION A collection of encouraging and inspirational cnotes. WHAT I LIKED I loved the homemade drawings. It was a nice personal touch to the cnotes. The quotes were also inspirational and motivational. ENGAGING The collection is very engaging. My favorite was the pen is mighter than the sword, keep writing! VARIETY There was a nice variety of notes with several different messages that offer inspiration, motivation, and simple holiday wishes. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was succinct and to the point. The GPs for the notes were reasonable for the quality of the cnote. Overall, a nice go-to collection when wanting to send an uplifting note. A Bee Hive Review

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#4863199

Review of C notes for The Angel Army  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 5, 2026 at 12:59pm

Length:   1,106 Characters | 1,002 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE CNOTE COLLECTION A collection with an ethereal vibe that offers thanks and appreciation. WHAT I LIKED I loved how encouraging the cnotes were. I also liked the "thanks for the review," and "thanks for the GPs," note. This is another collection I'll be "fanning." ENGAGING The collection is very engaging. There's a nice, heavenly as well as fantasy vibe that has a warm hearted appeal. VARIETY There were a nice variety of notes to choose from. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was succinct, and to the point, stating the intent of the notes was to support the Angel Army. The GPs for the notes were reasonable priced. Overall, a nice go-to collection for when expressing thanks and encouragement. A Bee Hive Review

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#4863196

Review of Saint Patrick's Day Dragon CNotes  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 5, 2026 at 12:53pm

Length:   1,363 Characters | 1,247 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE CNOTE COLLECTION A whimsical collection of St. Patrick's Day Cnotes featuring dragons. WHAT I LIKED Another amazing Cnote collection from GERVIC Again, these cnotes are vivid and striking and I loved the sweet poses of the dragons. He always puts a lot of love into creating his notes and it shows. This collection is a must when March comes around. ENGAGING The collection is very appealing. The dragons all have a whimsical smile and the graphics are eye catching. VARIETY There was a nice variety of notes and they stayed on the "dragon" theme. I'll be "fanning" this collection. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Messages can be personalize when the cnote is sent. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was succinct, with just an endearing graphic to set the tone and expectations. I thought the GPs for the notes were just a tad pricey, but I always say you get what you pay for and these are quality. Overall, a nice go-to collection for the month of March and St. Patrick's Day. A Bee Hive Review

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Review of Saint Patrick Day Cnotes  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 5, 2026 at 12:47pm

Length:   1,166 Characters | 1,050 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE CNOTE COLLECTION A collection of St. Patrick's Day Cnotes. WHAT I LIKED What I love about GERVIC Cnote collections are how vivid and striking the cnotes are. He always puts a lot of love into creating his notes and it shows. This collection strikes just the right balance between playful and fun and celebrating the day. ENGAGING The collection is very appealing. The colors stand out and the graphics are eye catching. VARIETY There were only 4 cnotes in the collection, but even, it's hard to pick which note you want to send. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was succinct, with just graphics to set the tone and expectations. The GPs for the notes were reasonable for the quality of the cnote. Overall, a nice go-to collection for St. Patricks Day. A Bee Hive Review

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#4863184

Review of Brain  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Anniversary Reviews Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 5, 2026 at 11:20am

Length:   1,490 Characters | 1,290 w/o WritingML

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM A poem about a memory that has it's moments. WHAT I LIKED I could totally relate. Being a tad bit older, my brain isn't as sharp as it used to be, but it's still a' ticking. It just takes more time to move the prattle out of the way. STRUCTURE This is a poem with 5 stanzas with 4 lines each. There is an AABB rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice, lighthearted comedic flow when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "my gearbox of a brain, hiccups, belches, rattles." This is a witty description with a touch of a smile, but there's a bit of a deeper meaning behind it. The gearbox (brain) is inclined to more mental challenges as it ages, and so one must flex and roll with belches. Once the rattle is over, it works just great. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening lures the reader in with a nice, easy refrain and keeps them reading. The title is simple and honest. An poignant, lighthearted reflection on aging. Image #1174945 over display limit. -?- FORUM Anniversary Reviews  (E) Help members celebrate another year of membership by sending them Anniversary Reviews. #1565040 by Allez les Bleus

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#4863182

Review of Easter then, Easter Now  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Apr 5, 2026 at 10:57am

Length:   1,350 Characters | 1,215 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM This poem housed reflections of Easter as a young girl and then as an older woman. WHAT I LIKED The poem struck the right emotional notes, tugging on the heartstrings. I remember being that young girl hunting eggs, then creating egg hunts for my little ones, to now, with the littles grown, reflecting back on a child's awe and wonder. STRUCTURE This is a poem with 7 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "my heart still calls your childhood home." I found this line to be very poignant to me as I reflected back. I could still see the kids hunting for eggs in the backyard, excited when they found one. Memories like these stir up good notes plucked on the heartstrings. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening invites the reader in with tiny shoes and keeps them reading. The title is a nice fit for the poem. A sweet reflection of Easter that will linger. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama Muses on Things

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#4863107

Review of Kiya’s Magic Moment  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 4, 2026 at 6:58pm

Length:   2,110 Characters | 1,961 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE STORY Kiya is a little frustrated that her green hasn't arrived yet. WHAT I LIKED I enjoyed it when Kiya took things into her own hands and found her own way. POV NARRATION/TENSE This is told in the 3rd person limited from Kiya's perspective. Past tense is used in the story. DIALOGUE The dialogue compliments the narration well. Dialogue tags are used appropriately. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph finds us joining Kiya on her 3 legged stool in the middle of her family's workshop trying to find her magic. It sets the scene well using a good economy of words and dives the reader right into the story. CHARACTERS Kiya and her family I loved Kiya's grit and determination in this story. Her family is supportive which was nice to see. FLOW & PACING The opening set up the dilemma, the middle set on a solution and end was heartwarming. The story had a solid plot and a good pace. Once I started to read it, I found it interesting and it held my attention well. MECHANICS I did notice some minor mistakes, so I might suggest an edit for the more technical aspects. For example, I spotted a random quotations mark after this sentence: "To the old stonereader, who might know something," her mother said " This sentence is missing a word: The stone reader, an older woman with a satchel of smooth gray rocks. Me: maybe was after reader? PARTING THOUGHTS The title fits the story. I loved the opening graphic! It was a perfect compliment to the story and just how I pictured Kiya might be before she earned her green. The genres used for the story were spot on. Overall, a very endearing story with a heartwarming message of believing in yourself. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest.

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#4863102

Review of Giggles - Bard's Hall Contest - 3/26  

Review by SoccerBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Apr 4, 2026 at 6:38pm

Length:   2,029 Characters | 1,893 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE STORY Kiya decides to buckle down and earn her green, but getting there takes a little visit to Grandma Lurleen and some inner growth. WHAT I LIKED Anyone who can make a Grumpy Badger smile is a winner in my book! POV NARRATION/TENSE This is told in the 3rd person limited from Kiya's perspective. Past tense is used in the story. DIALOGUE The dialogue compliments the narration and rounds out the story. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph does a nice job setting the vale for the reader, where the story takes place. The descriptions are succinct and I chuckled at "hide a dust ball in the noses of unsuspecting squirrels." Reminded me of my Dear Me entries where I'm always trying to avoid the Dust Bunnies. CHARACTERS Kiya She's a leprechaun who grows a bit impatient trying to earn her green so after exploring the clovers (and getting a rash) and swimming with the peas, she seeks out Grandma Lurleen's advice. FLOW & PACING The opening set up the problem, the middle set on a solution and end brought out the inner green of the reader. MECHANICS I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good job with WDC to increase the font to make easier to read here on WDC. PARTING THOUGHTS The title fits the story. If anything, I might recommend "fantasy" for one of the genres to the story. I also had a thought. If the green usually occurred around 50ish or so why did Kiya wait about 150ish years to look for her green? That was the only plot inconsistency that I noticed. Overall, this is a sweet story that will appeal to children with a very endearing and heartwarming message about kindness and service to others.