Beautiful story Jeff, very original.
The keeper of the maze working for his allotted time before another comes
to let him move on. I liked how Tom couldn't grasp why Milly returned from the maze.
And then, finally he understood that it was now his moment to pass through.
Thanks very much for a lovely tale.
Regards,
Steve
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