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Review of Competition  
Review by Sharkydave
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sharp, witty and clever, this is a nice little story about a highly appealing character with a good, if unusual, attitude to life but which also has a great sting in the tail that is sure to make the reader smile.
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Review by Sharkydave
Rated: E | (1.5)
This has the potential to be a quaintly charming little tale but which feels a little pointless and vague as it stands. It also needs a thorough proofread due to the many punctuation errors which also let things down.
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Review of Come Back Mommy  
Review by Sharkydave
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
An original, scary and imaginative story that is well told and very compelling. The writing is simple but strong and pulls you along to the thought-provoking climax.
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Review by Sharkydave
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
On the whole, I enjoyed this. There's definitely a sense of intrigue and you had me hooked from the start with the world-building and the evocative descriptions. The dialogue is sharp and punchy in places, with a good sense of character. I particularly liked the countdown sequence. There's a few typos and awkward phrases which could use cleaning up while the "He said" sections could also be improved on as they get a little repetitive. Apart from this, though, this bodes well for the next chapter!
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