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for entry "Patience
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Emily, I love that you are more organized with this prompt that I was lol... I wish I thought to do mine this way, but mine is fine the way it is lol. Anyways I love your perspective here on this prompt. Great Job!!!

I am about like you when it comes to patients with myself and patients by the process though. Patients with my partners driving can be nerve-racking at times, but we get through it. I have not been having many problems with promises lately though.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for sharing your story! I am sorry to hear about your difficulties while you were and are in school too. I am glad you feel more capable of handling the possibilities of what happened before happening again. Good luck with UIC and I hope everything goes well with that now.


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Review of LIVE!  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love your poem it is so inspiring and you are so correct, There's no time to wonder why and no time for regrets.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle
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Review of A Grateful Heart  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your Basic Needs are a great way to start off the new year. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I enjoyed your poem about your sis's long hair. This poem was also unique to me.

I love your rhyming scheme with your poem.

I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Great job.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable to me.

Your poem was well done.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations as of yet.

Many blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of 9/11- Remembered  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very well written poem. I really liked it.

Keep Writing!!!

Have a Blessed Christmas and Wishing you a Blessed New Year’s 2019!

God's Many Blessings, Sharmelle Your
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Sanctity of Love is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Rated: E | (5.0)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

In God's Great Hands is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Ray,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Wormhole at 100 MPH is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning Ray,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Lament of the Elder is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning Naverine2,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I like the rhythm of your poem "Land of Make Believe".

This "Land of Make Believe" poem of yours is very unique and inspiring to me.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Choosing Happy  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning LadyLeo,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I enjoyed your "Choosing Happy" poem. I agree with everything you are saying about Choosing Happy in this poem.

This "Choosing Happy" poem of yours was very unique and inspiring to me.

What you have said in your first Stanza rings true to me and everyone needs to make the best of whatever way it may go for them.

I deal with depressions too and this poem rings true for me too.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Lullaby  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning Dominique,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. I do not write music but I do write poetry; even though I do not write music I'll do my best on this review for you. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Your Lullaby Music sounds so beautiful to me that I thought it was a poem lol. But I know it is not. Even though I have never written music before this music has inspired me to try to write something in music someday soon.

Blessed Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning Tim,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Gift of Sweetness and Sincerity is very unique and inspiring to me. I enjoyed your rhythm in this poem of yours too.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

I love the first Stanza of this poem it just brings spiritual inspiration to me.

I feel that you do not need to change a thing with this poem of yours.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning Amanda,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: Chasing Butterflies, was very unique and interesting Poem.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work.

Plot: Chasing Butterflies, is a very inspiring poem for me.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Night Hawk  
In affiliation with Mental Health Writers Alliance  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Mental Health Writers Alliance Group. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: Night Hawk, was very unique and inspiring.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an inspiring story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your story well.

Plot: Night Hawk, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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In affiliation with Mental Health Writers Alliance  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Mental Health Writers Alliance Group. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: Dreamer’s Exchange, was very unique and inspiring.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an inspiring story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your story well.

Plot: Dreamer’s Exchange, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of The Center Ring  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: The Center Ring, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your story well.

Plot: The Center Ring, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of I Like Dolphins  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: I like Dolphins, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your Dolphins well.

Plot: I Like Dolphins, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: I am not sure but maybe change the title to "I Like The Dolphins" (Sorry I have a program on my computer that wants to change your title to that so I'll leave the change up to you ok.)


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any other recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of The Dance Of Dis  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: The Dance of Dis, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know them well.

Plot: The Dance of Dis, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions:


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Shades of Fun  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Shades of Fun is a unique and inspiring poem for me. The rhythm is a little different but I like it.

The plots have interested me in your poetry writing. The Shades of fun characters are believable. Yes, your poetry writing flowed naturally.

the time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

What I liked most about your poetry writing was...
"A graham cracker crust
and frothy egg-whites so high
the tart yellow filling
of Lemon Meringue pie"

There was nothing I like least about your poetry writing.

What I think stood out from you "Shades of Fun Poem was...
"With an umbrella and slicker
and bright yellow boots
we'll stomp in the puddles
and won't give a hoot"

There is nothing I would change within your poetry writing and I think your poem is great the way it is.

Yes, your poetry writing is memorable?

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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for entry "My Bipolar Mind
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
your poetry writing made me feel like it was something I've been through because I am Bipolar too. It has invoked emotions from my past, but everything is ok there.

I can relate to your poetry writing through a personal experience years ago.

Your plot did interest me because I can relate to this poetry writing. your characters were believable. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally for me in your poetry writing.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together in your poetry writing.

What I like most is...
"One minute calm, the next I’m tweaked
One day okay, but then I’m freaked.
I wish I knew just what to say
To show you all will be okay
But I don’t even know what’s true
For in my mind it’s all askew."

There is nothing I like least about your poetry writing.

What stood out for me in a good way is...
"I want you here, I need you here
But in your eyes I see the fear
I’m nothing more than human form
You look at me as if deformed
We’ll be okay, I promise this
Right now, my mind's a blank abyss."

The changes I would make for this poetry writing would be in the last stanza the second line you should add a comma after eyes, and the third line could say "the human form.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Chagrin  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very interesting and unique poem. I like the rhythm of your poem too; it's a little different but it is cool.

The plot of your poem interests me. The characters are believable. Yes, the dialog flows naturally for me with your poem.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together for me with your poem.

I liked "So the cold, skinny finger of death might just linger around my door if I'm not strong. And it might just tickle my cheek if it's fickle -- or my spine -- at which point, to Hell, I'd belong." most.

I liked "My knees give out when I think about the night of that fateful fire. My spirit killed, the Devil thrilled, I prepared for my funeral pyre." least because it sound like a bad experience.

"Without her, I'm lost -- the cold and the frost pierce me down deep to my soul. My eternal chagrin comes from deep within. I fear I will never be whole." stands out for me.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

The writing of your poem is memorable because this poem is based on your own story.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of No Reservations  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very unique and inspiring poem! I like the rhythm of your poem.

Your plot interested me. Your characters are believable. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally for me in your poem.

The time, place and other setting characteristics has worked together for me in your poem.

What I liked most about your poem is "When are you going to be here? How long are you staying? Where are you going? All questions from a mom, with no reservations, about changing my plans.". There was nothing that I liked least about your poem. "Tears flowed with no reservations, or worries about being childish. I am daddy. I am here. I am hugging her tight. She is happy. That is enough." stood out for me in your poem.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

Yes, the writing of your poem is memorable because it is based on your story.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Sylvan Sycamore  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting, unique, and inspiring poem. I have enjoyed the rhythm of your poem.

The plot of your poem is interesting to me. Your characters are believable to me in your poem. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally for me in your poem.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together in your poem.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

"Because it’s behemoth in verdant wood; it would speak Indian wars if it could" is what I like most in your poem. there is nothing I liked least about your poem. The "Towering branches that Heaven can feel, a sylvan sycamore is so surreal" is what stood out for me in your poem.

What made this writing memorable was the ending of your poem "I liked my visit to this sylvan site, even though I had to leave before night. Thus I’m content to let memories burn, and fan the flames till I make my return" because you have made a plan to return again.

I have rated you poem 5 stars and given you 200 GPs. Keep writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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