|My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!
"In His Presence" is a fantastic poem that has great rhythm! Your rhythm in this poem emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly!
I really enjoyed the fifth and sixth stanzas! they are my favorite because in the fifth stanza you say...
"I don’t recall what he said, I remember his tone,
Hearing it, I know we’re not on our own."
and in the sixth stanza you say...
"For the first time, I saw God today.
In amazement, I found myself kneeling to pray."
Yes God is with us where ever we go and all you need to do is to believe that God is with you every day!
I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.
This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.
PS I am also giving out this Review because I gave out a package in my fundraiser that included... 10 Poetry reviews for 1 for winner and 1 each for 9 of your friends. Eyestar won the package and chose you for one of the reviews for me to do.
Many Blessings, Sharmelle