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Review of Admonitions  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "Admonitions" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last stanza.

My Favorite Part: All of the stanzas are my favorite because they tell us the truth about what could happen if we don't take action.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a great job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Diets  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "Diet" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the second stanza.

My Favorite Part: The second stanza is my favorite because the gym is your next move.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Cherish  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "Cherish" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the fifth stanza.

My Favorite Part: The fifth stanza is my favorite too because your hands caressing warm placental earth, it came to me that nature was the hope for our rebirth.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of When God Speaks  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "When God Speaks" is a wonderful poem!!!

Originality/Creativity:

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last stanza.

My Favorite Part: The last stanza is my favorite because Heaven lights the earth.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of telling a great story about God in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Super Power  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "SUPER POWER" is a wonderful poem!!!

Originality/Creativity:

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the first stanza.

My Favorite Part: The first stanza is my favorite.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "WHAT IS WRITTEN ON THE WALL" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the third stanza.

My Favorite Part: The third stanza is my favorite because The truth cannot be subverted.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "The Herky-Jerky Wild Turkey" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the fourth stanza.

My Favorite Part: The fourth stanza is my favorite because of the farmer's deal with the bird.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of There Is One God  
Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "There Is One God" is a fantastic poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the fourteenth stanza.

My Favorite Part: The fourteenth stanza is my favorite because of what you are saying in that stanza.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Pain, the poem  
Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "Pain, the poem" is a great poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last two stanzas I adore.

My Favorite Part: The sixth and last stanza is my favorites.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Rain of Terror  
Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "Rain of Terror" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in lines five and six.

My Favorite Part: The Lines Five and Six are my favorite because of the creatures and the red streams.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of A Day Too Soon  
Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "A Day Too Soon" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly and I love your Form: Spenserian Sonnet. I'll have to try this form sometime.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last stanza is I adore.

My Favorite Part: The last stanza is my favorite because of the fade into an endless dream.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

Review of "Orion's Keep"


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Review of Orion's Keep  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: This is a wonderful poem about Finding Gold!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last stanza. This stanza reveals that you are "praying to be rescued - with your last breath".

My Favorite Part: The last stanza is my favorite because you are waiting for death and also praying for rescue with your last breath.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Malignancy  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: This is a great poem on "cyberbullies"!!! Yes, we need to somehow put a stop to this.

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the last stanza. This stanza reveals that cyberbullies spread vile poison towards others that needs to be put to a stop.

My Favorite Part: The last stanza is my favorite because it contains the most emotion.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of showing how cyberbullies are not a good thing.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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for entry "Patience" 
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Emily, I love that you are more organized with this prompt that I was lol... I wish I thought to do mine this way, but mine is fine the way it is lol. Anyways I love your perspective here on this prompt. Great Job!!!

I am about like you when it comes to patients with myself and patients by the process though. Patients with my partners driving can be nerve-racking at times, but we get through it. I have not been having many problems with promises lately though.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of A Grateful Heart  
Review by Sharmelle's...
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your Basic Needs are a great way to start off the new year. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!!!
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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Sanctity of Love is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

In God's Great Hands is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Ray,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Wormhole at 100 MPH is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning Ray,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Lament of the Elder is a unique and inspiring poem for me.

I like your Rhyming scheme in this poem.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Well done at the ending of your poem.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning Naverine2,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I like the rhythm of your poem "Land of Make Believe".

This "Land of Make Believe" poem of yours is very unique and inspiring to me.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.

Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Choosing Happy  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning LadyLeo,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I enjoyed your "Choosing Happy" poem. I agree with everything you are saying about Choosing Happy in this poem.

This "Choosing Happy" poem of yours was very unique and inspiring to me.

What you have said in your first Stanza rings true to me and everyone needs to make the best of whatever way it may go for them.

I deal with depressions too and this poem rings true for me too.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Lullaby  
Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning Dominique,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. I do not write music but I do write poetry; even though I do not write music I'll do my best on this review for you. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Your Lullaby Music sounds so beautiful to me that I thought it was a poem lol. But I know it is not. Even though I have never written music before this music has inspired me to try to write something in music someday soon.

Blessed Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning Tim,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

The Gift of Sweetness and Sincerity is very unique and inspiring to me. I enjoyed your rhythm in this poem of yours too.

There were no distractions throughout your poem which made it more interesting and enjoyable.

I love the first Stanza of this poem it just brings spiritual inspiration to me.

I feel that you do not need to change a thing with this poem of yours.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Night Hawk  
Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with Under Construction: MHWA  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Mental Health Writers Alliance Group. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: Night Hawk, was very unique and inspiring.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an inspiring story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your story well.

Plot: Night Hawk, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with Under Construction: MHWA  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Mental Health Writers Alliance Group. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: Dreamer’s Exchange, was very unique and inspiring.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an inspiring story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your story well.

Plot: Dreamer’s Exchange, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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