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Review of The Center Ring  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: The Center Ring, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your story well.

Plot: The Center Ring, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: None at this point and time.


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of I Like Dolphins  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: I like Dolphins, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know your Dolphins well.

Plot: I Like Dolphins, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions: I am not sure but maybe change the title to "I Like The Dolphins" (Sorry I have a program on my computer that wants to change your title to that so I'll leave the change up to you ok.)


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any other recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of The Dance Of Dis  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello,

My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. These are just my thoughts and forgive me if I ramble, and realize I make just as many mistakes as anyone else. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Title: The Dance of Dis, was very unique and interesting.

Initial Reaction: I read a few lines and your poem sounds like an interesting story.

Character Development: Nice work. I got to know them well.

Plot: The Dance of Dis, was very inspiring.

Ending: Well Done!

Line-by-line and Suggestions:


Overall - This poem is a good poem and I do not have any recommendations yet.

Blessed Writing!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
What a unique and inspiring poem! I love angels, I believe in angels!!! I collect angels!!! I can make graphics angels!!! I write angel poetry!!! And one of my favorite colors is pink lol.

Your poetry writing made me feel happy and peaceful.

I also write poetry about Angels just not as unique and inspiring as yours.

Yes, your plot interested me because like I said above I love angels! I believe in angels! I collect angels! I can make angel graphics! I write Angel poetry! Your characters are believable in your poetry writing. I loved that your poetry writing flowed naturally too.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

There is nothing I would change within this poetry writing.

"Your Ladyship,
I've lost my grip.
A mirage is what you are.
You can't be real!
And yet, I feel
You've loved me from afar." Is what I liked most and stood out for me. There was nothing I like least about your poetry writing. It is a lovely poem!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Chagrin  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very interesting and unique poem. I like the rhythm of your poem too; it's a little different but it is cool.

The plot of your poem interests me. The characters are believable. Yes, the dialog flows naturally for me with your poem.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together for me with your poem.

I liked "So the cold, skinny finger of death might just linger around my door if I'm not strong. And it might just tickle my cheek if it's fickle -- or my spine -- at which point, to Hell, I'd belong." most.

I liked "My knees give out when I think about the night of that fateful fire. My spirit killed, the Devil thrilled, I prepared for my funeral pyre." least because it sound like a bad experience.

"Without her, I'm lost -- the cold and the frost pierce me down deep to my soul. My eternal chagrin comes from deep within. I fear I will never be whole." stands out for me.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

The writing of your poem is memorable because this poem is based on your own story.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of No Reservations  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very unique and inspiring poem! I like the rhythm of your poem.

Your plot interested me. Your characters are believable. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally for me in your poem.

The time, place and other setting characteristics has worked together for me in your poem.

What I liked most about your poem is "When are you going to be here? How long are you staying? Where are you going? All questions from a mom, with no reservations, about changing my plans.". There was nothing that I liked least about your poem. "Tears flowed with no reservations, or worries about being childish. I am daddy. I am here. I am hugging her tight. She is happy. That is enough." stood out for me in your poem.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

Yes, the writing of your poem is memorable because it is based on your story.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Musical Athletes  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What an inspiring poem and I love the way you rhymed this poem. I am a rhymer to when it comes to writing my poetry. I really like your poem you made me feel the same way about Music.

You plot has interested me. Your characters are believable. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally.

Your time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

What I liked most about your poem was the story you told. There is nothing I liked least.
Musical athletes,
harboring brawn and good taste
always float my boat. stood out for me in your poem.

No there is nothing I would change about the writing of your poem because it is perfect the way it is.

Your writing of your poem is memorable because the story of your poem is unique in its own way.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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Review of Sky Flowers  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What an inspiring poem. This is a very interesting poem and I love the way you rhymed your poem too. Your poem was surprisingly good and enjoyable too. Good luck in Mays Contest with "The Poet's Place".

Your poem made me feel happy because of it being Nature related. It invoked some happy and thrilling emotions.

your plot interests me. Your characters are believable. Your dialog flowed naturally for me in this poem.

Your time, place and other setting characteristics work together.

What I liked most was "in hues floating across the skies". there was nothing I liked least about your creative poem. Your whole entire poem stood out for me in a good way.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

Your writing of your poem is memorable.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Very interesting but true poem! I believe what Trump is doing is unfair to America too.

The plot interested me very much so. The characters were believable. Yes, the dialog flowed naturally for me.

What I liked most about your poem is that it is so true about Trump. There's nothing I liked least about your poem. Everything you have said about Trump's actions and soon to be actions stands out for me.

There's nothing I would change within the writing of your poem because like you said you have the right to free speech!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of A Sudden Sleep  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sad poem and I am so sorry for your loss.

The plot of your poem interests me. The characters in your poem were believable. Yes, your dialog in your poem flowed naturally.

What I liked most was the way you expressed your feelings about your loss. There is nothing I like least about your poem. Your feelings are what stood out most for me in this poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review by Sharmelle's...
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem was inspiring!

Yes, your plot interested me in this poem, your characters were believable, Yes, your dialog flowed naturally for me.

Yes, the time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

There's nothing I would change about your poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of Make It Count  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What an inspiring poem, Harry!

Your story is so true and mesmerizing too!

Your plot did interest me so, your characters were believable, and your dialog flowed naturally in your poem.

Yes, the time, place and other setting characteristics worked together very well in your poem.

Yes, your poem is memorable because the story of your poem I feel is so true!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of A Call to Duty  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very inspiring poem!

Yes, your plot interests me and the characters believable. Plus your dialog flowed naturally for me.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

What I liked most about your poem was your rhyming stanzas. there was nothing I liked least about your poem. Yes, your poem did stand out. A very well written poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of A Rose  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very inspiring poem, Mary Ann!

Your plot interested me, Yes, your characters were believable, and your dialog flowed naturally.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together very well.

I like the way you rhymed this poem most. There was nothing I disliked about your poem? "She is my rose my beauty queen" is what stood out the most for me.

A very nice and beautiful poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of What AM I?  
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting poem. Great job on your poetry writing!

I would not change a thing about your poem.

Your dialog flow naturally and your plot interest me.

The time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

If this was my own writing, I would want to know that this was a very good poem from a reviewer.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very nice poem! I like you rhyming theme with you poem; it's a little different but i like it.

Your plot has interested me by the way you are telling your story in the poem. And your dialog flew naturally for me.

There is nothing I would change in the writing.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of Plant People  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is very inspiring!

Your plot has interested me, the character is believable and your dialog flowed naturally.

What I liked most about your poem was the message on the leaves.

There is nothing I would change with your writing.

This was a very good poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle


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Review of SUMMER FRUITS  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very inspiring poem!


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Review of The Furnace  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very inspiring poem!

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Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Inspiring poem!

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Review by Sharmelle's...
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely and inspiring poem!


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Review of Dejavu  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very true and inspiring poem!


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Review of Devoted To You  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very inspiring poem!


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Review of Heart Sounds  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very Unique and Inspiring Poem!


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Review of Train to Nowhere  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Lovely and very inspiring poem!


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