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Review by rainyplot336
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really good, I really resonate with the feeling of always wanting to do something but never having the motivation to do and falling into this cycle. Keep writing
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Review by rainyplot336
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is so sweet! I love your use of enjambment and how it really helps the story flow. It almost makes it seem as if you and the person you have written this about are one. The only critique I would have is that it seems like some of the words may be missing, but I love this piece nevertheless.
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