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Review of Chains That Bind  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very good! Bonds can be broken, as you reveal in this poem. Love is the key, isn't it? Without love, we really have nothing. Material objects, electronics--they are fun but they are cold and indifferent.

But, it is love that saves the day and brings us joy.

So well done!

Thank you for writing this..

Morningstar
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Review of My Favorite Dream  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat story about your favorite dream! I used to have a favorite dream; one that made me feel young and happy. I haven't had kind of dream for awhile but after reading yours, I think I will search for that happy dream!

So well done and happy to read!

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Review of Defining love  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
"Defining Love" is well done and so true! God's love is truly "abundant and limitless and unceasing." Wonderful definition of love! Without love, there simply would be no world, absolutely nothing!

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Review of The Old Cabin  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem because, even though the old cabin, one's view of life, is weathered by moisture, hidden by trees and mist, it remains beautiful and fresh.

Lovely poem, which reflects life, I think in various ways.

Well done!

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Review of War Of Depression  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an excellent description of depression! Depression is insidious but it can be defeated. Some fight depression with good sleep, good food, friends, activity and thinking positive thoughts. I used to have depression often but now, with God in my life, a husband who is loving and caring and by keeping busy with good activities, I have stomped depression into the ground! Should it come back again, I am ready!

Again, a very good piece on depression and that you have "resurfaced back to lief."

Good going!

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Review of Sorrow  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is short, sweet but beautiful. Memories, even though they are sorrowful, have a loveliness and beauty that cannot be explained but find a way inside one's heart. And that is where they will stay until the end.

Thank you for writing this. Lovely and wonderful!

Morningstar
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Review of Homage to Romance  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so beautiful and speaks well of lovers and how they feel about each other. How true the words, "they cling in silence reluctant to say goodbye to part at the light of dawn."

Beautiful and just wonderful to read!

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Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is interesting and good. It strikes me a bit like the old "Twilight Zone" series. The unknown, as well as the familiar, are waiting for many. I guess, in some cases, the choice is ours.

Well done and very interesting.

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Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very well-written piece and you are so right in your last two sentences: "That’s the type of people who have stayed together for fifty or sixty years or thereabout, and when you speak to them, they are simply, a peaceful kind of stability. Their characters, their personalities mesh harmoniously." My husband and I are close in numbers to the first number and we are still very happy and in love.

Looking back, I am blest that I chose my husband. There were several before him that I cared about but the others did not have the similar background and interests that my husband I have and have had, from the very beginning.

Wonderful piece! I hope that many men and women read it!

Morningstar
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Review of Daffodil Laughter  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely and very visual poem! As I read your poem, I can see what is happening and it is light and beauty!
How true it is, when a person's mood changes from "dark to light" just watching the action of flowers and nature.

Well done!

Morningstar
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Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this poem because it is so human, so funny and good! Fatherhood must be a wonderful thing. My husband and I have no children but we love children and want the best for each one of them.

Again, thanks so much for writing this!

Morningstar
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Review of In His Presence  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a lovely, wonderful and true poem! Your last four lines are beautiful and again, true. God is with all of us every day, no matter in our home or elsewhere.

Well done and thank you so much for writing it!

Morningstar
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Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very good! I especially like your last stanza and the part that Friedrich Nietzsche wrote, "What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."

Well done and thank you so much for writing this!

Morningstar
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Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your words, especially preserve. I wish there was more to this because it has such a good meaning. Anyway, thank yo for writing this!

That is so true; he does preserve us every day of our lives.

Morningstar
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Review of Old Blue Ribbon  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I like this poem. It is filled with memories of the past; memories that still invade your mind and soul. The poem is well done. Your words are expressive and make one recall days gone by of love lost.

Well done! Thanks so much for writing this!

Morningstar
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Review of If I Could Choose  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very interesting and creative poem! As I read it, it brings back memories of my childhood and such memories are priceless!

So well done!

Morningstar
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Review of My Wheelchair  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem very much and it is a poem that I hope many read because many do not understand what it is like to rely on a wheelchair. At this time, I don't use one but I may in the future and I hope that I will have a strong will, like you!

Thanks so much for writing this! So well done!

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Review of Fall Poem  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this poem! There is so much to like about it--truth, beauty, great descriptions and a foretelling of what will come once fall is gone.

So well done!

Thanks so much for writing this...

Morningstar
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Review of Getting Old  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this poem! I can relate to most of it...It is a joy to read and I thank you so much for writing it!

Morningstar
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Review of Truth  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Neat little story! I like how your story evolves and you don't give away who the main character is until the end. You write well and the story is very intriguing and fun to read.

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Review of Clutching Leaves  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very interesting and intriguing poem! What you write is true for some; "everything can suddenly change." That happened to me many years ago. The man I was going with, I thought we had a future but someone else came into "my" future and changed everything. I know now that the relationship with the other man was not to be and for good reasons.

Anyway, a very good poem and very interesting.

Well done!

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Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Don't be too quick to judge. Let others see your work and even if they don't like it, that is their problem. Just do your best and be happy. Every writer starts out as a beginner. Take a chance and just give it your best shot.

Morningstar
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Review of Dinner  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so cute and so well done! As I read the last part, I was uncertain what would happen until I came close to the end. Your story is good, funny and a joy to read.

Thanks so much for writing it!

I dare say something very similar to this has happened to probably more than one woman.

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Review of Helpless  
Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see why this poem is a favorite of yours. It is beautiful. Makes me think of a time when I was in love with someone. I still see his smile, his face and hear his laughter. He is gone now; only a memory. I just know that he is in Heaven. He was a lovely man but the man I am married to is also lovely and wonderful and he makes me so happy.

It is nice to have such as memory.

Thanks so much for writing this because it is lovely.

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Review by Morningstar
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely poem, with words that are comforting, loving and true. This poems is also a joy to read because it is descriptive and with words that, I think, need to be said. So many of us struggle, wanting someone to care, someone to turn to and trust.

Thank you so much for writing this!

Morningstar
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