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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No errors were seen. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: I do not have any suggestions I feel would improve the item. It's great! *Idea*

*Note1* WHAT I LIKED: From the beginning to the end you wrote the reality of a relationship. I liked the way you pointed out the good and bad things couples go through to make their relationship survive and the touching way the emotions were relayed. You are right about the risk of opening up, yet again stressed that you knew the other individual would not hurt you. It was a pleasure reading this beautiful poem. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Mushroomb* Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: This is the second guest book I have had the pleasure visiting this morning that is flawless with errors and needs no suggestions for improvement. *Questiong*

*Woman**Man* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Woman**Man*

*Gold* OVERALL OPINION: It was a pleasure dropping in to say hello and reviewing your guest book. It is put together in a warm and welcoming way. I am familiar with the links posted here as well, and think it was kind of you mentioning the awesome groups many might not know about. *Gold*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No errors were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I think would improve the story.*Reading*

*Note1* OVERALL OPINION: You did an excellent job defining the settings and experience, making this an enjoyable read. Phrases like "My little friend" and such made me laugh. It was descriptive, yet not smutty. Every paragraph is well written in my opinion. Keep writing! *Note1*

Sherri


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Review of The Beginning  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just my opinion, but I think stories are more likable when the characters are given names. It makes them easier to relate to. No commas are needed after "arranged" and "motivation" in the first paragraph and far too many hyphens are used throughout the entire story. *Idea*

*Thumbsup* MY LIKES: Although no names were given, the description in defining the Nordic blond was very good. *Thumbsup*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: As mentioned already, I felt too many hyphens were used.*Thumbsdown*

*Pencil* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The plot is good and the settings described well. I enjoyed reading it. *Pencil*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* Please remember that suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Clock* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No bracket is needed before the first sentence of the note and disclaimer. Nothing is needed after fatalism in the second paragraph of the first chapter and a period follow Madam. I also think reconstructing the last sentence of the first chapter to Facial expressions of concern and frustration were made, and I scratched my hairy chin. There are numerous other things like these examples I think would make the story better. I hope the ones I have pointed out help. *Clock*

*Hourglass* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: The characters are described well and the plot good. The settings are also defined well.*Hourglass*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: With some editing, I think the story has potential. As mentioned above, the settings and characters are well defined and the story-line good. *Peace*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Smile* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work by any means.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think making all the verses follow a similar pattern would improve for poem. As it is, some of them do not rhyme, and some do. *Questionb*

*Writing* CHARACTERS, SETTING, AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Star* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Every verse is straight to the point with a powerful emotional impact. It's a pity this individual left you with such bitterness. Verses four, five, and nine are examples of the hostility felt, yet I found verse six touching. The willingness to forgive someone is commendable. *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: I did not see any errors, PandaPaws Licensed VetTech . *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: There are not any I can think of for improving the poem. It is great! *Reading*

*Note4* MY THOUGHTS: You did a superb job with the rhythm and imagery, along with the medic's bravery during the war and the risks he takes. There was not a verse I found faulty. Very well done, my friend! It was well written, and I am pleased awarded with a beautiful ribbon. *Note4*

Sherri


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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Snow1* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work. *Snow1*

*Snowman* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed and I cannot think of anything to improve the short story. *Snowman*

*Santahat* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Paul and Bucky are described well, and the story-line superb. *Santahat*

*Xmastree* MY LIKES: The plot moves at a pace that held my interest. It was not slow moving and the prompts were used perfectly. This is definitely a winning story and deserved the ribbon. Write On! *Xmastree*

*Stardavid* MY DISLIKES: No dislikes. The story is fabulous!*Stardavid*

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Review of Sins of the flesh  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: I'm unsure I would call them errors, only that I would consider altering some of the words posted in the suggestion area below *Down* *Idea*

*Snow1* SUGGESTIONS: In the first and second stanzas I would consider changing "cause" to because. I think it sounds more mature. You say we would understand your feelings if we knew your thoughts, yet they are conflicting. You speak of friends in a dark manner, but say you have met good ones later, only to express needing to hurt them in the end. *Snow1*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello DavidEhrgott ! *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No errors were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the prose. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a magnificent job of relaying your thoughts in little words. This proves it does not always take a lot of words to express what is felt. I enjoyed reading your work. *Note1*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Santahat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed. The only suggestion I have to offer is to keep posting these wonderful poems. *Santahat*

*Stardavid* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Stardavid*

*Xmastree* OVERALL OPINION: It's hard expressing so much in just five lines, yet you did so perfectly. The imagery is outstanding...so much so that it was easy envisioning the tree and sparkling sky. GREAT POEM! *Xmastree*

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Review of My Chains  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Survivor48 ! *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a sensational job of expressing the strength it takes to battle objects standing in your path to obtain freedom. I liked all of the stanzas, but the last one sums up the entire poem perfectly. *Note1*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Flower2* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed and there are no suggestions to make that I feel would improve the poem. *Flower2*

*Note3* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note3*

*Star* MY POINT OF VIEW: You did a spectacular job of relaying what Labor Day is all about. Employers should be there for their employees when asked for assistance, and employees relied on to provide their bosses with quality performance. To make it short, employers and employees should work as a team. The first two stanzas sum that up, and the last one the joy of the holiday. *Star*

Sherri


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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Cat2* ERRORS: I did not notice an error of any kind. *Cat*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: Just that you keep writing these spectacular stories...or should I say "tales"? *Laugh*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: Magnus was certainly pampered, yet kindhearted when all was said and done. I don't think I would have let him off so easily despite the circumstances as his owner did. *Smirk* What a way to be awakened. *Laugh* The story-line is fantastic and the characters well defined. I think it is a sure fire winner! *Cat2*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Star* Hello Ben Garrick *Bigsmile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS: None were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the poem. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: Although short, you said all that needed to be said about your thoughts on love dying and why. I agree that the small things sometimes escalate until the love once felt dies. It is a shame when anger and disagreements lead to the destruction of something that was once beautiful and we thought would last forever. *Star*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello jaya *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: I did not see any mistakes. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: I have none to offer that I feel could improve the item. *Exclaim*

*Note1* The poem is well written, with imagery so excellent it paints a poetic masterpiece. Every stanza relays heartfelt emotions of romance. I have no personal favorites. The entire poem is terrific! *Note1*

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Review of Remember When  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello BillieGail memory of Cheyenne *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or other errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: There are none. Every stanza relayed heartfelt emotion. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a fantastic job of describing your feelings on how this person touched your heart and why. The poem is beautiful. It touched me from the first to the last stanza. It is easy to see why the individual will always be remembered. *Note1*

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Review of Nobody Asks  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Star* Hello Collkin *Bigsmile* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS: Some punctual errors were spotted. For example, a comma should follow "muffled" in the fourth sentence, a semi-colon replace the comma after "asked" in the seventh sentence, and a semi-colon follow "comes after" in the ninth sentence. I hope these examples have helped. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: "Because" could be deleted from the first sentence and still have the same effect. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: This poem is heartbreaking. It is even sadder because it was a real experience. God bless you. Thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us. *Star*

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Review of My New Business  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Flower2* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: "I graduated from college with" would make for a better read if altered to "I graduated with from college" in the first paragraph. Keep in mind that these are only suggestions. *Smile* "that easy" should be "that easily" in the eighth paragraph. *Flower2*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS & PLOT: The characters could use more definition. I thought the plot was good, but would have been better if more definition was applied to the settings. *Flower1*

*Writing* OVERALL OPINION: I thought the story was good overall. Keep writing! *Writing*

Sherri


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Review of Greed  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
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*Butterflyv* Hello John Nation *Smile* Any suggestions made by this humble reader are only an opinion meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but so that "I" is not used so closely together, I would restructure the second sentence in the second paragraph to "how my money is invested." I would also restructure the third sentence to "At last he is about to kick the bucket now." "and" can be deleted after "between you" with a comma following "you" and "brother" in the third paragraph. No comma is needed after "Father" in the fourth paragraph. In the sixth paragraph, a comma should come after "oldest son" and none following "oldest". "I" should be "I've" in the eleventh paragraph. I hope these suggestions have helped. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The characters are described well, and the story-line flowed good too. *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: Darrell and the others struck me as selfish men who cared more about monetary things than anything else. David was my favorite character because he was wiser than Betsy and the others thought. He knew all they cared about was what they would receive after he perished, yet reminded them of why he knew why they needed and/or wanted his money. Still, he also let them know how he had felt about them before he knew he was going to die. I liked the story. It was written with realism, which is always an added plus to me. *Check2*

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Review of Obsolete  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not critical.

*Idea* ERRORS: Should "added enhance visuals" in paragraph twenty-five be "added enhanced visuals" instead? No comma is needed after "rubble" in the twenty-seventh paragraph. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: In paragraph thirty-six, I think "In addition or "Added" would make for a better read if replacing "Add". Hopefully soon" would also read better if "soon" followed "pleasure machine" in paragraph forty-six. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: The story is written well overall, and is not slow moving. The characters are well defined, and the ending a terrific follow to the rest of the story. I enjoyed the story. Keep writing! *Note1*

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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! *Smile* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes of any kind were noticed, and the only suggestion I have to offer is to keep writing these poems. This one is beautiful!

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: The rhyming [pattern is right on, and the emotions terribly romantic. You did a superb job of defining how precious and priceless love is. Every sentence relays how much this person means to you. I have no personal favorites. I liked the entire poem.

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Review of Morning Light  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello turtlemoon-dohi *Smile* Suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Note4* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Having had the pleasure of reading your work before now, it came as no surprise when no errors were spotted, and no suggestions to be made except to keep writing. *Note4*

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*Note1* MY LIKES: The rhyming pattern is splendid, and you did a wonderful job of describing the sight in just several short stanzas. Everything that needed to be relayed was done despite the shortness. My favorites are stanzas two and three. The imagery springs to life in these stanzas, where both the turquoise painted sky to sliver-sliced moon are easily envisioned. *Note1*

*Flower1* MY DISLIKES: No dislikes. The entry is fantastic. *Flower1*

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Review of The Muse's Garden  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item *Rain* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. Keep writing these fantastic poems, Ken. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The sonnet is absolutely perfect! Well written with superb form and imagery, it was easy picturing the couple. I felt empathy for the man who was a glutton for punishment, so to speak. Someone almost always gets hurt in this kind of game. *Butterflyr*


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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item *Tulipy* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything to improve the entry. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhyming pattern is right on, and the imagery just as good, especially in stanzas two and four, which are also my personal favorites. The finale tugged at my heart. I wish he had not remained silent. Maybe then the outcome would have been different. *Butterflyr*


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