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ERRORS: No mistakes were noticed. 
SUGGESTIONS: I only have one suggestion, and that is to keep writing these lovely poems. 
MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is excellent, and the poem inspirational. Every stanza relays the importance of forgiveness. I like that, for it is not always easy to forgive, but necessity. Harboring ill will for others is destructive. The last stanza of your entry says it all. SUPERB POEM! 
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WHAT I THOUGHT: The imagery is outstanding. You did a great job of describing the Sacred Heart. The poem is an enjoyable read. 
No one should be made to feel so low. This person's idea of games is horrible. Every stanza relays how you were made to feel like you were living on an emotional yo-yo. 
SUGGESTIONS: There are none I can think of that would improve the quality of the item. 
MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is fantastic, and the imagery even better. You have painted a poetic masterpiece about the oak. The words are brought to life when reading about the tears it would shed and all it has endured to keep standing. The title fits the poem perfectly, and the image before the poem is an added asset. I have no personal favorites. I liked each and every stanza. 
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OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhyming pattern is good, and the imagery fabulous as well. It is easy picturing the shepherd and his flock as they travel to the streams and valley. The poem is written well and inspirational. 
SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of for improvement. 
OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is great, and so is the imagery. Having read your work before, this did not surprise me. What I liked most is the emotions relayed. You are right. When life tosses let downs and so forth at us, it is hard not saying a few choice words and struggling to prevent bitterness to set in. The poem is well written, and from the heart. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with the community, and giving those who have felt similarly some inspiration. 
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MY THOUGHTS: You did a great job of expressing how difficult it is going on when one that we love leaves us. It is even harder when you have been in someones life for twenty-six years, or not knowing why the break-up happened. The title is appropriate for the poem. I certainly hope the poem is fictional. 
MY LIKES: The rhythm is good, and so is the imagery. I assume "the hooded one" is the Reaper. Regardless, he is described well, and what he says makes him frightening. A dark and well written poem! 
MY DISLIKES: There was nothing I did not like. 
WHAT I ENJOYED: The imagery used in describing setting and characters is fabulous. The poem would make for a good story in my opinion. The man's jump was sad, and the title appropriate. I enjoyed reading the entry.