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Review of The Home Sampler  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.0)
I was wondering what you could have written on this topic of bipolar disorder. But, this writing amazed me! You showed the extreme points of human nature through colors. I think the colors are correct to their significances. The title is apt! It couldn't have been simpler than how you have done it. Great work.
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Review of Keep on Wishin’  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this piece. It's short and simple yet meaningful. I think, this is not just only through a bowler's perspective but through one and all who thrown his/her hands in despair after a few unsuccessful tries. But I actually didn't get what the last line "Take one, on the chin..." exactly mean. Above all, it's a nice one.
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Review of A Love Poem  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is so goddamned funny ! *Pthb* How can the heart be musical ? LOL .
Kissing the heart ! Haha ! Garden of hands, oh God, so many.
Marrying in a mall, publicity, so interesting *BigSmile*
Four children, over-population with just three names !
Being the water of someone forever sounds stupid .
Anyways, this is a funny madlib and I loved it. Hope my better half loves it as well !
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Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Such a poignant piece .
It just left me teary-eyed, seriously.

Every word in every line evokes so much of emotional imagery.
An amazingly impressive oeuvre, needless to say, though *Smile*

Seems that your heart is weighed down with pangs of sorrow and rejection.
Cheer up *Smile* [ even it's a Herculean job, something near to impossible or almost, I suppose ]

I loved the way you expressed, worth praise.
Keep it up.

Love xoxo,
Cadburylove93 (Shrusti)
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Review of Mirror  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.0)
First of all , welcome to WDC *Delight*
This is a good try , newbie ! *Smile*

Somewhere , I feel , you aren't able to express what you actually want to.
But still, this is your first attempt and its worth appreciation *Smile*

I would like to rectify the grammatical errors you have made over here:

once -- one (line 7)
theres -- there's (line 8)
who's -- whose (line 9)
cleaverly -- cleverly (line 10)

Love xoxo,
Cadburylove93 (Shrusti) *Smile*


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Review of Words That Hurt  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.5)
Moved by this . Very emotion-stirring , indeed . Sadly , this is a part of love .
There is nothing like one cannot understand what you are trying to convey through this poem .
The rhyming of the poem is very much correctly done , with simple yet proper wordings *Smile* .

Keep writing .

Love xoxo ,
Cadburylove93 (Shrusti) *Smile*
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Review of Growing up  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nothing , except a bird , can be compared well to Freedom .
What I truly liked about this poem is that , the comparison has been effectively carried out *Smile* .
Being more precise , freedom has been portrayed through the life of a bird and its easy to understand *Smile*
Keep writing .

Love xoxo ,
Cadburylove93 (Shrusti) *Smile*
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Review of Accept Me  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love this piece *Smile*
Nobody in this world is perfect for sure . N I loved the theme and the content as well .
Short and so true *Smile*
People should be accepted the way they are , nice .
Keep writing , good going *Smile*

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Review of Silent Seduction  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The gentle imbuing of your thoughts like the whirling of the froth in the pool is amazing .*Smile*
This poem gives a tender feeling , I mean , the feel of softness in each and every line .
Sweetness *Smile*

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Review of Vanishing Love  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem stirred my emotions . Great work .
You pulled in the simplicity so well .
The poem seemed to flow down like water in a rivulet . Smooth *Smile*
Lovely ! *Smile*


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Review of MOTHER AND CHILD  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (4.5)
This theme is very touching . Coz Mom is the word ! :)
All that you have nicely conveyed through this piece has every bit of truism in it :)
And in the last stanza , I loved the line : Independent , ... mother gives . :)
Great !
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Review of Welcome & Sign-Up  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E
I.N.K.E.D. sounds interesting ! :)
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Review of Our Moment  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I must say , this writing is just so awe-inspiring :)
It literally strikes a strong chord (very strong enough , indeed) with my opinions on the extremities of love .
You have beautifully penned down your words into lines ,
and this perfect dropping of lines in a proper way gives it a substantial sense :)
The warmth of love is so precisely jotted down :)
Keep writing ! :D

Love .
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Review of A Quiet Day  
Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: E | (3.5)
Aah , this piece of writing focuses strongly on 'Onomatopoeia' - the literary device for sounds . Just wanted to know , what does the title suggest upon ? It wasn't quite clear , though . But still , the jingling of sounds caught my attention . Like this . Keep writing . Do see my poems . ! :) Happy happy ahead !
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Review by Cadburylove93
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is awesome .. ! :)
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