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Review of Time Riders  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Don Two,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject very well. The poem is about a maid who is given a chance to experience time travel. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi CrisMiss,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with discomfort. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is troubled about the lies their partner tells. The reader is wondering if the speaker will reveal the lies they know of. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi CrisMiss,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with discomfort. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is troubled about the lies their partner tells. The reader is wondering if the speaker will reveal the lies they know of. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Earthcycle  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Laurie,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with desparation It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the people described in the poem will find a way to improve their lives. They will read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of For fake people  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Chained,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone whose world has fallen apart because they refused to be honest with themselves. I am hoping that the person in the poem can rebuild their life and be true to themselves from now on. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The World's Gone!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brenda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of excitement and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a little girl who is excited when she first sees fog. I remember when I first saw fog. It was confusing for me as well. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Woebegone  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi hullabaloo22,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with regret. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who regrets a chance they let slip by. I have done this many times in my life and have vowed to take advantage of every opportunity from now on. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi amlan,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the piece by telling the reader why you wrote it. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about a small service you did for a passenger when you worked for an airline that meant a great deal to the passenger. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs you attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi James,
This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of disillusionment and apathy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what the ultimate fate of the world will be. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a miner who is discontented with his job moning for photons but realizes that there is nothing left for him in a world in crisis. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue, but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)Went the-"Went" should be "When".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of Smile  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Skittles9802,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full full of joy and encouragement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about smiling through the troubles in you life. I believe in staying positive and finding as much good as I can in situations. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Tired  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi kathy,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when the horrible things people thought of and said about you made you think of ending your life. I truly hope you are in a better place now. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of My Fears  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Soma,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and the deepest sense of being alone. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the biggest fears of you had and how you got past them. I so glad these feelings of aloneness are no longer a part of your life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader's from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Ascend  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi John,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with confusion and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about an unusual, disturbing event from your life. I hope you have recovered from the effect this experience had on you. I read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi RiverStJames,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is slightly sorrowful. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how your heart wanted to be where your fiance was after his death. I am so sorry for your loss. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Miss303,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and self doubt. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone whose happiness is dependant on someone else. I am hoping that the speaker can find the strength to be their own person. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You do not use punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Idle Talk  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi hullabaloo22,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time when you expressed your deepest, most private thoughts in a poem. I have done this with a lot of my poems. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of A Breath Away  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Miranda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with disappointment and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when you reached out to a friend for help during a panic attack, but they were not there for you. I am so sorry that you did not get the support you needed. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Candroid,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone if tinged with confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how we struggle to express ourselves in ways that will be acceptable to others. I usually try to phrase things so as to not offend to hurt anyone and still get my point across. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi RomanticPoet27,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes then want to read on. The poem is about the difference between comedy and tragedy. Comedy and tragedy are both enjoyable in their own ways. I like some comedy and tragic works can be somewhat enjoyable. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Don the Dog  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi bluwdloqwea777,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and informal. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a dog who is loved by its owner. I have a pet myself-a gorgeous cat named Tiddles. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi jaya,
This is a fantastic article. The title direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. John F. Kennedy and his career has always interested me. I anxiously began to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the reasons John F. Kennedy will never be forgotten. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your to topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi The White Flower,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal but tinged with frustration. The poem is about the two sides of life and reality which make our world what it is. I live my life while taking the positive things with the negative. That's the way the world works for me. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Wet Weather  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ari,
This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my piece "What Can Work-Personification". This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the way depression caused by unpleasant weather can creep up on you without you even noticing. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Vincent Amaedeus Hatchettm,
This is a fantastic piece. The tone is formal. It suits the piece and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the citizens of this town will be reassured by their lord. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the piece, a lord writes his subjects in a small town explaining the presence of the undead. The piece is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece concentrates on the lord, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Neur0s1s,
This is a fantastic piece. The tone is full of love and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if this soldier will reunited with his wife soon. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the piece, a soldier writes to his wife while he is away at war. The piece is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece focuses on the soldier, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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