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Review of The Mad Ones  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jade stone,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the misfits of the world that enhance it with their immeasurable creativity and individuality. I was always the odd man out in my family, so this poem really speaks to me. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works will in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Raja,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Emily and Alex will become a couple. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man and woman who are brought together by what they consider their flaws. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)As they got to know each other better, she learned that the man, named Alex, had been going through a tough time and was feeling lonely and disconnected before they met. He had given up on the idea of ever finding love and was just going through the motions of his day. But their chance meeting had brought new meaning and purpose to his life.-This paragraph appears earlier in the story.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of Within me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Winnie the Pooh,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is intense. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what the Giantess' encounter with the normal sized man will be like. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a Giantess who has a romantic encounter with a normal sized man with surprising results. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of I am That Child  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Chariot to the Heavens,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how you run to the Lord to feel free. I am still trying to sort out my relationship with God. I am happy to see yours is a very good relationship with Him. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Adherennium,

This is a fantastic essay. For anyone who does not know what "high street" means this title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. I know what the term means but was still fascinated about why the decline was happening. I wanted to find out exactly what was going on. You introduce the topic by explaining exactly what a high street is. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the decline of the high street in Britain and the reasons for this. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Child's cries  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dottie,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of pain and heart break. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who has found out that she can't have children. I feel very sorry for this woman as I read. I read to the last word to see what became of her. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi GiantManny,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given the reader a list of the main characters in your novel and an excerpt of the first chapter. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your work so far. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Amethyst Snow Angel,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of confusion and frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has given up doing anything risky for fear of failure. I am hoping that the speaker will find the strength to participate more in life. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Signs  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Purple Holiday Princess,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of fun and excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if this woman will actually go sledding. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a woman contemplates going sledding right before a snowstorm. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the woman who wants to go sledding, and she comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jake,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, scientists have come up for the cure for writer's cramp, but writers are not going to like it. I was astonished to find out what the cure was. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of You Must Fit In  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jay,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and filled with confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want read on. The poem is about someone who decides to be who they are and not fit in, even though there many others demanding that they do. I have always done my own thing and not bothered with what others wanted. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Countdown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Sam,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of joy and intensity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Alex and Emily will have their romantic interlude uninterrupted. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a couple who decide to make love on New Years Eve. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Viral Lovers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Pa-pogina-tato!,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of surprise. This takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what these two entities will do together. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a computer with Artificial Intelligence and a malware program which meet and start causing trouble. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of Family traumas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi The fatal descent,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the abuse and fear you suffered at the hands of your brother. My heart breaks for the pain you have gone through. I am delighted at the look I got at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Take off  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Manzoni,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about being on a plane, you and a group of other people, waiting to take off for a long anticipated trip. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sunny,

This is a fantastic activity page. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the activity is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. The tone is light and friendly. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the page. You launch into the page without introduction or preamble. The reader is completely immersed in your monster. They will read to the last word. You have given a description of your monster and some images for the reader to enjoy. The page is eye catching and easy to navigate. Great job.

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Review of SooNaamMee  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi NormaJean,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what HoMai is hearing. They will read to last word to find out. The story is about two people caught in a flood. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi G.B. Williams,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is an endorsement of a friend of yours. It looks like your friend is qualified for any job they look into and will be a wonderful worker. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The acrostic poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. You have used the words "tagged" and "leadership" very creatively here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Achoo!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Odessa,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering what is in the package for the president. They will read to the last word to find out. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Blissful Repose  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Constance,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is thoughtful but tinged with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when you were inundated with strong desires and cravings but wanted peace. I am hoping that the rest of your life has been filled with peace. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi ElBroke Troll,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is filled with surprise and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why Jake is going from body to body. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about man who starts inhabiting the bodies of various women while he is waiting to meet a friend at the airport. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have slipped between the past and present tense. You should keep your tenses consistent to keep your writing consistent for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view. Great job.

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Review of KEYBOARD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Thankful Sonali,

These are two fantastic poems.

In the first poem the tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about how the keyboard enhances soft or classical music. I love both types of music. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The acrostic poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure.

The second poem has a formal tone as well that suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the emotional impact of listening to music being played on a keyboard. Each type of music I have listened to has invoked a particular emotional response. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The acrostic poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure.

In both poems you have used the word "Keyboard" very creatively. Great job.

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Review of And So, It Goes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jacky,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering what John has seen outside. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a boy who thinks he sees a dinosaur outside if the garage. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Fear  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Keaton,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time when you lived engulfed in fear and uncertainty. I am hoping that your circumstances have improved. I read to the last word to find out if this happened. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi bmandel7,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how you love others around you but have never come to love yourself. I am hoping that you will develop the self esteem that you are lacking. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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