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Review of The Sock Thief  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi penguinluver1431,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering who the Sock Thief is. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a sock thief plagues a guild of people who write fairy tales. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak liker real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi GreatGuin,

This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with curiosity as the reader is wondering what the new transfer student will be like. They will read on to find out. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. They get extremely involved in the relationship between Riku and Yuuto and wonder if they will get close again. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi VanillaSoftArt,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of aggravation and satisfaction. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what Vidal will do to keep Goten quiet. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who finds a peculiar, and disgusting, way to keep a boy she is babysitting quiet. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of Bears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi NormaJean,

This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my story. This is a fabulous story. The tone starts off formal but ends with shock and amusement. This grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if where the camera was and if the couple will find it before they leave. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a couple camping in Yellowstone Park are in for a huge surprise. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)Dealing with work and mail kept us busy so several days went by before we unloaded the camera.-There should be a comma after "busy".

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Rule Britannia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Mummified_Mike,

This is a fantastic first chapter. The chapter opens with excitement as the reader is wondering what will happen at Stonehenge during Winter Solstice. They will read on to find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the story. You have set up your plot and main characters very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Review of The Magician  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi GERVicious Ghoul,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of wonder and surprise. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why the deck of cards Marcus has found is so unusual. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a strange event leads a boy to discover his destiny. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Winded  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Elisa,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about survival after hurricanes. We live through Hurricane Igor making landfall in our province. We had no power for days, and the clean up took days. Thankfully people all pitched in and helped each other clear their property of fallen trees and fix property damage. It was a mess. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Damon,

This is a fantastic essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic with and anecdote from your childhood. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the you and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the weak equivalence theory. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi MINAHILHAROON,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is one of contentment and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is completely content with themselves. I am happy with the person I am and embrace that everyday. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Lesson  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ken,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone about to try something as potentially dangerous. I am thinking that the person in the poem is trying skiing for the first time. I love trying new things and it always fills me a sense of anticipation and excitement. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The La'Tuin poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Highway  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Mary,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about navigating the roads safely. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi DR,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is a love story inspired by the Addams Family movie. I loved this Addams Family. I am still looking for the movies to buy. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Rakhi,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Siya and Aarav will come to terms with each other and their insecurities. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a couple who have to navigate their deep feelings about each other and themselves as they are thrown together during a legal case. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of The Holy Temple  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Spiritual Dawning,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anticipation and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about you love for God and how anxious you are to join Him. I want to meet and be close with God. I hope I enjoy my life and then enjoy my eternity with Him. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Kare,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anxiety and resentment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why the speaker didn't want to be saved. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man is disappointed and resentful that his wife saved him when he almost died. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi sindbad,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic by sharing your emotional state at the time you wrote the piece with the reader. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the topic. They will read to the last word. You have laid out your goals for 2022. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style what is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Elora,

This is a fantastic prologue. The prologue opens shock as a body drops suddenly to the ground. The reader is wondering who has been killed and will read on to the find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the prologue. You have captured all the reader's attention with extreme danger and the main character trying to get away. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The main character's captor speaks like a real person. The prologue is well paced. It is fast paced, and this keeps the reader rapidly following along to see what will happen to the main character next. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Review of The House of Dunn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi GhostlyPotato,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Frank will find anything unusual in the house he is about to explore. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a paranormal investigator who is exploring a house reportedly connected with a double murder. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of The Passenger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Scare-emy,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with nervousness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what John's first subway trip will be like. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man takes the subway for the first time, with unusual results. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Blue,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I don't take part in poetry contests a lot, but I always read the guidelines to see what is involved. I began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written an announcement for a Christmas Poetry contest. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi MINAHILHAROON,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Emily will find what she needs in "Mirrors and Mystics". They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who goes into an antique shop trying to buy a gift but gets a terrifying surprise instead. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Emily, and she comes across as a real person. There is only one line of dialogue, and it is well done and realistic. Mr. Blackwood speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Scribbleeba,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about a day you started rather slowly with little enthusiasm. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a person. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)I tried to push myself out of my blanket but-There should be a comma after "blanket".

You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Rafa,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your insight about life. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Fright Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Anarchist Angel,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about Halloween Night and all the activity that goes on then. I remember loving Halloween as a kid. When I moved to my current town we didn't get any trick or treaters on our lane. I always watch the Halloween movie series, though. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi chuckles,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem reminds us that we have to rely on God and each other more. I have a deep faith in God and love being loving to other people. We all share this world. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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