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This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my greeting card. I wrote this for my cousin's wedding. I had forgotten that I still had it posted here.
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This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my greeting card. This is a fantastic essay. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the essay. I loved hearing more about you, and I began to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader a little about your family. This grabs all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about how music has figured into your life and influenced you. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
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