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Review of Love on a Platter  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi percy,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about how unlucky you have been with the opposite sex from a very young age. It looks like you were did a bit better after college. I am so happy to see that. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi arya,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the piece. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. You have written about the responsibility that a man and woman take on when they decide to have a baby. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of One Enormous Hug!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi hullabaloo22,
This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my Thanksgiving Card. This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy and gratitude. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how you want take everything you are grateful for and give them all a huge hug. I would like to do that with all the people I love in my life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Inkless Pen  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Elisa,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the favorite pen with which you writer. I don't have a particular pen. I use my computer to writer. My desk is my special place to writer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The acrostic poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. You have used the letters of "Blocked Musings" very creatively. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi nottabe,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of desperation and desire. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is trying to maintain a relationship with a demon lover who appears to them as a snake. I am wondering if the speaker will keep seeing their lover or have the presence exorcised. I read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Sweet Peggy Lee  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brenda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about dream you had about meeting a movie star who asked you advice about her career. We all have dreams like this which involve famous people. I have had a few involving many movie stars. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Letter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Norman,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of surprise. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who finds an old letter that talks about a family secret. I am wondering what the speaker will do about the information they find in the letter. I read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Joyous,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of desperation and frenzy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is managing the time and life of someone they idolize. I am not sure if you are talking about a spouse relationship or a working relationship, but the speaker seems to be trapped in a very unhealthy situation. I read to the last word to see if they got out. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of My Diary_1  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Shashadhar,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the frustration and sadness you felt after an accident which left you disable. I am hoping that you regained at least some of your mobility. I was delighted with the look I got at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of I Will Wait  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SomaSilver,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is willing to wait for someone they love to come back to them. I am hoping that this relationship can be reestablished. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Hollow  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Luckie,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is desolate and full of disappointment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is feeling empty inside because of the shallow things which exist in this world. I would love it if we connected with each other on a deeper, more emotional level. I love to connect with everyone in my life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Robert In Winter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lou,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of impatience. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is reflecting on how much they dislike winter as they look out the window at the falling snow. I am not a fan of Winter, like the speaker. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kathie,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of apprehension and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when you make an uncertain choice in order to have a better life. I hope that your choice has given you the happiness your were seeking in your life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Goat Farm  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Mastiff,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone watching a herd of goats play among themselves. I was taken with the peace and serenity in this poem. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The haiku poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. You have concentrated on one image here-the playfulness of the goats. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi lucifer very very very 1st,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal but tinged with aggression. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how a fire can feed off of itself and get bigger an more uncontrollable over time. I have heard that this can happen, and I have see fires I start in my fire pit get pretty big. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The philosophical poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The poem has a wonderful rhythm. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Rook  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Bedilah,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and slightly sinister. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a rook stalking prey in the wild in winter. I am wondering if the rook will get the person it is hunting. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Music's An Art  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Richard,
This is a wonderful poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about how music is something which is common to all of us. This is true. I don't know of anyone who doesn't like some type of music. I loved this poem and read to the last word. I did find a problem with the way you handled the lipogram poetic form:

1)You wanted to not use the letter "E", but "like" has that letter. You could use "akin to". That might word.

The poem does flow very well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kurt,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about humans and their propensity for fighting and killing each other. I believe that one day, long in the future, humans will become mature enough to shed violence. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled wonder and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about sinner's being forgiven by God and connecting to His loving Presence. I hope to be connected with God in Heaven one day. I work towards this goal everyday. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi ViolentBeast,
This is a wonderful piece. The tone is formal. It suits the piece and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Scooby and his friends will be able to defeat the robots. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, Scooby Doo and the gang have to handle two robots from the future. They conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:

1)In a few places you have neglected to start sentences or proper names with capital letters. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

2)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SomeGuy,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of bitterness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker will get back at the people who have enslaved his race. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, a man takes to sea to free his people from a race who has enslaved them but still feels that the enslavement of his people might be partially responsible for their own predicament. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi HollyMerry,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a man whose bride leaves him, and all he has is a bunch of holly berries to remember her. I am wondering why this couple are not together. I read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Each Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi dog pack,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of faith and trust. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has been removed from God for a time but still believes they will be with Him in heaven someday. I have been struggling with the faith for the past few years, and I hoping to repair my relationship with Him. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Leading the Team  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Master Om,
This is a fantastic essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion of why the lead dog in a team of sled dogs is not the leader. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the composition of a sled dog team based on your own experience. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. You also make the topic very comprehensible for the reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi PENsive is Meemaw X 3!,
This is a fantastic story The tone is full of love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is taken with the love in this family. They will read to the last word. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, a young man realizes the many things in his life he had to appreciate and be thankful for. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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