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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Eregnon,
This is a fantastic essay. The tone is full of impatience. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are anxious to see what you have to say about wolves and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written an essay from the point of view of the Big Bad Wolf explaining his actions towards the Three Little Pigs. You are familiar with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your read. Anyone who has read The Three Little Pigs will enjoy this essay immensely. You use a light, informal style that is very appealing to the reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. Great job.

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Review of But never  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Chathrin,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of yearning. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how physical closeness does not accomplish emotional closeness. I know that emotional closeness is something we must continually work towards. It is a process. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of cosmic  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lovelybloom,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is in love and overjoyed to be that way. I am so happy for the speaker and read to the last word to see if their happiness lasted. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this highly emotional poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jeremiah,
This is a fantastic quiz. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what to expect from this activity. You launch into the activity without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the activity. They will begin to read right away to find what facts they can get from it. The activity is organized and well thought out. Very easy to follow. Great. All of your questions are concise and pointed. There is no ambiguity or confusion. The page is organized and easy to navigate. Very user friendly. Great job.

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Review of Mask  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi AJblurryface,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone hiding who they are behind of mask of their own making. I remember using masks because I thought no one would like me as a person. I am much more secure now. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Twiga,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them read on. The poem is about two people who ate some toadstools on a walk and got sick. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of ***  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lovelybloom,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and tenderness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is deeply in love and yearns for the touch of the one they love. The feelings are very relatable to any reader. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Royal Guest Book  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Krista,
This is a fantastic activity page. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what to expect from the page. You introduce the page with some history of your writing career. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the page. They will read to the last word. Ypu have clearly outlined what you want the reader to do in this activity. There is no ambiguity. Fabulous. The page is well organized and easy to navigate. Very user friendly. Great job.

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Review of The Wishing Well  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Crissy,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anticipation and wonder. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about two people who get together after wishing for true love at a wishing well. I love stories which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Theirs  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi CJ,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of passion and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a couple who fall in love at first sight. I am hoping that this man and woman will remain happy. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Sunglasses  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi KimE,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if there is, in fact, something wrong with the woman who always wears sunglasses. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a very likeable woman mystifies the people in her town because she constantly wears sunglasses. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of The Snow  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Espero,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the state of Nature in Winter and Spring. I like Spring, but I love Summer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Mirrored Cinquain poetic form works very well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a fabulous rhythm here. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Stop To See  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bunnicula,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem points out that we should take notice of the beauty and goodness in this world. I agree with this whole heartedly. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Maalik,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and full of anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the emotional upheaval you have endured to this point in your life. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. They will read to the last word. The free verse works very well in this highly emotional poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of No Poem  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Laurie,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is forlorn. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone feeling down because there is nothing in their head to write. I have been a frequent sufferer of writer's block, and I know exactly how it can affect you. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse poetic for works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Under This Tree  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi BMF,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who wants to hide away from the chaos of the world. I have felt like that so many times in the past few years. I am hoping that the speaker finds the peace they are seeking. I read to the last word to find out if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Jacarandas  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kare,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of confusion and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why, if Ping is a gardener, he lives so far from Nature. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man who lives in a city in order to drown out the voices in his head that torment him every day. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Ping, and he comes across as a real person. The dialogue is well done and realistic. Ping speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of August  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi green supports Israel,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about hitting Indian Summer after Summer. We had a bout of Indian Summer not long ago. I loved it. I loved this pome and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation here, but it is not needed. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dr. MC Gupta,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the wonder of children. I don't have any myself, but I remember the curiosity and wonder of childhood. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi princessthai,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a woman who dates but prefers to be left along. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. There is an unusual rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of In My Lane  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Queen Kee,
This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The story is about someone who has a major revelation on a walk in a highway. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and they come across as a real person. There is only one line of dialogue, and it is well done and realistic. The speaker speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1) You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Queen Kee,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of obsession and frenzy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone is compelled to have a person they know in their life almost to the point of obsession and insanity. The reader is wondering if harm will come to either person in the poem because of the feelings of the speaker. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Annaliese,
This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens as Mimi and Elizabeth are just arriving at Mike's home. The reader is wondering what the purpose of the visit is. They will begin to read to find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. They get completely involved in the relationships of the characters and want to more about them. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Chris,
This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with X having bad dreams. The reader is wondering what has brought this on. They will read on to find out the answer to this question and more about X. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. They are immersed in wondering how these young soldiers will adjust to their new instructor. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Rodney,
This is a fantastic first chapter. The chapter opens with a description of what the main character is doing in the moment. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the main character and the chapter. They will continue to read to find out more. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main characters are plot very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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