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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi VanillaSoftArt,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of passion and longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if anyone will interrupt Ash and May's fun. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about two people who indulge in each other foot fetishes in a public place. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes the want to read on. The poem is about your love for, and devotion to God and Jesus. I have a great fait in God myself, and try to live my life like Jesus did. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi BEAR,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with sorrow and longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a stray cat who is waiting for a home and family. I am wondering if the people around will adopt the cat. I read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Keaton,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of regret and frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has done so much for those around them only to have their efforts not make any difference. We have all had things like this happen in our lives. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi kc,

This is a fantastic piece. The title tells me that this piece will be introducing one of the characters you intend to use in your writing. I am intrigued. I began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given the reader a description of one of the characters you intend to use in your writing. This is a dark, forbidding sounding character. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your plans for your writing. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Grass,

As soon as I saw the title of this poem it resonated with me. I am a survivor of emotional abuse, nothing physical, but I do identify with the emotions. I had to read this one further. It would be just too hard to resist.

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone in a relationship with an abuse survivor, who is hoping that their partner will be able to open up to them about their abuse. This poem reminds me so much of my husband and the way he nurtured and helped me during the first year of our relationship. I shared everything I had been through with him, but if I hadn't I know he would have felt exactly like this. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Vernal Equinox  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi m.alice,

I was in a poetry mood today, and was looking for a good poem or two to read and review. The title of this one told me nothing, really, about what the poem would be actually about. I love going into a piece with very little to guide me, so I can come to my own conclusions. I especially love this in poetry.

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and disappointment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a couple which realize, after establishing the relationship, that they were going in different direction. I was wondering if this couple would find some common ground as time went on. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works very well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Here Comes A Lie  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Keaton,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. You feel strongly about the subject matter of your poem. It takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the harm that telling a lie can do. I think that honesty is what we should practice in our lives. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Mr. Jones,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and sinister. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a stalker watching their prey through blind at their window. The reader is wondering if the person being watched will realize it. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

Winter Owl
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Review of Sleep  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi dharma,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is frenzied and full of confusion. It grabs all the readers attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if lack of sleep is causing Jacob's strange behavior. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a college student who has a difficult time dealing with the aftermath of a car accident. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of Obedience  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Capt. Wolf,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is sinister and filled with confusion. It takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the trapped man will find a way to escape. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man with a foot fetish is captured by his girlfriend's mother. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The poem is tinged with annoyance and boredom. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone taking an arduous, long journey through a very dry, stark area to get home for a family celebration. The reader is hoping that the final destination will have a lot of joy for them to experience. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract them from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Lost Ktten  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jeffrey,

I am so sorry for the loss of your son. This story must have been so enjoyable for him. It was for me. This was what attracted me to the story. I wanted to see what you did to make your son feel happy and loved. I thought it would be really sad at first, but that is not what you wrote.

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the kitten will have a happy life with her new owner. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about an abandoned kitten that finds love and comfort with someone else. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. This is like watching the kitten go through her life. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Marie,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about two people who have started to cross boundaries that were established in their relationship a long time ago. I am wondering if this relationship will suffer greatly with the change in dynamic. I read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Troyizen,

This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with the Royal Family going on, what is expected to be. a long trip. Most trips have some sort of excitement involved, and the reader is wondering what will happen on this one. They will read on to find out. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. They are taken with the anxiety and danger which surrounds the Royal Family. The dialogue is well done and consistent. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

Winter Owl
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Review of Christmas Morn  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ken,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is frenzied. The person in the poem is wondering what to do with themselves. This grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the hustle and bustle of Christmas morning. There was only me and my parents during my childhood, so there wasn't a lot of chaos. It is much the same now with me and my husband. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Rhupunt poetic form works well here, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal, but has humorous undertones. This grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a burglar whose plans are foiled by a protective mother. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a fabulous rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi nk velu,

I was taken with the title of this piece. It sounded like it would be a children's story. I have written a book of children's stories. I was interested in who else had written in the genre on the site. I was eager to start this one.

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what will actually be in the piece. They know they will be reading about a journey into the forest but not much else. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given the reader a review of your latest book available on Amazon. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your latest project and your career progression. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Sinsin? File 13.  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi bengaye,

Your description of this piece caught my eye. It sounded like someone who had moved from one home to another. I have moved a variety of times in my adult life from one apartment to another. I finally moved to the next town over from the city I was in.

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about moving and how you reacted to that. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi atticmoth,

This seemed like it would be an emotional piece just from the title. I love pieces that give the reader something personal about the writer or tell them an emotional story. I love pieces I can sink my teeth into.

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the will actually be in the piece. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your difficult journey to putting your writing first in your life. I had a lot of the same problems myself. I read to the last word to find out more about you and your mindset. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Dog  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Aitaj,

I love animals. I have a cat myself but have known many families who have had beautiful dogs. My next door neighbors when I was a child had a gorgeous Collie named Lady. I anxiously started to read this piece to find out more.

This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and enigmatic at the same time. The reader knows they will be reading about dogs or a dog, but little else. Any dog or animal lover will begin reading right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the various characteristics of dogs. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Christening  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Eliot,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal and slightly aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how names can say something about the children that receive them. I was Christened at the hospital before I had surgery when I was born. My mother simply said "Amy" when the priest asked her what my name would be. She had intended on calling me Melody. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Summer  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Beholden,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about an ant who keeps going about his business on a hot day when everyone is trying to rest in the shade. From the few times I have seen ants it looks like they never stop. I could envision this one keeping busy as I read. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Wrexgor,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I know very little about European sports, and this piece fascinated me. I began to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. This takes all the reader's attention and focusing it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about improving the distribution of trophies in various sports in Europe. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Elisa the bunny stik,

From the title I get an aura of nostalgia surrounding this poem. I love pieces that fall into the past, especially if they tell me about the writer themselves. I anxiously began to read to find out if this was about you or something from the past in general. I tend to look to my future but will share things about my past here.

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and filled with warmth. It looks like you look fondly on your youth. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the things that drove you crazy as a kid. I can remember so much like that, geni pants was one. Rap was another. I only bought one Rap album. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read.You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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