I love one word title on pieces of any sort. It gets the reader thinking and wanting to know more about what is going on in the piece. In stories they can add an air of suspense. That's what brought me to this article. When I read on that was it. I kept on reading.
This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. You have written about the amazing, and way too short, career of Selena Quintanilla. I watched a documentary about her life about a year ago now. I had never heard her music before, and the snippits I got from the show were bouncy and wonderful. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the piece by briefly discussing parties you have attended. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about when you could not dance will but accepted a dance with a girl at your friend's Bar Mitsvah. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a humorous, light hearted style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with empathy and sadness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone watching a person they love suffering from chronic pain that the doctors can find no reason or cure for. I am so sorry for both people in this poem. I wish I could reach out and help in some way. i loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic goals chart. You have clearly marked your progress as you went. You have succeeded in all your goals so far except doing something creative. You could probably writer more if this is your something creative. It might be helpful to block out a certain time of day to write. That would keep your into a schedule. It should be a quiet time of day to help your concentrate. Not getting this done just means you have to look into your schedule and see what can be moved around. Good luck. Being organized is usually half the battle. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive but tinged with confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who things they hear drums in the night only to wake up to find their neighbors and family have been massacred. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about some of the best things about Spring. I love Spring almost as much as I love Summer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Brevee poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well here. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is a tribute to all the sacrifices soldiers make for us everyday. I have a few people in my life who have served their country, and I am very proud of all of them. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. the poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
The title does suggest that this will be a unpleasant poem, and I wanted to see where the unpleasantness was coming from. Writers tend to write about what is going on in their lives, so I was anxious to find out what was going on here. I love being intrigued right away. So much of us goes into our writing. It is a pleasure to see into people with their writing.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is bitter and filled with anger. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is angry and saddened when they are betrayed by someone they love. I am going through something like this in my life now. I read to the last word to see if the speaker found peace. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem. It usually does in highly emotional poem. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
The title of this caught my attention. It states a little about your work ethic and writing philosophy. It mirrors my own. I wanted to find out more about this, so was anxious to start reading this piece.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct, yet enigmatic and attention grabbing at the same time. It tells the reader a little about your outlook but has them wanting to know more. They will begin to read to know more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your attitude towards the work you do and how you like to do it. The reader is delighted with look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how money is the root of all evil. I don't think one needs a lot of money to be happy, but I certainly don't think it is wrong to have a lot of it either. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but it is not needed here. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of panic and determination. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Serena will be fed to the Demon or get away. They will read to the last word. The story is about a woman who is accused of summoning a demon when she did not. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what Marla will do about her problem with Pauline. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who is frustrated that someone else got a role in a performance held by their ballet company that she had wanted. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is sinister. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about man who kills people in order to take their eyes to replace his own. The reader is wondering if Sam's killing spree will be discovered. They will read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
I love reading Sci-fi so I was anxious to read this story. I have tried writing it a few times. The title was so intriguing I wanted to know what would be going on in it. Who, exactly, would be throwing rocks? Was it invading aliens? Was it the humans trying to defend themselves? I just had to find out.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story, plot and genre very well. The reader is wondering if Little Johnny will get into any mischief as he plays. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a young boy finds an alien who had crashed to earth. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Tess and Mitch will manage to find Los Vegas. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman frustrated with a man who won't admit that he is wrong, even when its leading them into the wrong direction. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is melancholy and filled with disappointment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who believes they will not be remembered because they are not important enough to be remembered. I am hoping that the person in the poem will find a way to improve their self esteem and reach out to others for support. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader a little about your time on the site. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have shared your struggle in finding someone who will actually read your screenplay. Ever writer has had problems like this. My only two books are on Amazon because I couldn't get a publisher to look at them. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. You have described the novel you are working on and announced that you need a publisher. The reader is delighted with the look they get at the progress of your career. It sounds like a amazing novel. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a forceful style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written announcing the beginning of a few writing contests and how they can be found. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
I just loved the title of this one. I wanted to know more about what would be going on in this essay and how spirituality would figure into the whole scenario. Most of these types of essays reach out to offer help to others. I love essays that do that. There is, most times, little nuggets of wisdom we can all benefit from. You introduce the topic with a brief statement about your thoughts about the human experience. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the you and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about how a person cannot really plan for every problem because they can't anticipate everything that could go wrong. That is certainly true. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:
1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.
You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a wonderful essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. The
A couple of things led me to this chapter. I love reviewing novels in general. I know what it is like to work on a novel, and I understand how challenging it can be at times to get the chapters reviewed. The title indicates that the novel is about a family. I love novels which revolve around a family and their family conflicts.
This is a fantastic first chapter. The chapter opens with the statement that the Bentleys are mice and goes on to describe the family. You have given animals personalities like humans. I love this technique. Fabulous opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main characters and plot very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why Roland doesn't seem to be enjoying the wedding. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man who attends the wedding of the love of his life, as a guest. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is frenzied and desperate. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when you were overwhelmed by many things that caused you great pain. I have gotten through the times in my life like this with my Faith and my husband. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a wonderful piece. The title makes the reader think the piece will be humorous. I am half Irish and most of my family played darts, and it always amounted to a time with a fair amount of laughs. I began to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion about your ability at playing darts. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the topic. They will read to the last word. You have written about a time you were convinced to take on five Irishmen in Darts. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:
1) “ keep that son we’ll be taking more than that off you soon enough”.-Should read "Keep that son. We'll be taking more than that off you soon enough."
You use a light hearted style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It only states that the reader will be reading about your wife's escape. Was it from criminal, a dangerous animal? The reader is not sure but will begin to read immediately to find out. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about a time when you had to compete with your wife's new car for her attention. The reader is delighted with the look they get a you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
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