|Errm well this is gruesome, morbid, and well horrible, which is good for some people, but I am not a fan of horror at all. It is probebly what you aimed for, and you should be proud I guess, but horror makes me queasy. I think it's good for what it's worth, which to me is little personally, but many,many people would like this, probebly including you. Write on (prefferably with less horror, but do whatever you want, writing wise at least. Don't go robbing any banks because I said that. Just kidding, but seriously never rob banks.)!