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Review of Shelter Dog  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice... Got this through read and review.... A few grammatical and punctuation errors but I love the way the story flows, and that it is written from the perspective of the dog.... Have you ever read 'Fluke' by James Herbert, I am sure you have, there are many similarities.
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Review of Sunday Morning  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (3.0)
I do not understand this. Maybe it is my stupidity but could you clarify your words and letters for me...?
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Review of Job Hunting  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (3.0)
Ok so I like this, I guess because I can relate to it from personal experience, although I do not live with my mother, who is long dead. The thing that stands out most is your lack of grammar which, I feel, if inserted would make it far more readable
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Review of Fade To Black  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice perspective. Yes, I understand completely the ups and downs, ins and outs that are the general pattern of our lives here.
I like the way that you allude to hope and resilience at the end of your poem and to belief in yourself.
Keep going the world awaits....
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Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.5)
'The massacre is stopped before the teeth are bared,' a beautiful line and for sure a line that reflects the world that we are living in today.
The drama reflected in this poem is a definite reflection of the life we are living today, you and I are the rabbit, the dog and the blue jay.....


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Review of YOU  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (3.5)
Love this, your allusions and creativity with the theme or non-theme are great and it encapsulates an entire generation, just check the grammar and then it would be perfect.....
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