Very nice... Got this through read and review.... A few grammatical and punctuation errors but I love the way the story flows, and that it is written from the perspective of the dog.... Have you ever read 'Fluke' by James Herbert, I am sure you have, there are many similarities.
Ok so I like this, I guess because I can relate to it from personal experience, although I do not live with my mother, who is long dead. The thing that stands out most is your lack of grammar which, I feel, if inserted would make it far more readable
Nice perspective. Yes, I understand completely the ups and downs, ins and outs that are the general pattern of our lives here.
I like the way that you allude to hope and resilience at the end of your poem and to belief in yourself.
Keep going the world awaits....
'The massacre is stopped before the teeth are bared,' a beautiful line and for sure a line that reflects the world that we are living in today.
The drama reflected in this poem is a definite reflection of the life we are living today, you and I are the rabbit, the dog and the blue jay.....
Love this, your allusions and creativity with the theme or non-theme are great and it encapsulates an entire generation, just check the grammar and then it would be perfect.....
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