Silent's (silent2020) Reviews

Silent

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18 Public Reviews Given

18 Total Reviews Given

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#4584732

Review of Shelter Dog

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Very nice... Got this through read and review.... A few grammatical and punctuation errors but I love the way the story flows, and that it is written from the perspective of the dog.... Have you ever read 'Fluke' by James Herbert, I am sure you have, there are many similarities.

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#4582637

Review of Sunday Morning

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

I do not understand this. Maybe it is my stupidity but could you clarify your words and letters for me...?

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#4582381

Review of Plight of the furry Dog

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Very nice, although I found it somehow hard to read given that you split the verses. But I do find it actually ok that you have just continued the story through without beginning again, and I find no problems with your spelling or grammar. Looking forward to seeing more....

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#4582247

Review of Job Hunting

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

Ok so I like this, I guess because I can relate to it from personal experience, although I do not live with my mother, who is long dead. The thing that stands out most is your lack of grammar which, I feel, if inserted would make it far more readable

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#4581855

Review of Fade To Black

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Nice perspective. Yes, I understand completely the ups and downs, ins and outs that are the general pattern of our lives here.
I like the way that you allude to hope and resilience at the end of your poem and to belief in yourself.
Keep going the world awaits....

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#4581634

Review of There's A Rabbit in the Yard

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

'The massacre is stopped before the teeth are bared,' a beautiful line and for sure a line that reflects the world that we are living in today.
The drama reflected in this poem is a definite reflection of the life we are living today, you and I are the rabbit, the dog and the blue jay.....

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4580729

Review of YOU

Review by Silent

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Love this, your allusions and creativity with the theme or non-theme are great and it encapsulates an entire generation, just check the grammar and then it would be perfect.....