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Review of Shelter Dog  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice... Got this through read and review.... A few grammatical and punctuation errors but I love the way the story flows, and that it is written from the perspective of the dog.... Have you ever read 'Fluke' by James Herbert, I am sure you have, there are many similarities.
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Review of Sunday Morning  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (3.0)
I do not understand this. Maybe it is my stupidity but could you clarify your words and letters for me...?
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Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice, although I found it somehow hard to read given that you split the verses. But I do find it actually ok that you have just continued the story through without beginning again, and I find no problems with your spelling or grammar. Looking forward to seeing more....
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Review of Job Hunting  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (3.0)
Ok so I like this, I guess because I can relate to it from personal experience, although I do not live with my mother, who is long dead. The thing that stands out most is your lack of grammar which, I feel, if inserted would make it far more readable
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Review of Fade To Black  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice perspective. Yes, I understand completely the ups and downs, ins and outs that are the general pattern of our lives here.
I like the way that you allude to hope and resilience at the end of your poem and to belief in yourself.
Keep going the world awaits....
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Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.5)
'The massacre is stopped before the teeth are bared,' a beautiful line and for sure a line that reflects the world that we are living in today.
The drama reflected in this poem is a definite reflection of the life we are living today, you and I are the rabbit, the dog and the blue jay.....


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Review of Talking Things!  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (4.0)
Fantastic, really puts us humans in perspective. Your writing brings the whole of creation to a realization of it's own potential... I love the line:
Rabbits did binky dance with joy seeing a human being in me. One of them jumped at me “Hey you human, nice to see you here, come along we dance!” so real and tempting was her invite!
'Binky dance' really set my imagination flowing and forced me to pay attention to the rest of the story....
A few grammatical and spelling errors, but maybe you just put them in there to add to the sense of mystery.
Wonderful, thanks


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of YOU  
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (3.5)
Love this, your allusions and creativity with the theme or non-theme are great and it encapsulates an entire generation, just check the grammar and then it would be perfect.....
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for entry "Shiny Footprints
Review by Silent
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it' the pace is great as well as the suspense and the mystery of what might happen next. The characters seem to be built in a short time frame and, I feel, that this is a model that I could aspire to,,,,
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Review by Silent
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Lovely writing, and great description brought about by the characters themselves. I certainly not familiar with this genre but this brought it alive for me. Personally, I can say it was a little to much rhetoric and not enough background,but then again who am I to speak. Thank you.....
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