|This story is beautifully written. I especially like all the descriptive terms you used, they really open the mind to the setting and piece.
I also like that this is flash fiction and you did an amazing job of getting everything conveyed in so few words!
The only thing that confused me was the beginning but you tied it in the ending so I think it works well.
I'm always a little jealous of people who can write flash fiction, I am a person of many words. Good job at writing this, I loved it!