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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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 Insomnia: Night Owl  (13+)
This is about coping in a "bad" way with insomnia
#1913586 by Coperniki


I know just how you feel, for every night my husband keeps me awake with his Insomnia.
We have found no help where we have looked except for him to take from time to time a pill or two.

Oops I was getting off track. This poem you have written lets me see the world of insomnia in a way I have not before.
I thank you for this.

I enjoyed reading this piece and its lesson that it tells the ones that do not know insomnia.

Thank you for writing this piece.
I would like to read other writings you have done.
Silverwindrose


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Review of Broken Angel  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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 Broken Angel  (13+)
This one was about a girl I had felt for who was spiritually broken. Dedicated to Katie.
#1912867 by Timothy Sweden

What a sweet poem.
I could not help but feel for one so badly hurt.
I know just how it feels to stop and help.
Many forget what you have not, sometimes just being there is the most help one can give.

This poem brings to me the feelings of pain, caring, frustration and need.
I know these well for I too was once a broken angle and because some one did stop and take the time to care and listen.
I have been able to heal my wings in this life and fly with the words upon paper once more.

Thank you for this great poem. It brings me back to why I like to write.

Thank you and I hope to read more of your writings.
Silverwindrose


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank yo for this poem.
 No One Knows They Gone  (E)
It is my grandmother's voice I heard when I wrote this. She was a real character.
#1913638 by AbbyReed

The way you wrote this poem was as if I was listening to my own grandmother was sitting in the room with me talking.

I did not personally find any thing wrong with this piece of great writing and would love to read more of your great writings.
Thank you for writing this piece.
Silverwindrose


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Review of The Truth  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Welcome to WDC.
Thank you for sharing your writing here.
Your poem Thank you and I love you is a deep and emotional piece I enjoyed reading.
I felt as I had known the brother you were writing about as if he was my own.
This poem shows the power of love between you and your brother in a way most cannot capture with words.
I would love to read more of your poems and stories.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
What a moving mini memoir.
This is so deep and powerful it brings back memories of loved ones now long gone.
Memories are funny things they like to come and go, but this feels like when I lost my own grandmother.
Thank you for reminding me the power a loved can have on your life with out them even knowing.
Yes they leave an emptiness but that is so we can make news of their stories with others.

Thank you for the memories and the reminder of spending time with those that are here now.
Silverwindrose

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Review of Aftermath  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What a wonderful surprise for Sam to do.
I know the feeling of waking up just to clean up what happened the night before. Poor little Lovey so lucky to be found so early in the day and before a mistake was made. I felt the depression of not wanting to clean. The startled find of Lovey, and the wonder of the first day of the year gift from Sam. Now Sam to handing money over was not as much of a wonder as the fact he offered and started cleaning with out anyone saying anything to him.
Thank you for sharing this great story it is a reminder of the unexpected happening to bring a smile to ones face.
Silverwindrose
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Review of Snow Fire  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
What a charming little poem.
I understand where you are coming from.

I do have two suggestions that might help with the presentation of your poem.
My first suggestion would be to center your poem on the page.
And my other suggestion would be to drop the double spacing.

This would make your poem flow better because one would mot be hunting for the next line.

Thank you for writing this poem I did enjoy the images it gave me as I read it.
Thank you
Silverwindrose
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