This is a nice and imaginative poem with so many options and thoughts so creatively and boldly discussed. As a reader l did feel the slow progress of desperation from one with curosity to a level wherein the need to be the lady in the window. All this step wise progress has been beautifully captured here. Great job..sindbad
Memorial day and it's relevance has been beautifully written here and as a reader l always remembered the world lest we ever forget, the sacrifice and the things a war hero is missing, just to ensure that we have our freedom and peace of mind. This is one moment the reverence for our hero comes from our heart and no one can take that away..sindbad
This ain't no lie is a hard hitting poem and shows the inner faith and turbulation, and all this so beautifully expressed with human frailty. The role of Almighty and the faith on this law and order vis a vis human boundaries are clearly expressed on a divine level. This poem is an epitome for human excellence and the Divine interventions...sindbad
This is a nice and rather string take on no use. As a reader l was intrigued with so much struggle and unwarranted opposition. And as l moved down the line, there was a mellowed tone and all struggles gone as they were stamped as of no use. This poem reflects your surgical use of words to show the world on existence of so many issues and there is no use in removing them..sindbad
This is a poem that did leave a deep impression, as the title a woman is suffering makes a reader curious about the reasons. You were very clear and methodic in pointing out all the attrocities both physical, mental and psychological. The way she did find her redemption is also worth some deep thoughts. Overal a nice and awakening poem you have here.. sindbad
High when you are low speaks a lot about temperament and represents things that we like to avoid. Such things we abhor and condemn with full force. The incident and the way you represented the situation and matter makes me wonder about your string moral orientation and deep understanding of human intricacies..sindbad
This is a nice and refreshing story within 300 words and the kind of advice is perfect and sane. The timings and all were perfect and Taylor did learn a lesson, on a thin line seperating between trust and breaking the same. All this setting an example has been one of the focal point of this story. Nice and wonderful read..sindbad
This title scavenger hunt is indeed exciting and the images collected are both diverse and unique. All photos are complete and we can write a ton of things on each unique pictures. I have always appreciated your works and did spend lot many hours to locate for trinkets in great maze of interactive stories. Great job indeed..sindbad
This is a nice and creative take on smart wish and creative different options with ever creative and new avenues. As a reader l did learn and did appreciate a determination and goal so very important 8n creating famous work. I did see such spark in your poetry specially a voluntary way of cleaning your ever darkening soul..sindbad
This is a nice and rather unique take on love. Generally we look and rather try our luck on love and we don't give up till we have succeeded in finding one. Hear you are confident of being someone's lost love. This is indeed a great and unique take with your bones are near dusts..sindbad
This is a nice and short Haiku, and it covers three basic aspects of birth very effectively. First is a safe sorroundings you included twisty twigs sorrounding, the right environment and third being safe from the predators. All this expressed in so few and powerful words. All this speaks a great deal about your creative streak in writing beautiful poetry by observing your sorroundings..sindbad
I have been a great fan of your poetry and short story. There is some lesson and learning in all your work. A reader realises that under difficult circumstances and impossible odds you find a silver lining a silver lining for survival, that survival spirit and it's infinite permutations and combinations are very well expressed in all your works..sindbad
This story from 5he very begining promised misery guts of Willie Pete. All the beautiful and successful sorroundings with so much in promise yet all ending with on sadness and all. The language and word flow in the story was par excellence and as a reader l did appreciate the creative detour here. Overall a creative and ooth flowing piece with big promises..sindbad
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This is a nice and heart touching poem and l give it full support and points for being empathetic and positive oriented. I support you decision to volunteer with title let me be the one on all support about two heart fated to beat as one. This is a great and inspiring piece for young lovers..sindbad
This is a fact and we mostly overlook it. The Gods will is good and productive for all of us, it's just that we should accept it and allow the wonders to unfold itself. I liked the line- From sin’s curse of death, by your will, I am set free..this speaks for itself. Overall a great moral booster here..sindbad
This a nice and yet story that will be known to end with indecisive ending. Mary waiting for so long to get a star tattoo and Jane was rather indecisive. However Jane's mandate prevailed as both were close teenage friends. In teenage years friendship matters. This is indeed a nice and eloquent message...sindbad
This is a nice and rather heavy story on Grace Serket. I did feel the inner questions and clarification Grace seeks and all this and more buffer has been amply provided by you with a great mystery about what power Grace has as she turns 16, and what are the dangers. All this and more answers will remain immensely awaited..sindbad
This is nice and creative set up you have to promote some talented person to express their poetry and your perfect and prompt judging and decision making with attractive rewards are things that did attract me to express my opinion with strong moral support as well. This is a great job with lot of preparation and subordination...sindbad
This is a nice and creative dialogue so well written. As a reader l can learn a new trick so well expounded with some juicy example and a real nasty finishing line. The introduction and catchy lines like always liked her drinking but found no joy in sex did make this a interesting and remarkable revenge.. sindbad
This is a nice and great poem on ink, as a reader l did feel the pointers about you understanding the significance of ink and its use for great, petty, dangerous and finally freedom oriented activities. I did like your special imaginative power and their use in drafting poetry that may look ahead of time, but are apt for the present..sindbad
This is a nice and short story about aliens finding a inhabitable Blue planet. All the environment being polluted, such story does remind the fate of the planet we inhabitate. You did explore the option of purification and ruled it over by the aliens. This story has great potential with perfect blend of popular things that attracts readers attention...sindbad
This is a impressive piece of poetry with all the pointers in the prompt thoroughly followed and even than making a perfect and creative sense about the stories in the backyard. All individual things so perfectly placed and connecting to the whole, creativity at its best and nothing more can l add here..sindbad
This is a nice and creative poem on true silence. It's just not stop talking or lack of speech it's much more, as you so graciously shown here. L liked the line-embrace we slip to the floor...and overall this is a powerful and yet subtle poem that speaks a volume on true silence and more..sindbad
This is a nice simple and unique poem you have written expressing your true love. You have mentioned so many incidents that did hurt you and now after getting positive vibes you have accepted the love, with the intention of making it your true love. In this line- Others left through the back door- did leave. We indeed meet for a reason..sindbad
This is nice and rather unique comparison between love and snow. The common denominator factors and strong reasoning and similar situations in love has been perfectly captured here. The melt away portion was indeed unique here and l feel your exposure to love did allow to write such a creative poem...sindbad
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