This is a nice and interesting story with some rare and interesting anecdotes about girls marrying American and going of to America. Overall l liked the excellent observation of the environment and dynamic lifestyle of beautiful people in house near fallowfield..sindbad
This is a nice and interesting piece you have. The creative component is so freely available with little by little push. The balance between love and self doubt has been expressed in a balance and perfect manner. The whittling effect was creative indeed..sindbad
This is a nice and interesting take on night. All the different shades and divergent things happening in a willful on unwillful manner has been stupendously captured. You have done a great job by bringing perfect balance and meaning after incorporating all the words in bold..sindbad
This is a nice and informative facts about Robert Johnson. You were able to bring those rare fact that serves as a connoisseur information. The links were immensely helpful and did give an all-round weightage to your story. Great job in perfecting the form if the week..sindbad
This is a creative and rather unorthodox piece you have written. You have indeed shown the strength and decency to bring about all wild thoughts in a coherent and practical manner, without signing unjustified. Overall a great job and performance here..sindbad
This is a nice and elegant piece celebrating the bliss moment to moment. This is it as a statement and the short poem as a whole has been beautifully dedicated to your loved one. A great message delivered in so few a word. Great job...sindbad
This is a hard hitting strong poem pertaining to today's world situation, yet l did find the words and meaning sensible like -Leaves the mind blinded on the roadside
Leaves the soul feeling so tired..
Indeed some like it evil, yet we need to change the mindset...sindbad
I have read a lot of your poetry and enjoy them and try to relish the unique agenda you put forward in each one of them. Here as well your waiting for the next is well captured from a unique pov. I liked your unique interpretation of the reality..sindbad
This is a nice and rather perfect time inthe course of history to seek clarification on Bible being a historical document. We have the technology to do research and investigate as well. As space and time is just a fabric that has direct connection with our mind, hence a scientific research and investigations will certainly yield the desired result..sindbad
This is indeed a poem that does touch the heart of all readers.The secret heartbeat and the way you presented it at the end did enhance the heartbeat of the readers. I did feel the deep emotional quotient and it did leave a deep impact. Great job indeed..sindbad
This is a nice and interesting introduction and can certainly become a popular story. I certainly liked your obsession with Mordecai, however try to mould your character with the upcoming plot and you will certainly see the transformation... sindbad
This is indeed a creative and heart rendering poem. It reflects the positive and the negative things that happen in our society all the time. The things covered are all from your heart and that leaves a deep impression in mind of the readers. I will certainly follow the dictum in the end, to do things to other people so that it touches their heart and they can remember as well..sindbad
This is indeed a unique and rather unorthodox short story. The story depicts a dead wife and the way the plot is written or drafted leaves lot of things unanswered and increases the mystery component. However the whole story is well drafted. Great job..sindbad
This is indeed a rare and a hard hitting poem that touches the heart of readers who are patriotic. You have captured the essence of entitlement and the lack of applying what is needed. Such actions and their consequences has been beautifully expressed here. I hope the stomach for Mayhem recovers to normalcy..sindbad
This is a nice and rather hard hitting poem on morals and their predicament. You chose a perfect title about refering a vacant tommorow and the things society is overlooking to reach this state. This poem motivates to look for a cause and bring about the upliftment of our moral objective.. Sindbad
A bold significance indeed reflects something worthwhile and noble. You have expressed some unique perspective and emotions on time and it's essence. The situation presented and the way things are moving with reference to event dynamics is worth appreciating here. Great job..sindbad
This is a strong and hard hitting poem reflecting the current situation and specially the pandemic. You have used some creative and subtle metaphor to readers and they do follow the inner meanings and overtures. This is a nice and mundane expression of thoughts in such trying times..sindbad
This is a interesting and creative story. I liked the realistic touch given to both Ariel and Eva. Their indepth understanding of their sorroundings as well as the comfort level in each other's working styles. The perfect blend of hunters has been incorporated to enhance the reading experience...sindbad
This is nice and appealing interactive story you have and as a audience there are multiple options and multiple ideas that can be written, to prolong the interactive content. You have made big something synonymous with some creative, appealing and beautiful. A great job to create such an eye catching setup..sindbad
This is s nice and interesting story with a catchy title, specially potrait of a man is a positive identification about achievement, rare indeed is to be consumed by fear. You have done a commendable job and created a persona that was worth admiring. Overall a nice and interesting ending with last option as a desire to sleep..sindbad
This is nice and interesting story about end of humanity. This story you wrote in 2012, and all the pointers are relevant even today. As a reader l like your vison and inner thought process happening in the mind of Phil. I did have lot of don't you think moments. Overall a nice tight and futuristic take.. sindbad
This is nice and interesting analysis of 365 days and how you tackle diverse situations in a creative and rather unique manner. This Self actualization and a rather unique way to surrender to the Divine will and it's precursor did leave a deep and unanswered tinker. Overall a creative and unique piece here..sindbad
This is a nice and creative poem, and certainly for readers like me. I love mystical component and information on nature that strengthens my belief that nature including us, is All Divine for All time As it Is. Means we are all part of Divine Game and should always be humble and grateful..not grumble..sindbad
This is nice and elegant tribute to a soldier and his dormant and yet rich adherence to honor and valor. I like the title and find it difficult to absorb the loneliness so well captured with so few a words. You have captured the traditional essence of once a soldier, so difficult task nowadays. Great job indeed.. sindbad
This is a nice and balanced poem and you have covered all the aspects on your inner love. This detailed and beautifully crafted poem will surely have the desired impact and effect on your soul mate and love.l am sure the result will be acceptance and acknowledgement of your proposal..sindbad
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