This is nice and perfect poem expressing the emotions we have when we hold a newborn, and experience the new generation, all pristine and innocent divine look. All this emotions are indeed difficult to put in writing. You have done an excellent job, and reader can feel the reflections of these strongest emotions here..sindbad
This is a balanced and yet hard hitting poetry on concern for the truth. The lengthy discourse and the flow of words did leave a deep impression to readers. Also the nonsense and the ever stricken morals will never let the reader forget about the concerns..sindbad
This is nice and creative set up you wrote. As a reader l did go with the flow and got a hang of your thought process. The way you wanted to handle the situation and steps you foresaw. All those preparation went in vain and the conundrum situation at the end was well crafted and presented in this competition. Wish you all the best..sindbad
This is a nice and creative representation of rose. As a reader we associate rose with blossoming love and its romantic overtures. You gave a new and yet refreshing meaning, though a little sad one. Overall the creative balance to make the event from present to past is perfect..specially your perfect rose..sindbad
This is a nice and sequential representation of 17 words and their corresponding emotions. All this in a creative manner to show your self the degree of love and your surrender to love. I liked the sequence and deeper meaning associated with it. Wish you all the best in your pursuit...sindbad
This is a nice and detailed capture of camping trip. All happening in the woods, the cabin and freezing temperatures outside. The dialogues and events happening in sub zero climate with limited resources, did make the whole episode interesting and damn close to reality. This is impressive, with spontaneous action and perfect unfolding of the event..sindbad
This is a nice and short representation of life in a day to day manner. There is always something happening and endeavour to manage and keep our best feet forward. I liked the flow and spontaneous actions beautifully captured. Great job...sindbad
Nice and clear representation of thought process in a logical and humorous manner. This type of communication is popular among young generation and l see a lot of potential in such crisp expressions with benign sense of humor and purpose..sindbad
This is Avery popular topic and has made the young generation addicted to it. The popularity is well deserved as this game identifies and fulfills a basic need of young generation and that is creative engagement along with excitement and challenges. You have done a great job in this interactive game. Wish you all the best...sindbad
This is a nice and interesting story nicely connected to the past and reincarnation as well. I find it very difficult to connect and blend the past events to the present times due to change to times and so many complications that needs minute handling. The balance and effortless foray of past thoughts and articles with present day conflicts and understanding was very clear in this story. I am sure you must have got the deserved recognition in the contest..sindbad
This is a nice and surreal expression of eyes. As a reader l did feel your indepth experience in caves and crevices all around the world. The word choice and it's perfect match with certain functions of eyes did make me appreciate your observing skills and expressing the same in a poetry format..sindbad
This is a nice and rather appealing article on one of the most exciting part on all living individuals. We all follow certain set of instincts, excitement and a sense of emotional adventure very new and raw. You did enhance the value by introducing the old fashioned way. A great and creative job indeed..sindbad
This is a poem l did find rather unique and creative
. This poem expresses love divine and yet a mindset and goal that pursues purity at heart. I did like your unique take on the prize with deeper moralistic implications. This will certainly appeal to a certain section of people..sindbad
This is a nice and moralistic take on events that did question the same to whole humanity. You have defined an individual with course of action that is worth understanding and appreciation as well. The meanings expressed here are much deeper and positive from long term prospective.. sindbad
This is again one of your creative and yet well established poem on human endeavour and aspirations towards excellence. I did get a hint of regrets well camouflaged with some beautiful renditions of word. An excellent poem on the new journey amidst the impeding perils...sindbad
This is a nice and creative of expressing certain events that has remained in the limelights for the last 15days. You have expressed a neutral and yet effective way of expressing the loss from humanity point of view. A rare and intuitive way of expressing the new beginning of the blame game... sindbad
This is a nice and interesting introduction to the chapter 1 of inheritance. I liked the point of reference and beautiful reference to time from despair angle. The internal build up of resistance and nice exploratory words does make it interesting and valuable as well..sindbad
This is a nice and elegant way of wishing and inspiring Merry Christmas to all the reader's. This poem appeals 5o the children's and adults reliving their fantasies. There is a celebratory tone with beautiful touch of creativity like on top of Green Christmas trees...sindbad
This story captures a scene in the court with utmost genuinity and unique crossroads. As a reader l can write a long and meaningless review to express about your subtle and sudden change of perception in the story at the courthouse. Great job indeed..sindbad
This is a nice and interesting piece with a rather classical approach on vampires. As a reader l did get the old approach of instant attention and action with fate fixed. This happening due to presence being at wrong place at a wrong time... sindbad
This is a nice and rather interesting plot that leaves deep impression to the readers. I find the sharp and rhythmic language popular to the ears and catchy to great extend. Overall a sizeable effort to keep varied reader's interest beautifully handled. Great job..sindbad
This is a nice innovative poem and like the lion King song by Elton John, wheels of fortune, about to never take, more than you can give. This poem equates so many things in a beautiful manner, l take all these aspects of love in high esteem. Overall a nice and balanced poem and it expresses deeper things in so few a word. I think this poem can be a code to deliver deeper messages effectively. A very creative endeavour...sindbad
This poem is creative and informative. I liked the style and perfection in expressing the winter, the effects of winter and the precautions for the olds. The fun and frolick of youngster and Jack flock did make it short and interesting..sindbad
This is nice and uplifting poem on spirit of hope. A nice and creative overture on perfect sorounding that enhances the love quotient of this wonderful poem. Overall l liked the title and romantic flow with peace beyond compare. I have always liked your way of surprising the readers with some positive message as well. Wish you and your family a Happy New year.. sindbad
This is indeed a great entry in dialogue 500, and l have learnt a lot in this short piece to create and leave a bubbly 8mpression to readers. Sir l appreciate the ambience you create and maintain. This comes with lot of exposure to different facets of life. I admire the way you put things in perspective, and they all fit in a balanced manner...sindbad
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