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Review of Finding  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful! So beautiful. I felt every pain for you. I wanted to get a dry cloth and soak up every pain that bled from your being. From your heart, your head, your soul.

It's like looking at a dirty soiled piece of paper and trying to wash it clean. The more it is washed, the more it disintegrates.
The only answer is to discard the old piece and pic a fresh new piece to start afresh. The first chapter being 'The beginning of a new life' of discovery.

A metamorphosis of throwing the old skin away and what emerges is, a new being, a butterfly. The butterfly can see from all angles and it is beautiful.
Thank you for allowing me into your thoughts M.*Writing*
Hugs
Alexi Mason*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a treasure of a poem that could go into your life summery. When your grandchildren look at this in years to come they too will shed a tear and be thankful for the traditions of their grandfather.
Beautifully written and memorable. A time of reflection; thanks giving and peace on earth.
Well done
Alexi*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Interesting thoughts from the archives of one Jeremy Buxton. I remember the song well and most of the words. Interesting that your dog looking at you and following you around was the button that pressed you thoughts to recall this eternal song from the first world war era.

The 1959 version was great and although I liked 'Shakin' Stevens' I preferred 'Emile Ford and the Checkmates.'
An interesting read
respect
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Review of The Flea Bank  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with October Novel Prep Winners Gr...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Let me help you Kasia*Smile*
Hope I get a good days Nano writing today.
Pens United*Laugh*
Alexi*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's interesting how much we can see in the clouds. I believe it is right for us to read the clouds. Jesus said 'He is coming in the clouds' and all his heavenly hosts. Every eye shall see and everyone will know that I am Lord.

I like your poem. It made me smile and wooosh! The plane took it away in an instant.
God is the best painter. He has the best colours and an ever changing canvass. No two seconds are the same.
Well done.
Alexi*Heart*
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Review of Your NanoCounter  
Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you. I didn't know about this.
Alexi Mason*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Am I missing something?/
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Review of Mr Pumpkinface  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This one made me smile*Smile* It's a fun time of year and I can picture the torturer taking home Mr Pumpkin and then ouch. Off with his hat and oh! Pain ! His innards are being scooped out. Then the eyes. I can hear him scream, a start to Halloween. Then torture as he lights up the night and sweats, although he knows nothing about it as his brain is made into soup and his torturer sits at the kitchen table and eats his tasty brain and cackles. Mwhaawhaaaa!

huds{e:smile\]
Alexi{e:heart}

I can only send a Picture in of a pumpkin someone else has tortured, as I have never mutilated one myself. I get someone else to do my dirty work*Laugh*
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Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi E.S.
Your faith has saved you. Fear not the ill will of wicked men. Don't be envious of those who prosper for their sins.
Be happy in him and he will give you the desires of your heart.*Heart*
I like the way you boldly put this forward and have the faith towards your goals.
Mightier than a two edged sword. he knows your heart.
Well done oh conqueror.
Alexi Mason*Music2*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A good visual poem and a cat that carries a poison to his master. The bible of investigation is opened on the desk and a magnified light spot is focused on the culprit

A detective that investigates like a bloodhound. A tripods plant that has to be destroyed. The plot is set and the thirsty green alien is splatted like the wicked witch of Oz.

One feels sorry for the detective and his suffering and sends a message of hope that nature will take it's course
and the detective in question will find a sequel to his tale of revenge.

An interesting Poem*Laugh*
regards
Alexi*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ha, lovely and a well deserved win. Make sure you put that you won and the contest and date on the bottom of your poem. Your claim to fame now.
Well done and be proud my poet friend.
Alexi*Music2*.
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Review by Alexi
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like this poem and it has story that gives pace to the streaker and laughter all round with the peoples amuse
I can picture old wrinkly, bony Millie running for her life thinking probably that she is being chased by a former acquaintance. Perhaps the one who put her in the home in the first place.

When I get to the last line. It might just be me but I don't think it had the punch line that I expected. As I said it could be me. Sometimes I get a joke the next day when it is forgotten.

A nice poem and cleverly written.{e:smile]
Alexi{e:music2}
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Five Stars Jeff*Crown*
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Review of Magic Marbles  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ken. Now this poem is a *Star* I love it and oh such memories spinning back. Children today don't know what their missing until we come along and teach them the old ways.*Smile*
I love the way you lured the boy from the TV set. I can picture it as that's what they seem to do these days.
The language is so real, uh, ugh. It's like an alien with gobstopper in his mouth.*Laugh*
The first round. Marbles! now your kidding me.
Strategy round two. Your reeling him in.*Bowling*
He is hooked now, good job*Hook*
He is even enjoying it. The crowd cheers.*Partyhatr*
Father and son time*Crown*
The wife is happy, it's marbles.*Smirk*
Tiny spheres of colored glass and a priceless memory for all. It's a winner*Ribbonr*
and one for the memory *Bookopen* }
Loved it
Well done
Alexi*Heart*

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Review of Misty Morning...  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good morning Princess Zelda. I liked the way you wrote from the birds mouths and gave a picture of their home in the elevator shaft.
Sadness clouding the day as mother bird reveals her sad news of their offspring.
A nice poem and well done.
Also congratulations on second place. Shadows and Light contest.
I had third this time
Well done
Alexi*Heart*

Ps I wrote
 
STATIC
Chirpy's Gone to Sleep  (E)
A small bird
#1945399 by Alexi
about my little baby bird.
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Review of One Last Time  
Review by Alexi
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely poem and it connects with bringing up small children.*Duck*
If we had a pound every time we heard those words, we'd be rich.
Thank goodness the fairy dust gets the little angels and by some miracle they fall asleep and look so beautiful it warms our hearts.*Smile*
A lovely child's poem Amay.
Well done and write on.
Bubbles of ideas
Alexi Mason*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi I have just finished reading"I Used to Do the JitterbugI enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Yes, It brings back al the memories my Mum told me about all you gorgeous gals and guys. Those were the days.

Overall Impression/Emotional impact:
Fun and a memory lane trip.

Form Format, Rhyme and Meter {as aplicable):
All good

Artistic voice and imagery:
Totally believable. The arthritic pain and helplessness

Grammer, Spelling and Mechanics:
Good

Suggestions:

None.

*Heart*Thankyou for sharing"I Used to Do the Jitterbug

Reviewed by Alexi Mason Alexi

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Review of no body knows  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is such a devastating story in your poem. Your words paint destruction and torture. like a serial killer trying to destroy a soul that was not meant to die.
It must have been a horrendous moment that brought your soul to the point of such wanting. Such pain. Mental torture flashes of evil.

Stop! Rehab! Healing. I am glad that time has erased the pain and filled that soul with beautiful sanctuary.
Amazing soulful words expressing a memory best cleansed by heavens medication. Soothing balm of someone who suffered every sin on a cross he had to carry and understands.

Write on and blossom*Flowery**Flowerr*
Whispering love
Alexi Mason*Heart*
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Review of Family Album  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Pat It is a pleasure to look into your family life . The pictures of you all are a delight. Family is the breath we take and the substance that hope brings into our lives.
The last photo with your delightful grandson. His look says it all.
"So this is my family! Think you can do better."
a pleasure.
Oh, If that is you in the pretty grey dress then you are awesome*Heart*
Thank you for allowing me a look into your family album
Smashing and flashing
Alexi Mason*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is quite rhythmic and humorous. The naughty lazy King and his whistle and flute. I can see his servants and soldiers rushing around and making faces behind his back.
Peace and quiet when he slept. A jolly good tale.
Well done WM another success. *Rolleyes*
I like the little crown.
Alexi*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a nice little tale. true or not. Strange a cat comes in ghostly form. It must be very scary. I did have a ghost once of an old lady that used to live in the house and had since died. my husband didn't believe me and one morning The wardrobe on his side of the bed had a clothes hanger on it and it was moving up towards him and down again. Not from side to side as might happen.

my husband became a believer from that moment and I told him she was friendly. I spoke to her and told her to go three doors down as her husband had moved there.
She never bothered us again.
yours is a similar tale.*Laugh*
Nice one Ron
Alexi*Heart*
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Review of The Email's Tale  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Now I know how an email feel s when it is deleted and lost in cyberspace for ever. The one thing I would like to do is recover all those emails and cyphon out the good bits to write my stories with. With wicked eyes and curling lips I would make a meal of it. Peoples details of there lives. A best seller it would most certainly be.
A nice poem write. I wonder what happened to the husband.
Alexi*Heart*
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Review of Agony of Christ  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your words say it all. The centre positioning of your words + is like the cross.
Well done and well deserved BB
You did good*Star*
Alexi*Heart*
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Review of On My Own  
Review by Alexi
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In my heart this is a first. You seem to have learned(although every day in our Lord is learning) I will start again BB. You seem to have learned according to the words you have written in your poem, That you have clicked that the only way to success is to walk in his ways. That is so true. Does one know the work involved in walking in His ways. Unconditional commitment! I believe that the first step is prayer and finding yourself in Him. this takes time. It has taken me 33years to get to the place where I'm at with our Lord. Our Lord went to a quiet place when he needed to talk with his father and was always listening to him as he went about his daily work.
Problem!## Do nothing and get nothing solved.
Answer... The fervent(passionate) prayer of a righteous man/woman avails(benefits) much.
Only believe. It takes time for all of us.
Now... I am not perfect. I have procrastinated about a certain family ### problem and I have been the target for four years, being shunned because of a member of the family's lies. No-one has asked my side of the story and I have written proof that I am innocent. but as this is a spiritual battle, then it is my job to intercede. Something I have not yet done. I had two bereavements in my life and that weakened me enough to shut myself up like a snail going into his shell and not wanting to get involved with the outside. I am on the verge now of getting ready to intercede. This may take time and persistence on my part and Our Lord also teaches me/us in that intercession period. One previous intercession took six months. and in that time I was spat on, swore at, door slammed on my foot, called names, and letters, phone calls were torn up and ripped. I was shouted at in the market place by this same person and it was like looking at a snake.( I loved that person as Jesus loves) After six months of IC prayer one morning I heard a small voice say. It is finished and that day I went to the market and this person walked out of a shop and I put my arms up and she fell into my arms weeping. The spiritual battle was won. No easy task.
Your poem brings out this review. I hope it helps *Smile*

I will share this with you BB
I had a revelation from the Lord about the Bible

An acrostic for "The Bible" is ...

Basic
Instructions
Before
Leaving
Earth

I enjoyed your thoughts in this poem and Thank you.
Bubbles of joy from
Alexi*Heart*
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Review by Alexi
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A special lady Beautiful words.
Alexi*Heart*
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