sleeky_basileus's (sleekybasileus) Reviews

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#4637442

Review of Ungodly

Review by sleeky_basileus

Rated: E

| (4.5)

“Curiosity vanquishes fear
though a trickle may remain”

This line is so deep to me that I’m still ruminating on it up until yesterday. Great work, happy that I can share in reading it.

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#4637441

Review of LinnAnn in Uniform

Review by sleeky_basileus

Rated: E

| (5.0)

So beautiful

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#4606404

Review of A Taste Of The Past

Review by sleeky_basileus

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

"Snow flakes fluttering, twirling, falling through the air onto the mass of humanity."
When I read up to this point of your work, I felt that the sentence was so well arranged that it deserved to be quoted by journals. You did not only create an imagery of a bustling town with these few words, you took your audience towards the scene of one buried in snow. But I had to use my dictionary and noted that 'twirling and fluttering' are synonyms. Your audience's attention may wear off if they find so much repetition.

"He’d made himself useful, desperate to keep alive during those harsh winters when there'd been little to no food and many of the camp died from starvation. His parents and little sister amongst those destined never to see freedom again".

I would suggest " He'd make himself useful, desperate to keep alive during those harsh winters when there'd have been little to no food, while many hostages at the camp died from starvation. His parents and little sister amongst those never to see freedom again".

Thanks!

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#4596940

Review of Eggplant

Review by sleeky_basileus

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Thanks for the information.

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#4596938

Review of Silence will become me

Review by sleeky_basileus

Rated: E

| (5.0)

So emotional and deeply felt, this one. One has to move on with their life when their genuine actions are never returned from supposed loved ones. You sounded so real and true. Like it was a personal experience, though most of us find such in our daily lives.

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#4596937

Review of Mr. Von Dutch

Review by sleeky_basileus

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Really enjoyed your short story. Liked how it transitioned from normal to horror. I felt Heather's fear of being in a dark office hall searching for a file. Thanks, really enjoyed myself.

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#4493979

Review of Broken heart

Review by sleeky_basileus

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A great piece, and I enjoyed it to the later. But you should try putting it in versed form, for it will make a great work of poetry if rendered thus. I enjoyed the last part where you asked that unanswered question for centuries. Thank you and keep it up.