S.J - Not Around Much's (slime-j) Reviews

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60 Public Reviews Given
62 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'm honest when I review thing I'll say what's on my mind but at the same time I try to stay positive and will always tell you what you did right but this means in no way am I a professional reviewer so take my reviews with a grin of salt please
I'm good at...
looking at everything in a positive light even when telling you what's wrong I'll always tell you how to improve ranther then just telling you what's wrong I'm also ranther good at looking at storyline and seeing whether or not the story makes sense
Favorite Genres
My favorite genres are horror, psychological thrillers, mysteries and fantasy
Least Favorite Genres
My least favorite are romance and overly sexual or overly done gory feasts
Favorite Item Types
Novels, short stories and poems
Least Favorite Item Types
None
I will not review...
I will not review anything that uses sex/rape, harm against minors and animals as simple shock factors if you are going to include such topics please do them well and treat them with respect
Public Reviews
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Review of Slumber  

In affiliation with The Power Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem about insomnia and the struggles of it. As someone who suffers through the same problem I can relate to wanting to slumber like everyone else can.

The flow and pacing of the poem is perfect and there aren't any grammar mistakes that I can see.

Good job on expressing such a common torture subtly


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Review of A Horsewoman In My Dreams . . .  

In affiliation with The Power Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This a well written and funny story of your failures of becoming a cowgirl. As a fellow horse lover/cowgirl I understand the thrill and excitement of the wind blowing through your hair and the feeling of freedom that comes with it. Sadly I also understand the sadness of falling off the horse far too well.

The story was humorous and rather engaging and by the time it was over I wanted to read more.

There were no grammar mistakes, as far as I can see anyway, and it was paced perfectly.

My only wish was that there was more but in this case less is more.

Great good Ruwthy


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Review of Torment  

In affiliation with The Dark Society  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a confusing yet horrific tale of what can only be described as a girl going completely insane.

I adore the fact that you use so few different words they're mostly the same word repeated over and over again yet you feel so many different emotions.

Overall a disturbing piece which I would recommend reading in a dark room at 3am for max spok factor->slime-j


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Review of Artificial Intelligence  

Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
It's a good start to a story expect I noticed you placed a lot of full stops a the beginning and while I'm no expert that amount of full stops aren't normally required but other then that I enjoyed it and like your style of writing


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Review of Broken Clock, Crushed Heart  

Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a very true and enjoyable poem seemingly about a men's dying sex life a place everyone finds themselves in at a least one point in their life.

I would how ever would like to see a longer version of this poem.

How ever personally I think the ending is a bit weak so I recommend that you either try ending with a bigger statement or make the poem longer though this is just my personal opinion.


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Review of In The Shadow Of The Mountain  

Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I enjoy it was a nice read and the ending is a great twist though I would try adding in a way of identifying each character I personally only started writing a horror novel called the thing in the shadows and would be honor if you would review it thank you for your story and hopefully your time
Slime-j