|This is a great short story and it is rather assuming how one simple thought can evolve into something absolutely massive.
You mentioned in the story how you rubbed elbows with many stars. I for one would love to hear about some of the stars you knew and met.
The layout of the story is a little scattered and disconnected but you can still pull the point of the story out of the mess.
Overall an interesting story on how entertainers thought at that time and, while short, it got its point across pretty effectively. Good job and keep it up.