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Review by Soul mate's call
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, that was amazing, AND when I said amazing I really mean it. the rhyme is perfect. One can feel the music, the lyrics. Keep up the good work.
A gourmet taste for some succulent crab –
From oceans to bays, our fishermen nab

The starter lines of yours are cool too.
Best of luck next time and hope you don't catch the flu.
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Review by Soul mate's call
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Through the poem, I can sense the happiness in here. Isn't it amazing how we gather at family celebrations and fill our hearts with content? Your poem is amazing and full of warmth. I like it a lot keep up the good work. Write more with passing times.


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Review of The Friend Ship  
Review by Soul mate's call
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there, I am a newbie. Nice to meet you all.
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Review of The Oasis  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well done. Lovely description of a mother. Who leads the squad with love and courage. All the world is under his wings. All the children are under her shadow. Your work is a beautiful and amazing little poem you have written, all in all, it caught all the emotions in it.
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Review of A Truer December  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written. You have done a great job of writing it. Sometime's God takes way some things from us to give us better ones, other times to give back them in better shape. Your words show the emotions of the one who departs and meet back to live happy after.
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Review by Soul mate's call
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written, it seems to me that you like stones. Topaz is worth mentioning, It has a unique and beautiful color. When embedded in a ring its charm increases with glory. Your way of praising it is also unique, as you have written...
"They name you Topaz, assign you some worth.
But you are worthy of more.
No star that has fallen to Earth is more precious
then the light in your heart you have stored."
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Review by Soul mate's call
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
It's amazing, Wao!
Your perception of Jane Austen is remarkable. I also had read Pride and Prejudice, last month. Actually it was new year gift for me. When I am too much happy with my self I reward my self, it's now my habit. And I am very happy with it. It makes me feel good. So, for this new year gift, I bought my self 2 books. One of which I already have you. Your work is well written. Keep up the good work I will wait for the next Newsletter. Bye, Salut et bonne nuit.
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Review of Imagination  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's wonderfully written. Well done. Imagination is indeed the escape route for all. I almost felt for the part...
Gallons of freshwater I drink,
The vortex of miseries sink.
Wao, It would be wonderful if just by drinking gallons of water our miseries can sink. Then no one would have to be sad.
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Review by Soul mate's call
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your work has an honest message for the world to here. It is true that if one is capable then he/she does not need to feel helpless. The world will see their efforts eventually. Only adding certificates to resume will not help much in the long term. as what is demanded is the passion for work.
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Review of On Poetry  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem is well written and the message conveyed can be simply and is beautifully understandable.
Indeed poets brought the words from the valley of sensations and emotions, to express the world and thought to each other. Without bringing any offense to anyone. Poetry is expressed out from the hearts of poets.
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Review by Soul mate's call
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautifully written poem, loud and bold. This reminds me of the poem "Leisure". The words are different but there is one message in come for whole all people. That in this busy time one should not neglect himself and should admire nature, which nourishes the soul. Which helps us to relax and observe beauty. People are nowadays are work alcoholics, here and there like robots, unaffected by their circumstances.
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Review by Soul mate's call
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
It's a work of art. The main female character is bold which I liked the most.
The story is well written and every aspect is clear for a better understanding of the view.
One can say that people can gripe a new perspective of the world. It has ended the prejudice about the common view of people about women. The author has displayed the story well by using Joan's bold and confident character. The 40th chapter "Magic" made me wonder more, as it brought new creative ideas to think of for the readers.

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